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Reviewer: marvolo
Date: 01/24/06 22:10
Chapter: The night I died inside

EXCELLENT! It really has a lot of emotion and is beautifuly wtitten. TAKE A 10!

Author's Response: Thanks! I promice chapter 2 is in queue and i like it better than this chapter but please tell me what you think!

Reviewer: ginnylovesharry
Date: 12/28/05 21:05
Chapter: The night I died inside

I meant 'so' touching.

Reviewer: ginnylovesharry
Date: 12/28/05 21:04
Chapter: The night I died inside

This poem was sop touching. I loved it! It's in my favourites list because I loved it so much. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! oh mi wow! on your favourites list! thats just made my day! Chapter 2 is in queue should be up soon, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 12/20/05 18:27
Chapter: The night I died inside

That was short, but powerful! It conveyed so much emotion. The only thing I would suggest is fixing the summary to be more grammatically-correct.

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