EXCELLENT! It really has a lot of emotion and is beautifuly wtitten. TAKE A 10!
Author's Response: Thanks! I promice chapter 2 is in queue and i like it better than this chapter but please tell me what you think!
I meant 'so' touching.
This poem was sop touching. I loved it! It's in my favourites list because I loved it so much. 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks! oh mi wow! on your favourites list! thats just made my day! Chapter 2 is in queue should be up soon, thanks for reading!
That was short, but powerful! It conveyed so much emotion. The only thing I would suggest is fixing the summary to be more grammatically-correct.