Ooh, that was cool. Shows a side of Lucius that we don't usually expect or perceive. Well done.
I am surprised this story doesn't have more reviews! I've always enjoyed reading about the time in the Malfoy Manor before Draco attends Hogwarts, but I'm curious as to what sort of direction the story is going in, because I haven't really got any idea at the moment. One thing I'm not sure about is the part where Narcissa keeps her bedroom door bolted - in the books she seems pretty devoted to her husband, so take care to provide an explanation as to why she's doing this and appears to have hanged later on in the series. Keep up with the good work!
O wow! This is really touching and factual and plausible... are you going to write about draco's childhood or what steps lucius is going to take to protect him or both or neither? *whew* long sentence... 'nyway, i like how the story is in present tense, like its happening right now. update asap!!
that was good! i love how you incorperated the new book six information and made it in the past. keep writing. i cant belive i am the first one to review this. the other authors better get a move on! 10/10