So sweet! I especially love the quote you used.
I loved the last paragraph. Luna always seemed like the sort not to give in, but I suppose everyone feels close at one point, it's being able to latch onto something to keep you going that makes the difference. Anyway, this showed alot of the feelings and thoughts of those fighting a very long difficult battle, very well written.
One question, is there a specific person that is suppost to be the boy? Otherwise, I LOVED it!!
Awwh! This is so sweet! You did a wonderful job =) I love how it was poetic, it seemed even sweeter. And I also love how you had described things with ice! The quote also fits it so well, especially since it's from Luna's PoV! Oh, and is the other person Neville?
Possibly the most poetic prose I have ever read - its beautiful and has a lovely rhythm. Effective use of assonance, alliteration and repetition contribute to this. Not to mention the way in which the joy of such a moment is so well-communicated. The first story I've read here that has made me like it so much I want to review.
Meemo
It was alright but I had no idea who the heck Luna was seeing. Little more discription next time. Thanks
Luna and.....Neville? I dunno, it's hard to tell. But this is really good!
how sweet. I like how you only gradually reveal the identity of the characters.
Oh Oh
Is it Neville?? Is it????
Wonderful!
Love ya much, your annoying little reviewer, Bubs.
i absolutley love it.
dont think me stupid...but i havent figured out who the other person is..:s
but i still love this story...my faveee
Oh! Oho...
More muggle mystery please!
I loved it! so cute! The girl is Luna but who is the boy? I couldn't figure it out. Nevermind that, it was wonderful!
Wow that was cool! I love your style of writing, there's something about it...:P! Anyway, I know people have probably said this a million times before, but who was the boy?! I think it's a good idea that you never told us, but it's still pretty annoying not knowing, even if there wasn't a specific person. Maybe you intend for the reader to guess and fantasise at their leisure. Maybe I should shut up and submit this review!
cute very cute i loved it but who was the guy?
cute very cute i loved it but who was the guy?
great but confusing. who was that person?
was it harry and luna
was it harry and luna
Author's Response: haha, no, sorry. luna and neville :)
awesome!
Author's Response: thanks! my other fic, When Time Breaks Loose, is in the queue. read it!
