Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/04/12 20:53
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

So sweet! I especially love the quote you used.

Reviewer: darknessofnight
Date: 05/19/08 18:10
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

it's okay . . . .

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/11/08 22:43
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

I loved the last paragraph. Luna always seemed like the sort not to give in, but I suppose everyone feels close at one point, it's being able to latch onto something to keep you going that makes the difference. Anyway, this showed alot of the feelings and thoughts of those fighting a very long difficult battle, very well written.

Reviewer: sva123456
Date: 01/17/08 21:10
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

One question, is there a specific person that is suppost to be the boy? Otherwise, I LOVED it!!

Reviewer: Glittering_Pheonix
Date: 12/02/07 1:17
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

Awwh! This is so sweet! You did a wonderful job =) I love how it was poetic, it seemed even sweeter. And I also love how you had described things with ice! The quote also fits it so well, especially since it's from Luna's PoV! Oh, and is the other person Neville?

Reviewer: Meemo
Date: 10/25/07 9:52
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

Possibly the most poetic prose I have ever read - its beautiful and has a lovely rhythm. Effective use of assonance, alliteration and repetition contribute to this. Not to mention the way in which the joy of such a moment is so well-communicated. The first story I've read here that has made me like it so much I want to review.
Meemo

Reviewer: lonewolf150
Date: 06/17/07 19:28
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

It was alright but I had no idea who the heck Luna was seeing. Little more discription next time. Thanks

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 05/23/07 20:57
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

Luna and.....Neville? I dunno, it's hard to tell. But this is really good!

Reviewer: marieenigma
Date: 04/16/07 10:01
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

how sweet. I like how you only gradually reveal the identity of the characters.

Reviewer: bubble
Date: 04/07/07 10:10
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

Oh Oh
Is it Neville?? Is it????
Wonderful!
Love ya much, your annoying little reviewer, Bubs.

Reviewer: asifloveisit
Date: 01/13/07 18:44
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

i absolutley love it.
dont think me stupid...but i havent figured out who the other person is..:s
but i still love this story...my faveee

Reviewer: Fishka
Date: 10/22/06 22:40
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

Oh! Oho...
More muggle mystery please!

Reviewer: Gemma Hawk
Date: 10/22/06 14:34
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

I loved it! so cute! The girl is Luna but who is the boy? I couldn't figure it out. Nevermind that, it was wonderful!

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 08/29/06 14:59
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

Wow that was cool! I love your style of writing, there's something about it...:P! Anyway, I know people have probably said this a million times before, but who was the boy?! I think it's a good idea that you never told us, but it's still pretty annoying not knowing, even if there wasn't a specific person. Maybe you intend for the reader to guess and fantasise at their leisure. Maybe I should shut up and submit this review!

Reviewer: hermionek
Date: 06/21/06 13:06
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

cute very cute i loved it but who was the guy?

Reviewer: hermionek
Date: 06/21/06 13:06
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

cute very cute i loved it but who was the guy?

Reviewer: Arathi
Date: 06/02/06 13:30
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

great but confusing. who was that person?

Reviewer: infamousmarauder_5
Date: 05/01/06 17:16
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

was it harry and luna

Reviewer: infamousmarauder_5
Date: 05/01/06 17:16
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

was it harry and luna


Author's Response: haha, no, sorry. luna and neville :)

Reviewer: rosy_girl
Date: 12/06/05 11:28
Chapter: Melt the Ice of my Heart

awesome!

Author's Response: thanks! my other fic, When Time Breaks Loose, is in the queue. read it!

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