Reviews For Clair De Lune
Reviewer: ember
Date: 03/30/08 12:14
Chapter: Clues

ok im confused. i got everything but the part of siruis and remus in 1980. What was that about?

Author's Response: It actually wasn't in 1980. It was in 1995, right after Voldemort returned. At the end of GoF, Dumbledore told Sirius, "Lie low at Lupin's for a while." It's a scene I imagined from that time period.

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 03/25/08 16:44
Chapter: Clues

omg love it! i have just re-read your story and re-fallen in love with it! i can't wait to see some more h/r romance. also cant wait for the day at the flea market! update soon please! :D

Author's Response: I will try! Thank you. =D

Reviewer: Harry_Potter_Mom
Date: 03/25/08 1:03
Chapter: Clues

Lovely chapter and well worth the wait! I must say I was hoping you'd have a chapter up soon after the revamp here!

I don't know yet whether I want Hermione to choose to stay with Lupin and thus alter time completely, hopefully changing a few other things as well or whether I hope she runs home to Ron...

I really adore your Remus... he would definitely be one I would fall for out of the Maurauders (esp since James is married - lol).

I have this marked as a favorite so hopefully you'll update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, I really intended on updating after all the glitches were fixed. *nod* And Remus really is such an adorable, caring nerd. *siiiigh*rnrnThanks so much for the review! Next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: ByMerlinsBeard
Date: 03/25/08 0:11
Chapter: Clues

Well, finally. ;-) Now that that's out of my system, just wanted to send a quick note to say thanks for the update and for another job well done. Hope the next chapter comes soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, m'dear. =)

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 03/24/08 21:45
Chapter: Clues

I'm glad for an update! But I'm confused... I thought Remus knew that Jane and Hermione were the same person and that is why he wanted her to be sent back. Is he just putting up a front for Sirius or did he really not make the connectin? Perhaps this is all part of the mystery! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: No, Remus genuinely did not know that 15-year-old Hermione was indeed Jane Conway. He makes the connection later on. *nod* Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: saknicole
Date: 03/24/08 19:14
Chapter: Clues

I was so happy to see that you updated the story! Great chapter, I really liked the part where Remus told Sirius about Hermione being Janes daughter, it was really interesting to see what he thinks happened. Poor future Remus! I can't wait for more, even if it takes a while.

Author's Response: I will do my best not to make the wait that long. *shudder* And yeah, I loved writing that scene too. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 03/24/08 18:50
Chapter: Clues

so remus doesn't understand jane=hermione! and she has to look at remus's father's notes....I thought the note was from harry...
oh, excitement!! more, more, more! thank you!

Author's Response: A lot of people thought the note was from Harry, actually. ^^ Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: HP fanfic fan
Date: 03/24/08 18:02
Chapter: Clues

FINALLY!!! This was a great update, though I'm looking forward to more! Hope it won't be as long of a wait, though . . .
Anyways, keep writing!

Author's Response: I shall! Thank you. =D

Reviewer: nikkim602
Date: 03/24/08 17:50
Chapter: Clues

I am so glad you updated. I am still loving this story and cannot wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. =) I'll try to get chapter 17 out by the end of this week.

Reviewer: snowlessinfl91
Date: 03/24/08 16:06
Chapter: Clues

I'm sooo glad you updated this magical, amazing story. Awesome chapter. I love the movement between 1980 and 1995, with Sirius and all.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: xXRon_luverXx
Date: 03/24/08 15:15
Chapter: Clues

good chapter. Im DIEING to see what happens between her and Remus when she comes back to the future! DIEING! anyways, Remus knows it was really Hermione right? he didnt really think that was her mum. and he must not of cuz hermiones a muggle born

Author's Response: Ooh, good point. But we'll see how things go. Maybe Remus will wake up soon enough. Thanks for taking time out to review! =)

Reviewer: NoxSomnium
Date: 03/24/08 13:17
Chapter: Ode to the Beloved

The Tonks Remus moment was weird. Is he using her? Does she know that? Huh.

Author's Response: He's not using her; he just had Hermione/Jane on his mind at the time. =)

Reviewer: Tinks
Date: 03/24/08 13:01
Chapter: Clues

Wow, I didn't think there would be an update at any time at all- but I am so so glad that there is! You wouldn't believe it! Thank you so much! I really and truly love your story and I would appreiate it so much if the next wait weren't as long as this has been. But after all, it definately WAS worth it!! Great job there.
And Remus Lupin doesn't know? I always thought he did know but that the others didn't. If he in fact does not know that it's Hermione, he must at least have assumptions, doesn't he? He must!
Anyways, take care!

Author's Response: I will try my very best not to make you wait that long. I've already got chapter 17 in the works. *nods* =) And, to answer your question, well... you'll have to stay tuned to find out. ; )

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 03/24/08 7:51
Chapter: Clues

Yay! A new chapter! I dunno if I've ever reviewed, I probably have but just in case I haven't, let me just say this is one of the coolest stories around. I'm so so glad that you've updated, it made the perfect easter present! =)
So the plot thickens and you leave your readers being driven to (or close to) madness by thinking about what the future holds for our favorite characters in this particular story.
I loved the Sirius/Remus scene in 1995, I thought that it tied in really well. I love how you've managed to make a story about time- traveling seem so... real and believable. A thing that's not often achieved. You should be proud of this story! Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking time out to review! I really loved writing that 1995 scene, actually. I love Sirius and Remus's interactions. I'm glad you liked it! =)

Reviewer: MoldueMiji
Date: 03/24/08 6:45
Chapter: Clues

It was very good!!! Please, don't make us wait to long before the next chapter... Good work...

Author's Response: Thank you! I will try my VERY best not to make you wait that excruciatingly long. Count on it. =)

Reviewer: rjlcool
Date: 03/24/08 3:42
Chapter: Clues

this... chapter... made... me... CRY!!! :(( one of THE BEST chappies I've read :) OMG, i wonder if the 1995 Remus & SIrius that it was Hermione Granger all along that Remus had fallen in love with after all... ohh, dear... i've been waiting so long for this chapter!:) please update soon, too! this story is WORTH THE WAIT. :) keep up the marvelous, brilliant work! :)

all the best,

Author's Response: Thank you so much! No, they never realized it. Poor Remus... =(

Reviewer: Painfullystoic
Date: 03/06/08 7:37
Chapter: He's Harry's Dad

I hope you don't abandon this, I loved this story... I've checked back for updates EVERYDAY for the last 4 weeks.

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 02/29/08 13:38
Chapter: He's Harry's Dad

please, when are you going to update? this is such a good story, It really excites me.

Reviewer: Pels
Date: 02/07/08 15:19
Chapter: He's Harry's Dad

Great great story! Remus and hermione are just cute, please write more soon? I loved it!

Reviewer: rjlcool
Date: 02/01/08 4:09
Chapter: He's Harry's Dad

*waiting for an eternity already*

when are you going to update the next chapter??? i really really LOVE THIS STORY!!... i want to know what the ending will be... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

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