Reviews For Clair De Lune
Reviewer: IwishIwas_Ginny
Date: 08/25/06 9:02
Chapter: Surrender

Oh my goodness. Please update soon. This is turning out to be an amazing story!!

Reviewer: miss padfoot
Date: 08/12/06 6:33
Chapter: Surrender

Lei, this is an absolutely amazing piece of fiction, dear WerePrefect!

To be honest, when I began to read Claire de Lune, I was skeptic because Remus/Hermione isn't my cup of tea. And frankly, the vast age difference scares me, but this one is totally different. After I had read the first few lines, I was intrigued immediately and now, after ten chapters, boy am I glad (more like 'over the moon' lol) I found this.

It's your style of writing that keeps me interested throughout. The plot is a common one but your style has made it extra-ordinary and kudos for that.

The way you write dialogues (especially between Remus and Jane) is witty and natural that it makes the characters come alive.

Now, just to annoy you, here's a little typo:

Hastily, with all the strength he could muster, he grabbed one of her hands and held it tightly.

The 'of' is missing. ;)

Anyway, this is one rockin' piece of work, and I beg you to update soon, or you might have to face this badger's wrath. Thanks for a magnificent read!

Author's Response:

"The way you write dialogues (especially between Remus and Jane) is witty and natural that it makes the characters come alive." --> *blushes profusely* Thank you SO much. If there was one aspect of writing that I really care about and really put a lot of effort into, it's dialogue and characterisation. If ever, this sort of compliment really gives me a really warm and fuzzy feeling because it addresses what I care about the most when it comes to writing technique. Thank you.

Whoops. I really should fix that typo. >.<

I will update sooner, I promise. I dare not face any badgers' wrath. O.O I'd be too scared of my own people.

Again, thank you SO much, my dear. You just made my night. :)

Reviewer: ravenclawslion17
Date: 08/01/06 10:46
Chapter: Surrender

LEILEI! My gosh! This is SOOO amazing! The characterization is spot on with both of the characters, Hermione's reaction to Remus saying "I love you" is perfect, and wow this is just SO GOOD!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was anxious about people's reactions towards that particular scene, but I'm really glad you liked it. : )

Reviewer: FanficWriterNikki
Date: 08/01/06 0:10
Chapter: Surrender

Every time I go to read this story the window pops up telling me that it's not suitable for younger readers and usually I'll feel guilty if I keep reading, but with this story I ignore it because I love it too much.

I never thought I would ship Remus/Hermione, but I really do now. This was a terrific chapter. I loved how you described everything so well and also gave us a little more information about Remus's past. I was so excited towards the end. I was ready to leave you an all-caps, very fangirlish review. But then I finished the story and I was angry at Hermione. I liked how you ended it though. While I would've been happy with you having Hermione tell Remus she loved him and then them snogging like mad, I think your ending fit better. But poor Remus.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job, as usual!

Author's Response:

Omg, I get a review from Nikki?! *SQUEE*

I had reasons for the rating. ;) But not in sexual aspects at all. The rating was more for the graphic violence, since there's going to be a lot of that in this fic [I personally found Remus's transformation very, very disturbing].

I tried to soften the transformation scene by inserting that little flashback because otherwise, that particular part would be too gruesome. And yeah, Hermione's not the most likeable person right now, even in my book. She'll come around soon enough, though. :)

Thanks SO much for taking time out to review! I really appreciate it. :) *huggles*

Reviewer: XxmegeoxX
Date: 07/31/06 22:12
Chapter: Surrender

Aww....poor Remus.

I absolutely LOVE this story! It's original and completely understandable at the same time. I can almost feel the love growing between them. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you!! Honestly though, whenever I sit down and plan the plot, I often get headaches because the plot is so damn complicated. I'm glad you can understand it. : D Thanks again!

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 20:58
Chapter: Surrender

oh my gosh oh no is she giong to tell him. his poor heart is been broken once again. please continue writing. i must find out what happens next.

Author's Response: I know, I feel so bad for him. :( I was honestly close to tears when I wrote that part, but it had to be done or my writing conscience won't stop bothering me. *sigh* Chapter 11 will be up soon. Thank you SO much for reviewing every chapter! *gives cookie* :D

Reviewer: nikkim602
Date: 07/31/06 20:34
Chapter: Surrender

thank you, thank you, thank you for updating. i LOVE this story. and the cliffhanger - oh my goodness. keep up the good work. i can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: *blushes furiously* Thank you so much!

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 20:29
Chapter: Clair De Lune

wow that was so beautiful at the ending i loved it. what sirius said about remus's broomstick was also very funny.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 19:56
Chapter: Close

woah must keep readung. story very pretty.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 19:34
Chapter: Confessions

wow must keep reading your story has put me in a reading trance. thets what good storiescorrection great stories do to me.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 18:57
Chapter: Sunset

that was so suspenseful and moving i hoppe harry's parent's are alright. And the end was positivly beautiful.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 18:09
Chapter: Ode to the Beloved

that was nice i have to keep reading.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 16:15
Chapter: Unexpected Meeting

oh my gos ican't believe this is happening.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 15:52
Chapter: Relegare In Praetor

you are awesome i can't wait to continue.

Reviewer: MaraudersGirl731
Date: 07/31/06 15:22
Chapter: Surrender

omg.. that was too short of a chapter.. plz update soon!

Author's Response: *sigh* It had to end that way, I'm afraid. :( Chapter 11 will be up soon. Thank you!

Reviewer: booklady
Date: 07/31/06 11:53
Chapter: Surrender

I love the story so far. I hope you write more soon.

Author's Response: Chapter 11 will come sooner than this chapter did. Thanks for taking time out to review. :)

Reviewer: GreenB
Date: 07/31/06 11:36
Chapter: Surrender

OMG that was awesome!!! been waiting a while for the update, it was SO worth it!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 3:26
Chapter: Foreshadowing

woow so good must keep readimg.

Reviewer: joyheart
Date: 07/31/06 3:08
Chapter: The Amulet

woah, this is so exciting. can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: CornBread
Date: 07/31/06 0:54
Chapter: Surrender

wow.. okay not fair.... you cant just stop there!! thats not nice!!!! Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: *sheepish smile* Sorry, but I had to end there. It isn't my favourite ending, but it had to happen. Chapter 11 is in the works as I type this. Thanks for reviewing!

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