*a dying traveler crawls through the Sahara, clothes torn, lips split with the heat...she reaches out her hand toward the mirage ahead...*
"Updates......" she croaks in a harsh, dry voice, before falling to her face on the unforgiving sand.
*fade to black*
Oh i loved this chapter. Best yet. Please hurry with the next chapter.
CUTE! WAY addicting. I love it! Update!
i have a feeling that Hermione isn't gonna come back tomorrow... or maybe she will and that's when she gives him the ring and leaves... does Hermione tell him anything about the future???
Hey, I just wanted to write a review for you, because I've always read the story and made up the reviews in my head but never actually written them. So here is it. I just wanted to say you are absolutely fabulous! You've done a fantastic work till now, and your updates have also been frequent. I absolutely love the story, its not just another time-turner romance, its really something special. I loved the new chapter and i love your style. Thank you for being so great... *wink*wink*
So just... Keep up the good, no great, no fantastic and totally genious work, and ummm... when's the next chapter coming? I cant wait to read it.
Author's Response: Aww thanks! I haven't started work on chapter 18 yet, but I'm pretty sure I'll be able to write a fair amount this weekend. =)
I simply loved that chapter, and I especially loved the ending. I can't wait for you to post the next one.
First of all: relatively fast updates FOR THE WIN! =D
Secondly, I'm so glad Hermione's finally just letting go and enjoying her time with Remus. *Grins stupidly* They're so adorable. When's the sex coming, woman?! ;)
And Snape. And Peter. Ugh and FAIL to them both. Especially to Peter, to be honest, because in this story I always feel for Hermione's struggle as she attempts to behave as if everything's normal when he's around. I don't possess her willpower. I'd've AK'd his ass by now. I loved the story-telling at the end. It was a nice moment for the two of them to share. But you want to know my hands-down favorite line?
Hermione leaned forwards to kiss him, but he pulled away, eyebrows furrowing.
“You bribe me with food and seduction? What’s wrong with you?"
L.M.F.A.O. HAHAHAHA LOLOLOLOL oh geeze, possibly one of the best lines I've read in a long while.
Author's Response: A) Who said there was going to be any sex at all? >.>; B) Peter fails at life, I agree; and C) Remus is a dork, anyway, since he bought into the whole bribing thing. ;)
wonderful chapter, I love seeing modern Remus, it's so sad. Cute Remus and Hermione scene too.
Author's Response: Thank you. =)
Lei, I can't even describe how much I love getting e-mails that tell me you've updated your story. I'm not sure what I'm the most excited to read: what happens with the amulet, what happens between Remus and Hermione before she leaves, or what happens between Remus and Hermione after she gets back to the present. I'm also very curious if Hermione will be in the past when the Potters are murdered. Don't tell me--make us all wait until the new chapters come out. :-)
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Haha, I shall, don't worry. ;) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much. =)
Another great chapter, it makes sense for Hermione to be seen by as few people as possible because they'd probably still remember her in the future. Pettigrew makes my skin crawl, but I suppose if i were ignorant of his betrayal I'd be as taken in as the rest. I wonder how Hermione will find the amulet, I mean she seems to be concentrating more on Remus at present, I feel so awful for him, wonder if when she returns to her own time they'll start where they left off, or would that be too weird? Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Hermione needs to find balance now. It'll be difficult, but she'll do her best. Thanks for the review. =)
this was such a great chapter!!! i absolutely love your story and i can't wait till the next chapter comes out!!! Please hurry!! =]
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try. =)
I love you. =]
I love the story, and I liked the tale of his entrance into the world of lycanthropy. I can't wait to see how this works out. The plot is definately one that isn't "expected", or at least I don't see an expected turn..=]
Author's Response: Yeah, I really liked writing that interaction. Remus is so adorable. Tee hee. Thanks for the review!
Oh Wow this fic is absolutely fantastic!!!!!!! I love the idea of the amulet and it's being able to cure lycanthropy and the way it's destroyed and oh it's just so fascinating! I also think the struggle Hermione, sorry Jane is going through is brilliantly written, and it must be so frustrating because she can't fully explain her misgivings to Remus and so he's feeling slightly rejected. Pettigrew gives me the creeps, I can't read a marauder fic without his betrayal tainting his appearances in it. Somebody should write an AU fic where he didn't betray the Potters and we can like him. Anyway, I'm loving the experience Jane is getting with Harry's family, and those letters she's getting them to write were a lovely idea. I only hope she gets chance to give them to him. I can't wait to see if or when she gets back to the future, if she and Remus pick up where things left off, or if there'll be more flashbacks from Remus at the point where he realises Hermione wasn't Jane's daughter but Jane herself. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
Lei, how have I never read this fiction before? I don't understand it! You are a truly amazing writer and this fiction is one of the best I have ever read. The emotion and plot in it are just amazing and it could fit into the books so amazingly I just can't believe it :) I can't wait for the next installment, what happens to Hermione??
You know I love the Ron/Hermione ship, thank you for adding that in, I really didn't think I'd enjoy a Hermione/Remus fic but you've sold me. This is definately something to read over and over and you totally deserve all and any awards it receives. *loves to her Badgery buddy* ~ Roxy
O_O OOOhh! VERY good! Nice twists. Poor modern day remus. :( UPDATE now!...er...sooN!
Finally updated!!! Yay!!!!! The new chapter is really good. Keep updating!
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, for finally updating. I was thinking that I would never see this chapter. It is trully amazing and now I'm hooked. See now you have to get the next chapter up soon or deal with me(the price you pay for being a great writter)
=^.^= Lots of love, Angela
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! =) I'm working on chapter 17 at the moment. Remus is being tetchy, but I'm sure I'll be able to reign him in eventually *shakes fist at him*.
SO much love, in fact. You haven't lost your touch at all! You are clearly infallible. I thought the dialogue between James and Remus at the start of the chapter was particularly well-written. With you, it's really all about the attention to detail. The smaller things that adorn the writing itself, like Remus' scent of firewood or "snidgets" or a specific way you word a sentence. Those "little" things, I think, are what make your style as captivating as it is.
Now you'd better get to work on chapter 17, because I and the other reviewers will revolt otherwise. It was probably a bad idea to show me where you live. ;)
Author's Response: Hmm... no, I still think it was a VERY good idea to show you where I live. That way I get a visit from you, regardless of the reasons behind it. ;)
What a great birthday present. I was so surprised you updated. Very nice little flash forward. Can't wait to see how it all comes together in the end. Hope you update sooner than later lol.
Author's Response: I'm on it! Thank you. =)