i read this story tons of times and im still not bored of it. its very interesting in the way its written (in a good way) and the plot isnt customary
that was a cute story
I loved everything about this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! ^^ You have no clue how happy it makes me when I hear that people liked this story. =)
Hi, Ivona Queens!
I just wanted to drop in and say that I loved this story. Arianna was an amazingly believable character. I liked how you gave her different personality traits- determination, for one. Arianna was afraid of flying, but she did it anyway. She was afraid many times during her friendship with Charlie, but she kept going and it paid off.
There was no doubt in my mind, throughout the entire story, that you had almost climbed into Arianna’s head- Charlie’s too, for that matter. You kept true to what we know about Charlie from cannon, but gave him more of a personality than what we see in the books.
Anyway, back to Arianna. She would stand out in a crowd of people even if I was five miles away. You knew exactly what she was like and how she would react. You never contradicted yourself- I’ve read fics where people talk about how smart the character is, but then they write a scene where the character fails a test they studied for. Or where a character is just so brave, but then they are too scared to face something slightly scary. Arianna was scared, yet determined, the whole time. She was persistant and kind, funny and confident. There was never one instance where I said, ‘Oh, she shouldn’t have done that! I thought she was ___!’. Great job, and I can’t wait to start reading the sequel!
Author's Response: Oh, wow! *bows* Thank you!!! Ari was much easier for me to write, partly because she's a girl, and partly because she's my own creation, so I don't have to follow the rules of cannon. I think that we really start to see Ari's character when she asks Charlie to stop calling her 'Arianna' - by using her full name, she's still hiding her personality. With a nickname, she's more herself, and you can know her better. I hope you like the sequel!! =)
That was pretty good. I think it could've been better, but it was really good. I know Charlie isn't too popular, but you portrayed him well. There were some mistakes, and some akward situations, but other then those- it was good. :=)
Author's Response: =) Thank you!! I know it could have been better (I mean, it isn't perfect - far from it, actually), but I'm still happy with the end result, since this is my first-ever fanfic. ^^ I'm glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! ^^ I'm working on the sequel right now (it's called "Ultimate").
Noooooo! It can't end! PLease write a sequel. PLease! You HAVE to! Wow, brill story. 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/10
Author's Response: Don't worry - there WILL be more Ari/Charlie stories (a few one-shots, maybe even another series) but not at Hogwarts. I'm going to let them enjoy their relationship in peace at school. ^^ Thanks for the review, I'm really happy you liked it!
Really good chapter and story!!!! It was so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm happy you liked it! ^^
wait. is it over? im confused. anywayss. that was soooooooooo cute! and if it really is the end, then i loved it!
Author's Response: Yes, that was the ending! I'm glad you liked it - you have no clue how happy that makes me!
I read ur e-mail......... if thats what u want then oj, but i should say you should explain/give more detail on Levia and her grudge, it was just getting really good in this chapter. Maybe in the future (their future) have her still having a grudge etc. Just an idea. Once again i shall give you ur mak out of 10. Let this shock ur math teacher. lol. 90000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 (and its shiney and purple!!!)
Author's Response: lol, my math teacher is rather elderly, so I think this will give her a heart attack! Once again, I thank you for being an extremely loyal reader, and look out for more Ari/Charlie stories!
WOW! that was amazing! It was soo cute and fantastic. I hate Levia, i can't believe she would do that, just because Ari was a better beater than her!! They kissed! They kissed! THEY KISSED!! Yippeeeeee! It was awesomley done! i loved it!!! It was cool the way you had all those maybe's. It was fandabadosi!! I cant wait till after the hols when i can show this chap to all my friends! (takes a breath of air) ....and i simply loved it when Ari was teasing him before they kissed. It was sweetly romantic but in a real life way. I LOVED IT!! I can't wait till the next chapter. I am simply hopping with anticipation!! I hope you put a quidditch practice in soon, it would be great to see her fly on her silver arrow! Thankyou for helping me through boring days and school! You have been amazing! (and so has this fic) Keep writing!! This is a breathtakingly awesome fic! 90000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 (and its big, shiney and gold!!!) p.s Did i mention i liked this fic? lol!
Author's Response: I think I'm going to show that number to my math teacher and try and figure out exactly what it is! lol. I'll keep writing, maybe some Ari/Charlie when they're in the future. It would be interesting to see them after Hogwarts! Thank you for being a loyal reader! ^^
Lol! maybe it will get you out of detention! Just to let you know our english lessons have become much more fun now. We get to read your story in class and say what we think about it. Its fun...thanx! i have even become quite popular now cos of ur story! lol 20/1
Author's Response: Woah! I never thought my story would have such an impact in other places! ^^ Yay!
lol! i read ur answer for my last review on this chapter! it was great! Of course i have a good lung capacity...i mean i read this to all my friends at break time in school! lol! Glad you liked the review. But its all true to let you know! 2000000000000000000000000/10
Author's Response: Wow...I never thought my story would have so many readers offline! *is amazed*
I know I have said this before but I just read it again cos it's so good and I just can't believe how good this is! 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 :P This also appeared on the 1st chapter reviews for some reason...:P
Author's Response: *finishes counting all the 0's* Erm...I think I'll just call the number infinity! lol. Thanks!
I know I have said this before but I just read it again cos it's so good and I just can't believe how good this is! 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 :P
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! *starts counting all the 0's*
Wow, I love this fic!! Really looking forward to updates, I have never read one with Charlie, but I love it!! The story is completely believable, very very very believable, and I love Ari as a character. 100 out of 10 for you!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks a ton!! ^^ I'll try to keep it as believeable as possible throughout the entire story.
I know i pay attention....i know i pay attention.....but i cant stop myself....!!!! HELP!! I need this fic! I am getting obsessed with it...help! Even my english teacher has read it now, i brought it into school (cos i had printed it off) and me and my friend were reading it and she grabbed it off us and we got out of detention cos she loved it so much....(takes a breath before starting again).....thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou!! And not just the fact that you got me out of detention but the fact that this fic is stuuning!!!! 2000000000000000/1
Author's Response: Hey, cool - I never got someone out of detention just by writing before! I'm glad that she likes it too. ^^ lol, that's the funniest story I've ever heard. =) Maybe I should carry a copy around...maybe it'll save me from detention too!
--in response to the first review i gav for this chapter---- Awesome? of course this story is awesome, what else could it be? Well it could be......wait for it....... Awesomely, dramatically, magnificently and absorbingly super romance with dazzlingly, beautifully, gobsmackingly wicked detail and drama not to mention the spectacularly, dramatically, outstandingly, stunning story line with exceptionally, staggering and stupendous, fluctuating characters….and …well I could go on for hours (heehee, couldn’t resist!) Lol!! try saying that really fast! AMAZING FIC!! KEEP WRITING!!
Author's Response: Wow...you said all that in one breath? You've got great lung compacity, lol. Wow, I think I'm going to print out and frame this review...thanks!
I was just looking through your reviews to see how you had replied to mine and i noticed that you had none for this chapter. Just for the heck of it and not to make this great chapter lonley here si a review! I--L-O-V-E--T-H-I-S--C-H-A-P-T-E-R!!!!! lol 20000000000 (and its shiney!) / 10 (and the ten is very dull and dusty)
Author's Response: ^^ I was beginning to think that no one liked this chapted. I'm glad to see that it finally has a review! lol.