ok but did peter do that cuz he liked lily 2 much or sumthin?real good tho =o)
aww i feel so bad for poor ugly peter
Author's Response: exactly what i meant you to do =)
Poor, poor lily! all those ppl who like her...
this has to be the most tangled story i have read. i absolutely love it!!! please, update really soon.
good plot -- a little jumpy, from character to character, but generaly understandable
Awww poor Peter, what a mess! I like the way your showing all of the boys trying to work through their feelings, and Lily getting a new female friend is good. I hope everything works out!
I like this story. It's got lots of situations that I have never contemplated before. I also like the various points of view. You should do an update soon.
Author's Response: I love incorporating different points of views because I feel it makes a story more valid. I'll try to update soon, school just ended. Thanks for the review!
Wow... That's so cute! I love how you play Peter. James read Peter'd diary! Well that's a little girlish so jernal. Hehe. I love the Marauders! I can't wait to read the next chapter so please try to update soon... I understand that it will be hard but please try to get a new chapt up soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! School's out now so I should be able to update soon. I liked giving Peter a journal 'cause I liked making him seem sort of quiet and left out.
Everybody is falling in love w/ eachother! GAH! lol! crazy!
Author's Response: Haha, I hope it's not too confusing!!! I wanted a love triangle and ended up with a sort of love polygon. =]
Interesting... Update soon!
Author's Response: Hope you liked it, thanks for reading!
Heh, you peg Sirius' impulsiveness so well here--of course it wouldn't be too forward to throw her in the lake! I like how he's annoyed with Miranda's whining and pouting but doesn't hesitate to use her for a quick snog when the urge arises. Good imagery, especially when Sirius is contemplating Lily's stomach in the sunlight... Love how his thoughts keep roaming back to where he knows they oughtn't be :) 10/10
Author's Response: Heh, thank you very much. Sirius is my favorite maurader, James in a close second.
Awesome story! Personally, I think that you're view of Peter is quite interesting! I've never thought of Peter liking Lily though. Please update when you can! 10
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I thought it would be interesting to incorporate Peter's views as well. I feel that people leave him out too much because he's the "bad guy", but it's important to remember that at the time of the Marauder's friendships, Peter hadn't done anything wrong.
Wow it's getting suspenseful!!! Hmmm... aint half bad! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!! =D
Wow, that's amazing! The fight between James and Sirius, when has that ever happened? I personally don't feel bad for Peter, he is pure evil, but if I didn't already feel that way, I guess I would feel somewhat bad. But, it is his own fault for putting it somewhere where it could be seen. Great job! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. =) I really liked writing this chapter, and I'm going to get the next one up as soon as I can, but this should be a busy week... Thanks again for reviewing.
Haha, too many people liking other people, just kidding. Otherwise its great. update soon.
Author's Response: I hope it's not terribly confusing! I wanted a love triangle and ended up with a sort of hexagon thing. =]
Not too shabby... i just noticed a few things: one, isn't the spell for getting rid of your potion "evanesco"? also, remus is from an all-wizarding family. otherwise, me likie! update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for pointing out my mistakes! =) Sorry 'bout that.
Very cute chapter, and Peter liking his friend's girlfriends seems like the kind of tag-along thing he would do. I can't put my finger on it, but something seems to be missing... I don't actually know what it is though.
Author's Response: I actually had that feeling when I submitted this chapter. Ah well, I'm sure whatever is missing will turn up somewhere. =) Thanks for reviewing.
I loved how you did this! I noticed you kept the perfect thing in, but it looks right so I don't care. I loved what you added about calling Petunia and her Mum. Great job! Best chapter yet!
I liked it! Okay, let me get this straight, Lily loves and James loves Lily, but Lily also loves Sirius, she thinks. Airius loved Miranda, too. Peter (evil!) also loves Lily. Lily and Remus have known each other for a while. Did I get all of that right, or am I missing someone? Anyways, without my slight confusion, it was really good! Please update soon!
Author's Response: You got it right!
Lily: loves James but is pretty sure she loves Sirius too, has known Remus since they were younger
Sirius: loves his girlfriend Miranda, also loves Lily
James: loves Lily
Peter: loves Lily
Thanks for the review! =)
This is malfoysmistress under another name. Once again, I must agree with lilypudding (but i must disagree, sisky... sry a little something for lilypudding ^_^) Sirius wouldn't tell Remus so quickly that he liked Lily. A bit ooc there, eh? It's ok... update soon