Reviewer: vampyre_girl
Date: 01/17/08 18:10
Chapter: Voldemort's First Attack

hmmm... just saying, but i thought people were afraid of saying "voldemort". wasn't it supposed to be "you-know-who"? don't get mad at me. *cower*

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/25/07 19:03
Chapter: So Sudden

I'm enjoying this story so much, I just have a few queries. Firstly, wasn't Ron's girlfriend sorted into Ravenclaw, if so, why was she in a class which was for Gryffindors and Slytherins only? And if Voldemort already knows about Draco and Hermione, why do they have to stop going out, surely it'd make no difference if they carried on? Oh, and why was Lucius Malfoy at the school, was it as a governer or was he not meant to be there? Sorry, I'm a bit dim and need everything spelling out. If I had the chance to send JKR reviews like this I'd have repetative strain injury and my ? button would be worn out.

Reviewer: blupen
Date: 11/07/07 1:24
Chapter: The End.

This is the best fan fiction EVER!!!

You should write another one!!

Reviewer: hermionelove
Date: 09/07/07 13:14
Chapter: The Talk of the School

I'm sorry, but this story is pathetic. I'm going to stop reading it.

Reviewer: hermionelove
Date: 09/07/07 13:07
Chapter: Dumbledore's Request

Okay, I know you hate constructive comments, but they really are necessary. I've read the beginning of the next chapter - and I'm not satisfied with the way Dumbledore gave them his request. Just "You'll see?" I think it would be a lot better if instead, for instance, he told them to become a public couple to promote Inter-House relationships - as everyone looked up to the Heads. But I found the way Dumbledore explained his request quite stupid. I'm very sorry.

Reviewer: DracoxHermione101
Date: 08/28/07 2:13
Chapter: The End.

omg awsome story!

Reviewer: Announcer_of_Monkeys
Date: 08/14/07 19:45
Chapter: A Shocking Announcement

Everyone is WAY too OOC!!!

Reviewer: panget
Date: 08/12/07 3:03
Chapter: The End.

nice story!!!

Reviewer: cmedina2002
Date: 08/06/07 14:28
Chapter: The End.

She said yes, right?

Reviewer: HermioneMissGranger
Date: 08/04/07 21:12
Chapter: The End.

Alright the story was good but i hated the last few chapters because it was unreal. dumbledore letting harry and draco just go on to face voldemort ? voldemort just being defeated by harry and found so easily by this "wonder map" dumbledore got ?
i mean this is lord voldemort we're talking about dont you think it was a little easy, and the talk about it just made me feel like i was in a cartoon.

Reviewer: redsoxluver
Date: 06/20/07 13:15
Chapter: The End.

Does she say yes i have to know. anyways i loved your story i seriously think you need to write a sequel about the reast of their lives.

Reviewer: redsoxluver
Date: 06/17/07 17:23
Chapter: A Very Sweet Night

I love this story!

Reviewer: redsoxluver
Date: 06/17/07 16:19
Chapter: Dumbledore's Request

i like the way you think!

Reviewer: dracoswifey
Date: 06/10/07 15:42
Chapter: The End.

sequel please???? this is amazinggggggggggg

Reviewer: lunaluver1189
Date: 06/03/07 22:09
Chapter: The End.

It was good! Well Written. I was confused in a couple of places, but I figured it out eventually. It was a really addicting story. I LOVED it!!!!!

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 05/31/07 17:45
Chapter: Old Friends Return

Good, but it all seems very rushed! Keep going!

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 05/31/07 17:41
Chapter: A New Beginning

The plot has been developed somewhat by the likes of this chapter. However, you have a bit of OoC going on, or so I think. Narcissa seems a little too careless. She seems to nice--I would expect her to be a tad more snippy! But it's your fiction. Good start!

Reviewer: feltonfav93
Date: 05/11/07 17:55
Chapter: The Plan Goes Into Action


Reviewer: Scarlett_Sienna
Date: 05/10/07 10:11
Chapter: A Rocky Start

eh i ALMOST stopped reading when you wrote "im samantha baracudan..." but figured it'd get better...then i scanned the next page and seen that those 2 characters are going to be popping up a lot so i stopped. Nothing bad to your fic im sure its good im just not interested in new characters especially when one of them is based on the writer.

good lcuk with future stories though.

peace. :D

Reviewer: cutegriffindor
Date: 12/30/06 12:42
Chapter: A Shocking Announcement

Normally I would have told/asked about Voldemort and stuff like that, but now I'll just ask you that - Do you really have TWO boyfriends !?!..

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