hmmm... just saying, but i thought people were afraid of saying "voldemort". wasn't it supposed to be "you-know-who"? don't get mad at me. *cower*
I'm enjoying this story so much, I just have a few queries. Firstly, wasn't Ron's girlfriend sorted into Ravenclaw, if so, why was she in a class which was for Gryffindors and Slytherins only? And if Voldemort already knows about Draco and Hermione, why do they have to stop going out, surely it'd make no difference if they carried on? Oh, and why was Lucius Malfoy at the school, was it as a governer or was he not meant to be there? Sorry, I'm a bit dim and need everything spelling out. If I had the chance to send JKR reviews like this I'd have repetative strain injury and my ? button would be worn out.
This is the best fan fiction EVER!!!
You should write another one!!
I'm sorry, but this story is pathetic. I'm going to stop reading it.
Okay, I know you hate constructive comments, but they really are necessary. I've read the beginning of the next chapter - and I'm not satisfied with the way Dumbledore gave them his request. Just "You'll see?" I think it would be a lot better if instead, for instance, he told them to become a public couple to promote Inter-House relationships - as everyone looked up to the Heads. But I found the way Dumbledore explained his request quite stupid. I'm very sorry.
Everyone is WAY too OOC!!!
Alright the story was good but i hated the last few chapters because it was unreal. dumbledore letting harry and draco just go on to face voldemort ? voldemort just being defeated by harry and found so easily by this "wonder map" dumbledore got ?
i mean this is lord voldemort we're talking about dont you think it was a little easy, and the talk about it just made me feel like i was in a cartoon.
Does she say yes i have to know. anyways i loved your story i seriously think you need to write a sequel about the reast of their lives.
sequel please???? this is amazinggggggggggg
It was good! Well Written. I was confused in a couple of places, but I figured it out eventually. It was a really addicting story. I LOVED it!!!!!
Good, but it all seems very rushed! Keep going!
The plot has been developed somewhat by the likes of this chapter. However, you have a bit of OoC going on, or so I think. Narcissa seems a little too careless. She seems to nice--I would expect her to be a tad more snippy! But it's your fiction. Good start!
WHAT??? I CAN'T BELIEVE U CHANGED HARRY'S GIRLFRIEND!!! HE AND GINNY WERE MEANT TO BE!! DUH
eh i ALMOST stopped reading when you wrote "im samantha baracudan..." but figured it'd get better...then i scanned the next page and seen that those 2 characters are going to be popping up a lot so i stopped. Nothing bad to your fic im sure its good im just not interested in new characters especially when one of them is based on the writer.
good lcuk with future stories though.
peace. :D
Normally I would have told/asked about Voldemort and stuff like that, but now I'll just ask you that - Do you really have TWO boyfriends !?!..
