Reviewer: Dieing_Hope
Date: 12/29/04 1:56
Chapter: Hermione Granger, Kidnapped?

u must update soon or ill die not knowing! im so scared for hermonie

Reviewer: Hermione2008
Date: 12/29/04 0:54
Chapter: Hermione Granger, Kidnapped?

awesome update sooon

Reviewer: TotallyClueless
Date: 12/28/04 21:41
Chapter: Hermione Granger, Kidnapped?

I don't know what to write (this is a good thing). All I know is that you have to update ASAP so I can find out where Voldemort took Hermione.

Reviewer: TotallyClueless
Date: 12/28/04 21:32
Chapter: Hermione Granger, Kidnapped?

to get to next update so quickly!'s not like I don't want you to though...

Reviewer: ms_potco
Date: 12/28/04 16:43
Chapter: Hermione Granger, Kidnapped?

it's a great story! it's a bit akward tho. you would expect dumbledore to close the school of or even split up the classes to make sure that no one talked. it's akward because no one seems to care that HE-WHO-MUST-NOT-BE-NAMED actually came to hogwarts and took hermione. and wouldn't there be more of a panic and wouldn't draco be frekin out right now? i don't know what your intentions are but they should be showing more emotion. not to be mean i love this story it's just a bit akward.

Author's Response: My intentions are to be a kept a secret. The story is supposed to be a bit awkward at times. You'll find out what happened later. :)

Reviewer: _xSolostx_
Date: 12/28/04 11:49
Chapter: Hermione Granger, Kidnapped?

aww how sad...update soon this storie rox :)

Reviewer: ThaHalfBloodPrincess
Date: 12/27/04 20:04
Chapter: I Don't Give a Damn

That was soooo good but u just had to leave a cliff hanger didnt ya!? oh well but you better update soon i mean really soon!

Reviewer: Hermione2008
Date: 12/27/04 18:36
Chapter: I Don't Give a Damn

i was getting all excited and then you had to ruin it! jk i love this story update soon

Reviewer: ckvlostinHD
Date: 12/27/04 18:04
Chapter: I Don't Give a Damn

i really like this!!!!!!! update asap!!!

Reviewer: Dieing_Hope
Date: 12/27/04 15:49
Chapter: I Don't Give a Damn

You just had to have a cliff hanger huh? oh well great chapter and update soon!

Author's Response: Of course I had to have a cliffhanger! :)

Reviewer: TotallyClueless
Date: 12/27/04 12:20
Chapter: I Don't Give a Damn

*gasp* who entered the great hall? was it---I don't want to guess! I wan't to know!!! Update as soon as possible!!! Rating =10! This was a great update!

Reviewer: _xSolostx_
Date: 12/27/04 11:37
Chapter: I Don't Give a Damn

oooohhh i wonder who it is......GREAT STORIE PURE AWESOMENESS! UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: xGemmax
Date: 12/27/04 8:31
Chapter: I Don't Give a Damn

oooo a cliff hanger evil :P

Reviewer: xGemmax
Date: 12/27/04 8:26
Chapter: I Don't Give a Damn


Reviewer: JenWiz
Date: 12/26/04 21:02
Chapter: Plans for the Halloween Ball

okay, this is really beginning to get on my nerves. 1) Draco a.k.a. Malfoy is supposed to be cruel. 2) ignore #1 - even though he's cruel, i suppose yes, maybe he could actually be "nice", but really, sleeping in class? 3) He is a SLYTHERIN a.k.a. evil people a.k.a. Voldie's supporters a.k.a. all right, if they're not cruel, yes they might actually be kind like in what you're story says, and even though they may be dumb a.k.a. Crabbe and Goyle, they've still got to keep their sanity 4) Santiy for a Slytherin means ATTITUDE - even if Draco & Hermione are dating and they're true to each other now...4) otherwise it was a pretty good story, but remember: SHOW not TELL. To show someone is to allow the reader(s) to VISUALIZE what the author(s) is writing/typing. However, TELLING is to only directly tell your audience what it is the writer(s) is thinking/imagining in their own mind. 6) Why not true using indirect writing instead of direct writing - using actions and thoughts instead of just telling the reader about who the characters, place, plot, etc. is like? You've already used a lot on Draco (yay!), but try to use it more on Sam & Bri. Otherwise, excellent job!

Author's Response: Whatever.

Reviewer: fourleafclover
Date: 12/26/04 5:52
Chapter: The Halloween Ball Begins

I loved it! Please keep updating! (Going on my favorites!) Mention more about Draco and Hrmione, please!

Reviewer: weasleygurl
Date: 12/26/04 0:32
Chapter: The Halloween Ball Begins

I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I am sure it will be great! Good job on the first seventeen I might add!

Reviewer: senora_jurgums
Date: 12/23/04 14:14
Chapter: A Rocky Start

i thought its kinda weird were r crab+goyle y r the 2 grls so happy if they r in slytherin?+just the hole thing is weird

Author's Response: If you don't like it, then leave. Duh.

Reviewer: slytherin princess
Date: 12/23/04 5:50
Chapter: The Halloween Ball Begins

brianna should stay out of draco's sight! If ıt goes on like this the story'll turn into a Draco/Brianna fic. lol .. anyways pls update asap and ı'm still clueless about whay u let herms and draco give up eachother so soon..

Reviewer: Dieing_Hope
Date: 12/23/04 0:03
Chapter: The Halloween Ball Begins

Boys are such hornbags! anyway most the guys i kno dont even bother to put on a nice shirt and it takes me at least a cupple of hours to get ready. great chapter. update soon:)

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