that story was amazing!!!! personally i think you should have written more about after but it was really sweet!!!
keep on writing!
great story
i love it!
you needed to add stuff about the future i would have loved that
That last bit was completely random and AWKWARD ! But cool.
You make Draco sund so mentaly helpless. I love it!
I love it, its so sweet and romantic and it all made sense, woooo, i loved it. u rock, go you, write another one, go u, go u, good job, go you, go you, buh bye now. go u go u
I love it, its so sweet and romantic and it all made sense, woooo, i loved it. u rock, go you, write another one, go u, go u, good job, go you, go you, buh bye now. go u go u
It was cute.....a little too predictable, but really believable....but cute.. i liked it.
it was a good romance fic and all, but it just seemed too easy with voldemort and such. besides that though, i liked it. Indeed.
loved it make a sequel please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hey, that was a ReAlLy cute ending... good job!^_^
O.M.G!WHO ARE YOU AND HOW DO YOU KNOW MII CUZION!! matt weston, i'm his cuz ..... nd who is sammantha.... nd do you like him??? hmmmm..... next time i see matt, i'll make sure to ask him about you two...oh yea almost forgot, your a really good author, one of mii favs. on this site^^...byz byz~lyndz~
O.M.G!WHO ARE YOU AND HOW DO YOU KNOW MII CUZION!! matt weston, i'm his cuz ..... nd who is sammantha.... nd do you like him??? hmmmm..... next time i see matt, i'll make sure to ask him about you two...
that was a realy good fic it was completly perfect as far as im concerned perfect ending though it was predictable it was still VERY good please do a sequel as soon as you can and what someone said about talking about a wedding is a good idea if you want to
I agree with Harriet Potter about the 'Big Fight' but hey! This is a Love Story! I Loved the ending! good job!
good story, but it was too predictable and the 'big' fight wasn't big at all. they all seemed too happy and making jokes when they were defeating voldemort which is a big deal...........the ending was really sweeeet! :)
I have a question, did you put this story in the Harry Potter website fan fic. ?because I think I read a story like this in there. Oh, and love it!
Author's Response: Yes, I did. This fanfic was also on the Harry Potter Dialogue Center Fanfiction Message Boards.
ahh. it was so good. i will not so pasonitly wsiting for the sequal. (p.s. i really cant spell. but i think you catch my drift.)
Not bad.. I few errors and i little predictable(sp?). Besides that it was good. 7/10. I'l watch for the sequal(sp)( i only had 3 hours of slepp i can't spell at the moment)
Author's Response: Ha. I knew I'd have errors. I knew it. I always have errors... hehe, yeah, this response was kind of pointless, but, you know, whatever. It was fun..
it was beautiful dispite the fact it was fairly predictable. u almost had me in tears and i will be watching for the sequil. Bravo!!!
you almost had be in tears. Happy tears of course. i can't wait for the sequeal! have it out soon