That was a cute ending
Nice! so funny hoe that worked out.
Didn't think of Dumbdore coming out with that.
Good twist it's getting good
A little confusing but still good
Good opening I can't wait to read on
I love, Oh my God, You do like me! Great story so far
good for malfoy i loved this chapter
:D You wrote really well, just one thing. Voldemort is the second greatest wizard of all time, after Dumbledore (May he rest in peace), and after all the struggles Harry Ron and Hermione have been through to kill him, he died too easily. Also Draco didn't feel nearly as upset with Hermione being kidnapped as he should have. And one last thing, Voldemort is pain evil, he wouldn't leave Hermione alive for so long. But other than that your writing skills and style are really good and I can't wait for a sequel.
VERY good story! You are a very talented writer. I hope you make a sequel. Keep up the good work!
Hey, just read your author page! YAY Wisconsinites! Me too! Go cold weather! Hoo Ha!
Very fluffy and adorable. Unlike others, I actually rather liked the transfer students in the story because it brought a sense of your own creativity to the story, though there were a bit to many of them, it was somewhat confusing. Very good story in all, I liked reading it. For future writing projects though, go into a little more detail instead of jumping from one part to the next. Then the story will really pop out! Think of it this way, a peanut butter sandwich is yummy right? But add bananas and it's filling and delicious! Keep up the writing.
thought it was ridiculous, way too ooc and what was with the american characters??!!!
awwww that was a very good fanfiction, i really enjoyed it!!
holy jesus!!! what the hell!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
this is a good fanfic btw! i'm really enjoying it!
OMG I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THAT STORY!!!
i read it in like 3hours
AHHHHHHHHH COMPLETELY FANTASTIC!!!!
he sooooooo shuddnt hav trusted em!!!
i dont!!! l0lz
I loved this story! It was really good!
yay!! love your story!!
ok. the whole 'introduce myself into the story as the cute american' thing is so cliche its dead. no one wants to read about an american in a BRITISH story. its lame.