Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 12/20/10 16:26
Chapter: The End.

That was a cute ending

Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 12/20/10 15:28
Chapter: A Very Sweet Night

Nice! so funny hoe that worked out.

Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 12/20/10 15:16
Chapter: And So It Begins

Didn't think of Dumbdore coming out with that.

Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 12/20/10 14:53
Chapter: A Rocky Start

Good twist it's getting good

Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 12/20/10 14:46
Chapter: Old Friends Return

A little confusing but still good

Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 12/20/10 14:42
Chapter: A New Beginning

Good opening I can't wait to read on

Reviewer: lilyputt
Date: 01/01/10 18:32
Chapter: A New Friendship

I love, Oh my God, You do like me! Great story so far

Reviewer: lilyputt
Date: 01/01/10 18:05
Chapter: Old Friends Return

good for malfoy i loved this chapter

Reviewer: Kyouko
Date: 12/18/09 7:50
Chapter: The End.

:D You wrote really well, just one thing. Voldemort is the second greatest wizard of all time, after Dumbledore (May he rest in peace), and after all the struggles Harry Ron and Hermione have been through to kill him, he died too easily. Also Draco didn't feel nearly as upset with Hermione being kidnapped as he should have. And one last thing, Voldemort is pain evil, he wouldn't leave Hermione alive for so long. But other than that your writing skills and style are really good and I can't wait for a sequel.

Reviewer: smileyreader
Date: 04/26/09 17:25
Chapter: The End.

VERY good story! You are a very talented writer. I hope you make a sequel. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Blackfairy
Date: 02/05/09 17:28
Chapter: A New Beginning

Hey, just read your author page! YAY Wisconsinites! Me too! Go cold weather! Hoo Ha!

Reviewer: Blackfairy
Date: 02/05/09 17:26
Chapter: The End.

Very fluffy and adorable. Unlike others, I actually rather liked the transfer students in the story because it brought a sense of your own creativity to the story, though there were a bit to many of them, it was somewhat confusing. Very good story in all, I liked reading it. For future writing projects though, go into a little more detail instead of jumping from one part to the next. Then the story will really pop out! Think of it this way, a peanut butter sandwich is yummy right? But add bananas and it's filling and delicious! Keep up the writing.

Reviewer: loopyloopylupin
Date: 11/12/08 4:58
Chapter: The End.

thought it was ridiculous, way too ooc and what was with the american characters??!!!

Reviewer: xohplovr94xo
Date: 07/31/08 10:27
Chapter: The End.

awwww that was a very good fanfiction, i really enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: xohplovr94xo
Date: 07/31/08 9:03
Chapter: Dumbledore's Request

holy jesus!!! what the hell!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
this is a good fanfic btw! i'm really enjoying it!

Reviewer: Flying_Pheonix
Date: 07/21/08 16:24
Chapter: The End.

OMG I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THAT STORY!!!
i read it in like 3hours
AHHHHHHHHH COMPLETELY FANTASTIC!!!!

Reviewer: katousha63645
Date: 04/11/08 23:35
Chapter: Old Friends Return

he sooooooo shuddnt hav trusted em!!!
i dont!!! l0lz

Reviewer: dancingwithneville
Date: 04/10/08 19:18
Chapter: The End.

I loved this story! It was really good!

Reviewer: All_things_fiction
Date: 03/07/08 15:13
Chapter: The Plan Goes Into Action

yay!! love your story!!

Reviewer: ellienellie111
Date: 01/25/08 18:45
Chapter: Old Friends Return

ok. the whole 'introduce myself into the story as the cute american' thing is so cliche its dead. no one wants to read about an american in a BRITISH story. its lame.

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