I read this about a month ago, but just found it again now and decided to drop a review! Beautifully written. So, so sweet. Good job!
Very cute. *smiles*
Love it! :)
Good concept. I could see Ron saying those things - maybe not exactly at a funeral, but then look at how quickly they got over poor Cedric. They were laughing and having a good time within days! (in the movie at least) So yeah, good job.
yes that was fantastic. You couldnt have made them act any more human. I knew exactly the was Ron felt as he looked at her while she was crying, and i know exactly the way Hermione felt after he kissed her. It was perfect. It was beautiful. It is what I hope happened to Ron and Hermione during the book when we were with Harry and Scrimgeour. Perfect 10/10. Superb!
Amazingly and beautifully written, better than J.K. herself (did I just insult Jo?). So good I almost cried, it's just a perfect way to start molding their relationship together. 10/10
This was just...so sweet. And really nicely writen. I love that you took a moment out of HBP and showed it from a different perspective. Well done.
sheer brilliance comes in small dosages. wow, I sound like a fortune cookie. that was brilliant. I think it would make a great continuing story, but I wouldn't mind if you left it at that, I really wouldn't.10/10
oh! good story. please update really soon. i'm looking forward to it. ;p
That's soooooo sweet. Please update. The whole plot fits in perfectly with the book 6 plot. (Yet again....awwwwww)
Aw! Loved it! It was soooo beauiful! Keep writing romance fics, ur brill at it!!!
Ahh! That's sweet. I am rereading book six right now and just read that part last night. Hope you continue the story.