Reviews For One Step
Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 08/24/06 13:52
Chapter: One Step

I read this about a month ago, but just found it again now and decided to drop a review! Beautifully written. So, so sweet. Good job!

Reviewer: FreetheElves
Date: 07/20/06 11:50
Chapter: One Step

Very cute. *smiles*

Reviewer: punim_potter
Date: 06/12/06 20:45
Chapter: One Step

Love it! :)

Reviewer: Monster Book of Monsters
Date: 04/26/06 23:20
Chapter: One Step

Good concept. I could see Ron saying those things - maybe not exactly at a funeral, but then look at how quickly they got over poor Cedric. They were laughing and having a good time within days! (in the movie at least) So yeah, good job.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 03/08/06 0:13
Chapter: One Step

yes that was fantastic. You couldnt have made them act any more human. I knew exactly the was Ron felt as he looked at her while she was crying, and i know exactly the way Hermione felt after he kissed her. It was perfect. It was beautiful. It is what I hope happened to Ron and Hermione during the book when we were with Harry and Scrimgeour. Perfect 10/10. Superb!

Reviewer: chochang1994
Date: 12/10/05 12:43
Chapter: One Step

Amazingly and beautifully written, better than J.K. herself (did I just insult Jo?). So good I almost cried, it's just a perfect way to start molding their relationship together. 10/10

Reviewer: Hermione816
Date: 12/09/05 14:08
Chapter: One Step

This was just...so sweet. And really nicely writen. I love that you took a moment out of HBP and showed it from a different perspective. Well done.

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 12/08/05 17:44
Chapter: One Step

sheer brilliance comes in small dosages. wow, I sound like a fortune cookie. that was brilliant. I think it would make a great continuing story, but I wouldn't mind if you left it at that, I really wouldn't.10/10

Reviewer: popcorn
Date: 12/08/05 7:53
Chapter: One Step

oh! good story. please update really soon. i'm looking forward to it. ;p

Reviewer: HermioneHair
Date: 12/06/05 13:58
Chapter: One Step

That's soooooo sweet. Please update. The whole plot fits in perfectly with the book 6 plot. (Yet again....awwwwww)

Reviewer: x_xblushing_babex_x
Date: 12/06/05 11:28
Chapter: One Step

Aw! Loved it! It was soooo beauiful! Keep writing romance fics, ur brill at it!!!

Reviewer: Ronmione
Date: 12/06/05 8:23
Chapter: One Step

Ahh! That's sweet. I am rereading book six right now and just read that part last night. Hope you continue the story.

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