Loved it! I could def. see this being book 7! Its written sooo well! That cliffy is AMAZING! I can't wait to find out wjat happens next! 10/10..more if it was possible!
I LOVE this story! It's fabulous! I rate it a perfect 10. You have great skill! I litteraly screamed at Harry when he did all the things he did! You HAVE to update, im losing my mind! GREAT story!
I love this story! Its sooo well written! I could def. see it as the next book! The cliffy at the end of this chapter is KILLING me! Can't wait to find out what happens next! Luv it! 10/10..more if it was possible!
I love this story! It so sad when Harry pushes Hermione back. What a cliff hanger! Can't wait 2 read more. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm running out of ways to tell you that THIS STORY COULD BE ON THE BOOKSHELVES RIGHT NOW AND ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT!!!!!!! *bashes head on wall* i cannot figure out what hermione's dream meant! will you please explain it in later chapters (and please, keep 'em coming)? it must be something like... she hates seeing harry so sad and... his soul and his eyes... EXCELLENTNESS. if that's a word. and if it's not it has just been invented to describe your writing. i actually screamed. that's how suspenseful it was. you describe everything- the setting, characters- so well i can SEE IT IN MY HEAD. when harry pushed hermione back (that must've torn her up inside) it was just... perfect. THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU, you just made my day a whole lot happier!!!! KEEP WRITING OR I WILL TRACK YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU TYPE THE REST!!! *kidding...ish* 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 stars. you deserve every one of 'em!!!!
please update soon!!!!I want 2 knw wat's next!!!I just luv this story.It's really good dat I can't blame myself 4 thinking you might be J.K. Rowling herself.Keep up d good work
Simply amazing. This chapter was so intense. I can't believe how big a cliff hanger that was!! I LOVE your story soooooo much!!!! The word "fine" was ingenious it amazed me! You really get lost in the your story!!! When Harry was deciding what to do I wanted to scream NOOOO HARRY!! DON'T DO IT!!! I can't wait for your next chapter!!! Can't wait to see more with Harry, Hermione, and Ron!! Once again your story is simply AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. I give it the same rating infinite/10!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! What a review! *blushes* Yeah, I have to admit it was quite painful writing Harry's decision... but of course, not near as bad for me, since I know what's going to happen. ;) Thanks again love, next chapter's for you! :)
I find myself having difficulty coming up with different ways of saying how much i love this story. I wasn't sure how much longer I could wait for a new chapter, but my patience paid off apparently. I was really looking forward to this story going on for awhile so I hope that Harry's meeting with Voldemort doesn't mean an ending within a chapter or two. Regardless, it still shaped up to be a really good chapter. Keep it up and I hope to see some more romance between Harry and Hermione. P.S. I'm gonna take a guess at Hermione's dream and say it was about why Harry won't admit that he has something for her. That's my guess, so don't berate me too badly.
Author's Response: Awwwww thanks so much!! *beams* No, the end of the story will not be within the next couple chapters. In fact, I'd say we're about half-way through right now... possibly slightly more. Anyway-- your guess about Hermione's dream was a very good one! You almost hit the nail right on the head... it does have to do with that, yes, but if you remember, she asks, "is it me?" So she's wondering if Harry's sad, pleading looks he's been giving her aren't because of the war, but are because of her. *sigh* There will be more HHr on the way... oh yes... *snickers* Thanks again Darth! You're a fantastic reviewer. :)
This chapter is positively amazing. It's intense, powerful, compelling... The emotion is so thick! I wanted to scream, "Harry! Don't do it!" But he had to, didn't he? That one little word -- "Fine" -- gut wrenching. I can't wait to see how this all plays out. Again, brilliant writing in every aspect.
Author's Response: *HUGS* Thanks very much, Suz! I'm positively thrilled you liked this chapter! I was soooooo, so worried, because I feared everyone would be expecting lots of HHr romance, and instead got Voldemort, LOL! But I'm glad you felt the emotion of it-- that's really what I was going for. From the bottom of my heart, thanks again. :)
Ahh Sadie, first of all, I already freaked out on you when I first read this chapter, so I'll keep that aspect of my review to a considerable minimum. Let me do the technical stuff first before moving on to the fangurl aspect.
Okay, so first of all, your writing is again, fantastic. I found no hitch in the flow at all and your descriptions are exquisite and picturesque. This chapter is angsty yet again, but you managed to insert some humor into it (Harry saying he looked sad because his soul got sucked out of his body). I think that's a great bit of foreshadowing there for later events in the chapter. Kudos to you on that!
Your theory on Harry becoming a Horcrux itself is something I've heard of, but never really thought about. As I read this chapter, I kept thinking, Oh yeah, that makes SO much sense. I can't wait to see where you take this idea. It is, yet again, a mark of brilliance, my friend.
Now, to the fangurl part. I'm Queen of Cliffies here, not you; don't you dare dethrone me! ;) Just kidding... but honestly, you couldn't have placed a more...heartwrenching cliffie. I can really imagine myself wringing Harry's neck right now. You'll have me on tenterhooks for days after this, young lady! Which is a freakishly hyper sentence for: 'this was awesome, amazing, and really, really well-done, and I can't wait for more.'
Book signings are in your future, dear. With your creative ingenuity and flawless writing skills, you'll go very far in your writing career. And rest assured that I'll be first in line wanting your autograph. :)
Author's Response: *TACKLEPOUNCE* THANK YOU!! Wow, what incredible words from one of my most favorite authors! *blushes* I'm glad you liked the "human Horcrux" bit... I'd heard theories about it myself, except I'd always heard that Harry was already a Horcrux... and most of the people I asked about that theory didn't like it at all. But, I put a spin on it and prayed for the best. It's not something I've seen elsewhere, so hopefully it'll get more respect than the "original" theory. Very happy it fit together for you, too... it was hard explaining it through Voldemort. I didn't want him to go OOC. The cliffie was pretty deadly, wasn't it? Ahh, well, I learn from the best! ;) And if there ARE book signings in the future (*crosses fingers*) I know you'll be right beside me, signing just as many. :)
Good story! I love it so far, write some more! Quick!
I reread it it and I liked it better the second time! Your writing is just so incredible! Please continue writing and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Wonderful chapter. You definitely captured Ginny's character; great job on Hermione and Harry as well. I like the way that she is so close to Harry, she knows so much more about him than Ginny. The part at the end was especially beautiful writing, their feelings are comepletely tangible. It was better than a kiss, it definitely felt more real than a snogfest. Once again, WONDERFUL chapter!
Hey, great fic you have going on here. I've added it to my favs and I'm definately going to be checking for more updates. I think this is my fav Hermine/Harry fic that I've read so far. Keep up the good work!!!
Very Good Story! Well Written. I agree with your thesis about the distance between Harry and Hermione in HBP. I have this idea that maybe Harry was mad at Hermione for being right about not going to the MoM. If Harry had listened to her, Sirius wouldn't have died. When Dumbledore talked about Percy not forgiving the rest of the Weasley's because it was easier to forgive someone for being wrong than for being right, I think he was also talking about Harry and how he might treat Hermione. Then there was the old Potions book. Without Hermione's help Harry would never have gotten an E in potions, and she ended up getting replaced by an old book, some thanks. Well back to your story. Can they hop over the chasm using their brooms? I liked the way you put Hermione on Harry's broom. A little forced physical contact is good for them. Hermione did play Quidditch in HBP and she flew around after the keys in PS/SS. Do you really think she's afraid of flying? If so, it puts her Quidditch playing in a whole new light. As for Ginny, well poor girl. She got a few weeks of kisses from Harry, she'll get over him.
Once again you amazed me! Your writing is just so beautiful! I like how Harry and Hermione getting together. It's not like other fics where they just fall in love, this one is actually real! I love your story sooooo much! Think about writing professionally! Update soon! I give it an infinate/10!
By the end of half blood prince, the magic had left the harry potter series. Your concrete storyline and dialouge has given me the glimpse of excitement i receieved reading gof for the very first time. Writing is a craft and I hope you continue to share your ability to your fans.
Amazing writing as always. I'm really glad you managed to post another chapter, I was dying for more. That one moment with Harry and Hermione was just so well executed, it really got me believing they were gonna come out with their true feelings and kiss, but the way you wrote it made the story that much more believable. The characters are actually working for relationships instead of it just sort of happening, at least I think I interpereted that right. I feel as though once you complete this story, that this will be the alternate version of book 7. Keep it up, I'm always looking forward to your next great chapter.
I reviewed in the last chapter and this was going to be much of the same thing really, great story, great romance, excellent plotline, you've written Harry really well, and keep it up. The only thing I've got to add is that i really liked that scene where Harry and Hermione were talking
That was absolutely perfect! I wouldn't want anything else to happen. Not even a kiss. I'm SO glad that you're hinting on the Hhr-ness instead of plunging head first into a snogfest. This way when the kiss does come, you feel the characters have worked for it. Perfect. You're writing is fantastic, and your words flow very well. Also, your plot is building very nicely. I am impressed. I love your story and can't wait until the next chapters unfold. Update soon.