I really enjoyed this I hope you finish it
Wow! this is such a great story! extremely well written! i cant wait to know what happens next! i hate when i read a good fanfic and its unfinished! i know its been years since this has been update, but i hope you update this soon!
Good gracious, the tension is killing me! I started reading this story a long time ago, when you first started it. Between the end of high school and starting college, I got out of reading fan fiction. Finding myself with a bit of free time this semester, however, I got back into it. And I kept remembering this scene from a really awesome fic that I'd started reading forever ago.
The scene was from this story, when they're in the field and Harry and Hermione are standing in front of the abyss on their way to Azkaban. To this day, I can't say what made that particular scene stick with me, but it did. And it took me quite a few days, but I eventually found this story again, and I'm so glad I did! You write beautifully, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
omg it's been YEARSSSS since you last updated! i can't believe such an amazing story has suddenly been abandoned! i simply love this fic! probably the best H/Hr ever! i can't tell you how deeply saddened i am. it's been years since i came across a well-wriiten H/Hr, and now that i finally found it, it's unfinished. *sighs* typical. why oh WHY do i always end up liking fanfics that are always incomplete?!! rarely do i encounter stories which i loved and finished. such a rare combination. oh well.... it really is such a terrible waste... i pray the day will come that you will come back to your senses and finish this thing! yah! :)
I have always thouhg tHarry a little thick. Even in Rowlings books, I thiught he and Hermione should have wound up together.
Not exactly the way it played out in Deathly Hallows but close. Veery interesting.
To often Harry Potter fans forget Hermione is a girl,brilliant, but still a girl with all the emotional baggage as any one else. I praise your courage in portaying her as such.
So typical of Harry, gaurding his heart and feelings from all.
How old are you to have such insight? I am constantly amazed at the way the people on this sight see into the human pyshic.
I am new here so I've just read your FF... but I would just like to plead with you to complete it... This is an excellent story and I'm dying to know how it ends. I know it's been forever since you've updated... but please, please finish it. I can tell from the reviews you've received that everyone loves your story and would like to see its completion... Hoping for an update...
It's been FIFTEEN months since your last update. This is my fifth review for this chapter, and hopefully my last. Its not fair that something as great as your work goes unfinished, but JKR's crap gets finished and she gets paid for it. I can't really give up hope that you might update, so I'll sit and wait. This probably makes me delusional, but I've been called that before and I will wear that title proudly. I will forever beg for an update. You really have to finish this. Please.
A hopelessly delusional desperate reviewer.
YOU EVENTUALLY HAVE TO FIINISH WHAT YOU START!!! this is very well written but it doesn't change my anger... cause its not done. okay im not angry... just extremly dissapointed.
very romantic, with harry and hermione strugglig to keep their emotions at bay, its a very touching story, i hope you keep doing this story, i want to see what happens, im sure it will be just as sweet as it is
I understand that they'd need Harry's permission for someone to be secret keeper of his property, but how does that explain Ron's kidnap? Was the Weasley house just considered part of the order too and so they didn't officially give their permission for a new secret keeper? I still think Charlie acted oddly that night. I don't like this Azkaban rescue mission either, surely Harry and Hermione going there is out of the question? Theyve no where near the experience of the aurors, surely they'd be better matched against Malfoy and his bruisers? Also, the firebolt, if Hermione followed Harry and took Wormtails curse, who fetched the firebolt? Oh, and when Harry asked Hermione to promise to run, same thing Dumbledore asked of him i might add, i don't remember her actually agreeing.
I really like the lyrics at the beginning of the chapters. I knew Hermione would follow Harry, shame they hadn't accio'd the instructions Pettigrew dropped either, and why had he waited around, why didn't he just dissapparate and read the parchment somewhere more pleasant? Were those his instructions? And poor Ron, with the dementors! I think it's awful of Harry and Hermione to be thinking of each other, they'll really hurt Ginny and Ron. Sorry, I'm a happy ending seeker.
OOOO!!! I could just punch Harry, he didn't even cast the disillusionment charm before he went. And how's Hermione going to find the firebolt it's invisible! And God was I suffocating with panic while they were both so close to all those death eaters. I keep getting the feeling that Snape is still a double agent, but maybe that's just because i want him to be. Wormtail owes Harry, I hope he remembers that.
I love how you've shown by the last bit between Harry and Hermione that the trio know one another so deeply. Harry said Lupin didn't understand, do you suppose the marauders didn't have such a oneness because they didn't experience Voldemort at so microscopic a level? What if the death eaters and Voldemort torture Ron or read his mind and find out they know about the Horcruxes? Charlie was a little odd in the first chapter, do you think he's a double agent or something? And how does Harry know he can trust Lupin? And I really hope nothings going to happen between Harry and Hermione because that'll just complicate things evern further.
I think Hermione is a true friend, giving an honest opinion is the mark of that. If we pretend to agree with a friend, we aren't even being true to ourselves and so aren't being true to them. Also, Why didn't they all just apparate out of their? I know it's their house, but whats that in comparison with having everyone safe and together? Sorry, I do this when reading anything, asking why and inventing what if's are my favourite passtimes. Brilliantly written.
Secretkeeper, its been 9 months, and I think that you've given up this story. It looks like your not finishing it, and I'm so sad because this was easily my favorite story despite the fact that it wasn't finished. I want you to know that your one of the best authors ever.
A very depressed reviewer
This is a really great story! Please Please update. I'm dying od suspesion.
I really love how you developed Harry and Hermione relationship, i really wan to know how the story progresses, pls update