Wow - I love the ending.
Wow. so dramatic. So well thought out. I LOVE it!
Wow (closes mouth) omg that was wow im speechless great job i love that angle that must have been really hard to right.Excellent!!
Abso-frickin'-lutely amazing!!! Going on my faves!!!!!!
Wow...that was AMAZING!!!! I just read it, and I was left absolutely speechless. I loved your disclipline, so that each segment of your story was EXACTLY 100 words; I loved how everything made sense, was vivid, powerful, poetry, and how the words flowed like poetry. You have some serious talent!!!!!
Absolutely spiffing! Very well written. I particulary like the fact the author doesn't mention who dies NAMES, but you just have to guess. Fabulous. Absolutely fabulous. God bless your soul.
that was so intense. It was so good, anmd so sad, oh my goodness, i am a little bit in shock, that was amazing!!! 10/10!