Reviewer: scarlet_gs
Date: 04/12/06 15:17
Chapter: Others That Know

This is wonderful. You are really good. You have to go on like that. But please be quick for the next chapter, I can't wait...

Author's Response: I've been working on the next chapter and I'm excited for it. I'll try to be as quick as possible. LOL.

Reviewer: Yun Harla
Date: 04/12/06 13:18
Chapter: Others That Know

OMG!!! that was sooo unexpected! your an excellent writer! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!! I loved the way you did that part with James!!! well gotta go

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this chapter! I was excited about it, so I thought the readers might be, too! Guess it worked!

Reviewer: IloveCrookshanks
Date: 04/09/06 14:09
Chapter: The Ministry Intervenes

Since when does Harry follow Ministry rules, especially one as dumb as letting your wife think you're dead? Out of character for Harry, but I do hope they get back together, and Ginny kicks his butt!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I agree, but then again, it is fanfic, right? Wink.

Reviewer: seeker77
Date: 04/05/06 17:10
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

very nice look forward to more.....sooner

Author's Response: I know! I put the next chapter in queue practically a week ago, it's just taking forever to validate! I'm sorry! It's on it's way, and thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: fatso
Date: 03/28/06 17:11
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

Excellent!! Remus's and Ginny's convo was good. Ginny comes to her senses. not to mention that james is in gryfindor...good so far!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I really appreciate the review!!!!

Reviewer: hopelesslyhopeful
Date: 03/27/06 0:07
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

great story! I really like varying plots and the flashbacks, very descriptive. I can't wait until it all comes together and we know the whole story about Harry's 'death' and whatnot. keep up the awesome writing (and update soon please)!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the flashbacks! I'm working hard on the next chapter and some really important info comes out in it! LOL. Glad you're liking this story!

Reviewer: the hbp
Date: 03/26/06 10:43
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

oh great chapter at first i was a bit confused with the momory but it all got sorted out n the end....maybe you could put italics to clarify memories? but anyhoo i love your story i hope yuou update soon

Author's Response: Hey, I would like to put memories in italics, and I know this sounds really geeky of me, but I can't figure out how to do bold or italic on here! I've tried when I copy and paste the writing, but it never works, I just don't know. But I'm glad you were still able to follow a bit. I try to at least put dash lines to seperate. Thanks!

Reviewer: 10eels
Date: 03/25/06 19:49
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

I really enjoy this story! You're doing a great job.

Author's Response: Thank you! This story is really hard to right because it's so sort of, all over the place with so many plot points, but I'm trying!!! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Manda
Date: 03/24/06 12:59
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

I still don't understand why he had to pretend to be dead, and if there is a good reason for that why he couldnt just tell Ginny and his son! I would be so pissed!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter as usual!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know, I've not made it really clear. It's so hard because there are all these little pieces I'm trying to bring together and I know it's a bit aggrivating! I promise I'm trying to finish up with Harry just explaining it all and so we can move on!

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 03/24/06 2:53
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

Hurray for updates! I loved this installment. My heart broke with Ginny and Remus' conversation. But then you cheered me up with a James moment! You know, sometimes I get annoyed that people automatically put Harry's kids into Gryffindor, but in this case, I really feel that that's the place he should be. To have that connection with the father he's hardly known. Although one question, if they are swapping Snape horror stories, does that mean he's back teaching (your story is post HBP right?) Or are they swapping Snape stories they've heard from their families? He would be a legend wouldn't he? And it's it amazing how a simple think like washing the dishes can put your mind at ease! I'm so glad Ginny finally realized she's happy that Harry's back. I can understand the pain and the hurt from being lied to for so many years. But her dream has come true now! She should be happy. As for that teaching position at Hogwarts Lupin is leaving... I have a guess as to who you're going to fill it with. But I'm keeping my speculations to myself for now! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: All right first of all, what a great, indepth review! Thank you for taking so much time to care! I agree that Harry's kids always ending up in the same house as him is annoying, but then again, I think I remember that a lot of times houses run by bloodline, not always, of course, but generally, and then also, James is so much like Harry, I just thought his personality would be appropriately suited for Gryffindor. And they're swapping Snape stories because of all the terrible ones they've heard in the past, from their parents, uncles, etc. Snape is legend, definately. I'm trying to bring everything back down together, sort of clean up all the mess I've created for myself, and hopefully you'll enjoy that as much!

Reviewer: apotterfan247
Date: 03/22/06 0:47
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope that Ginny and Harry can work things out before Harry sees James again. That way they can have a united front in dealing with James. But you are a brilliant writer and I am sure it will all work out for the best. Can't wait for the next update. 10/10

Author's Response: Wow, a brilliant writer, eh? You're so sweet! Hopefully the next chapter will be out by this weekend, and I totally agree that Harry and Ginny have loads to sort out before James gets brought into everything...sort of anyway...

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 03/21/06 9:46
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

Good chapter....but I don't see Ginny forgiving Lupin as easily as she will Harry! (although I think Harry will be in the dog house for awhile!) So, Harry's going to come back from the dead and immediatley go teach at Hogwarts? I think he should spend some time with Ginny!!!! (after she finds him, of course!)

Author's Response: Hey, I think so too!! But there are all these little bits that need sorting, and Harry's life from fake-death until now is one.

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 03/21/06 8:56
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

Great chapter! James was the perfect distraction for Ginny. It provided her with a much needed break from her anger so she could focus on the important things. Like Harry being alive. :) I do find Remus retiring to be a bit improbable. He is only 50 (or so) & has had difficulty finding & keeping work his whole life. I can't imagine that he would want to give up working due to a few creaky joints. However, I'm sure there is a very good plot reason. P.S. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Lupin has other things going on in his life at this point that are distracting him and pulling him away as well. Besides, being a werewolf would really wear down a person's body more so than normal. No matter, however, because it's all in the plot. LOL. Or at least, I hope. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Yun Harla
Date: 03/20/06 21:07
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

hey great chapter!! it really was a cliff hanger buthey keep us coming back for more right? so whens the next chapter coming out?

Author's Response: I'm working on it right now I would like to have it in queue in a few days, at the end of the week latest, but no promises. Gotta make it good, you know. LOL.

Reviewer: raid
Date: 03/20/06 10:33
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

really good chapter. It was good to hear about james and how his first day at school went. Hopufully you will update soon so we can see what happens to h/g and alittle more about james. 10/10

Author's Response: My little fingers are working fast at it! Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 03/19/06 20:03
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

I liked that you added the bit about James. It gives the story a lite-hearted touch. Ginny will look for Harry, but will he be there? Hopefully she didn't throw her life away. And why is Lupin leaving?

Author's Response: Hey, thanks. Lupin is getting up there in years, nothing too old, of course, but he's definately getting slightly creaky, being a werewolf would really wear someone out quickly. I just think that by this time he would be looking to retire.

Reviewer: potterwidow
Date: 03/19/06 9:25
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

Yeah, the whole cliff thing is evil - like who is the new teacher - HP, possibly? Nice chapter

Author's Response: Thank you, and the next chapter should answer this question.

Reviewer: emazey
Date: 03/19/06 7:37
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

yayeth! A new chapter for me to feast on :) Although not much action happened at least Ginny has finally come to her senses. Please update soon, cliffies are evil...but incredilby vital *evil grin*

Author's Response: I know, this chapter was a bit lull, and I apologize for that. I'm trying to pick it back up, get it exciting. Hopefully it's still interesting!

Reviewer: hawaiianhulagal
Date: 03/19/06 3:15
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

Exactly! What has Ginny done? Only push away the lover of her life. Glad she figured it out. LOL Loved James moment in the Great Hall.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the James thing. I wanted to put something about him in there because it'd been a few chapters since we'd heard anything about him. Ginny does come to her senses! She couldn't be that crazy!

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 03/18/06 23:26
Chapter: Dealing with Death and Decisions

So I'm finally caught up on this story and now I'm stuck on a cliffie!! I hope Harry didn't go anywhere! Although...could he? I mean, he is supposed to be dead! Update soon!

Author's Response: Harry hasn't come this far to give up!

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