Reviewer: ragge
Date: 04/25/06 13:34
Chapter: The Engagement

ok, so i read this story when there was only nine chapters and it said that the tenth was coming out soon. i didnt want to write a review until then because i was sooooooooooooooo amazed at this fan fic. my friend writes fics and yours are way more fantastic then hers. good job. my eyes were full of tears when ginny left harry at the burrow and then when she went back, they were full of tears again... keep up the good work.

ps- it's very hard to get a compliment from me being as i have read many books and studies so much literature.

Author's Response: Well I'm totally flattered then! And I won't tell your friend you think I'm better than I'm working on chapter 11 right now and it's proving to be frusting and hard, but that's because I want it to be really, really good! So just know that I am working hard, and when I get compliments like this it only makes me work harder! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Es21232
Date: 04/23/06 15:09
Chapter: Enter James Potter


Author's Response: Wicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Thanks!)

Reviewer: BeeBlack
Date: 04/18/06 13:40
Chapter: Others That Know

OMG... I can't believe I didn't review it!!! Girl... Whatta amazing job you are doing!! Everytime I read it I want to read more and more and can't wait for you to update! It is the best fic I ever read! I love the way Ginny realized what she had done and went to find Harry again... And I loved Harry and little James in the shack in the woods and how he tried to protect the little boy! Amazing!!! Please, update soon! Keep up with the amazing work!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a complimentary review!! You're so nice! I'm glad to hear that you like the story so much becuase it's been hard to write, and I want it to be really good. I will try to finish the next chapter soon and will definately try to make it as good as ever!

Reviewer: theeldesttwin
Date: 04/18/06 8:32
Chapter: Others That Know

wow! i can't wait to see what happens next! great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love that you leave a review for each chapter that you like, that's great!

Reviewer: harryginny4343
Date: 04/17/06 20:05
Chapter: Others That Know

ooo i really love this story hope you post the next chapter soon!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you really love this story and I hope that things go well with the next chapter so that I can get it up soon.

Reviewer: theeldesttwin
Date: 04/17/06 19:33
Chapter: That Secrets Would Be Revealed


Author's Response: Haha, that one made me laugh.

Reviewer: theeldesttwin
Date: 04/17/06 18:59
Chapter: Harry Would Be Proud

ah! it's so depressing!

Author's Response: It is, isn't it? LOL.

Reviewer: theeldesttwin
Date: 04/17/06 17:59
Chapter: Enter James Potter

i really like it, it's a very interesting story. i can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it!

Reviewer: theeldesttwin
Date: 04/17/06 17:47
Chapter: The Engagement

i like it!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! :)

Reviewer: blue_skies_forever
Date: 04/17/06 2:12
Chapter: Others That Know

Okay, I just read all 10 chapters in one sitting and now that my eyes are stinging and my head hurts from staring at the computer screen I only have one word to describe how I feel about this story...WOW! I really liked in the beginning how you put things from the past in with actions in the present. The engagement and James going off to school etc. I also really like relationship Harry has with Remus. I was disappointed that Remus would go along with a plan that would take Harry away from his family, but what can you do? I was also about to send you a howler for a minute there because I thought you'd killed Ron! But all is well that ends well so I'm ok on that front. I was also pleased that you didn't just have Ginny fall back into Harry's arms and immediatly forgive him. That would have been out of her character not to give him some grief for what he did. It was good that she left him to wallow for a bit before she came 'round. The emotion in this story is perfect. I'm posting my own story (not currently on this site yet, the first chapter is still in limbo) and I find emotion is something I struggle with...I either have too much or too little. Anyway, just wanted to drop a line (or well several) and say that I love your story. You've definitly impressed me! Can't wait for the update! Oh, and is Harry the new DADA professor?

Author's Response: What a really fantastic review! Thank you so much! I get mixed reviews on the way I skip between present and past, but I always like it when stories are like that, so I thought I'd try it out, and it seems to be working well for the most part. I think it helps you understand the whole story without making it so dreadfully long. I can't write seven books like JK! LOL. I'm really glad that you could totally feel the emotions in the story! That's a huge compliment! I have a difficult time trying to get it pulled together sometimes, and I'll spend hours on the same few paragraphs trying to get it just right. Of course, I'm not Rowling so it's destined to have flaws, but I'm really glad you like it so much! I'll keep readers like you in mind for the coming chapters!

Reviewer: harryis2cute4u
Date: 04/16/06 15:29
Chapter: Others That Know

20/10! Your stories rock! I'm addicticted, so keep 'em comin'!!

Author's Response: Wow, addicted! That's fantastic...I think. Haha. I will definately keep them coming and I hope you continue to love them!

Reviewer: eaglebird
Date: 04/16/06 2:03
Chapter: Others That Know

Just caught up on all 10 chapters! This is a FANTASTIC story. "A" level and all of that ... You have captured my imagination and interest ...... please update soon.

I really like the plot development on multiple timelines .... and your treatment of Ginny's feelings opver all those years was gripping. It brought tears to my eyes several times as she dealt with all her demons.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I love that you said I caputred your interest and imagination! That's what I'm going for! Thank you for the really great review and I'll definately keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: eaglebird
Date: 04/16/06 1:59
Chapter: Others That Know

Just caught up on all 10 chapters! This is a FANTASTIC story. "A" level and all of that ... You have captured my imagination and interest ...... please update soon.

I really like the plot development on multiple timelines .... and your treatment of Ginny's feelings opver all those years was gripping. It brought tears to my eyes several times as she dealt with all her demons.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 04/15/06 2:33
Chapter: Others That Know

Brilliant! Simply Brilliant! I love that Harry's child can aparate at age 6! Of course he helped, but still, it only seems fit that a kid belonging to Harry and Ginny would be powerful enough to pull it off! I hope we get to see more of James at school soon, but I loved having the scene with him at 6- nice touch. The only thing is that his language was a bit high for a 6-year old, but you explained it well describing him as bright and inocent. Maybe he's hanging around with Aunt Hermione too much? Again, a fantastic chapter and I look forward to more

Author's Response: You know, I wondered how that would sound, if it would be way too unbelievable for James to be that magical, but then I thought, dude, it's Harry and Ginny's kid! He's bound to be powerful, right? And he had a lot of coaxing from intelligent wizards which helps! I wondered just how smart a six year old would be, how they would talk, and I'm not really around any much to know, so I took a guess. I'm glad it's sort of pulled off, even if he is a little too old for his age. LOL. I'll keep writing if you keep reading and reviewing as great as this!

Reviewer: Julybug
Date: 04/14/06 17:05
Chapter: Others That Know

Fantastic! I'm really enjoying this story, and you are a terrific writer. Yes, it has grabbed my attention and imagination, and I always want more! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am working hard on the next chapter because I want it to keep on exciting readers as wonderful as you! You keep reading and I'll keep trying!

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 04/13/06 14:41
Chapter: Others That Know

Oh, what are you doing to that family??? First splitting Harry & Ginny apart and now this to James?????

I hope it gets better for them soon.

Author's Response: You have been such a faithful reader and reviewer! I am trying to pull it together now. Things had to get really bad before they could finally get better, and I felt like there was a lot to explain before anything really wonderful could happen. I won't promise happiness yet, but I can assure you it's right around the corner! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Manda
Date: 04/13/06 9:59
Chapter: The Engagement

Wow Can't wait to see Ginny's Reaction and James' reaction!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'll try to get the next chapter out soon!

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 04/12/06 21:03
Chapter: Others That Know

What a great chapter!!!!! I can't wait for Ginny's reaction update ASAP!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm working on the next chapter! Hopefully I'll get it finished soon! Thanks for taking the time, again!

Reviewer: hopelesslyhopeful
Date: 04/12/06 19:01
Chapter: Others That Know

wow, I never would have guessed things to turn in this direction! GREAT chapter! James and Harry have quite the connection! oh, I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please! (I really want to see Ginny's reaction!)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and I'm really happy I could surprise you! I hope the next chapter keeps you excited, I'm working hard on it for readers like you!

Reviewer: potterwidow
Date: 04/12/06 16:02
Chapter: Others That Know

You really know how to keep your readers guessing. Never saw that coming. Your writing was above your par, which is above most's! The descriptions were fantastic and the storyline is unpredictable. Great job. keep writing and posting!!!

Author's Response: I was really hoping to do something that would totally surprise you guys because I know it's been sort of dragging a little bit. The past few chapters have seemed a little tiresome and heavy, but they had to be that way! Now you sort of see why, hopefully, and I'm really glad this took you by surprise! Thank you so much and keep reading!

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