Reviews For Black Moon Dance
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/18/08 17:14
Chapter: Bittersweet Christmas

I've really enjoyed these two chapters, the fake wand was extremely funny. I'd like to read more but as you've not updated since 2005 it's not likely i'll get to. That is the one thing I dislike about fics that aren't one shots, people stop writing so you never get the rest of the story. Anyway, what was here is really good.

Reviewer: Charisma_tn
Date: 09/10/07 23:26
Chapter: Bittersweet Christmas

This has a lot of potential. Hope you continue it.

Reviewer: hedwigandme
Date: 01/01/07 16:02
Chapter: Bittersweet Christmas

write more what happened to james ???

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 01/07/06 22:17
Chapter: Bittersweet Christmas

hello? is everyone asleep here? This should be getting a lot more reviews than it is! come on people, wake up! lol

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 12/16/05 2:00
Chapter: Bittersweet Christmas

I have to say it again! great chapter!! Great story, great everything!! I love drama aqnd death as long as noone dies!! make sense? Update soon, or at least reply soon!!


Author's Response: LOL!!! Thanks again! Semester Exams are coming up, so I'll try to work on the third chapter when I get the chance.

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 12/12/05 3:45
Chapter: Bittersweet Christmas

Great chapter, fantastic, only a single problem, and you may not even bother changing this : Madame Pomfrey was at Hogwarts in the days of the Marauders, because Remus mentions in one of the books, Im almost positive it's the third, that Madame Pomfrey escorted him to the Whomping Willow every full moon. It's not a big thing, I just thought I would let you know! :) Congrats on a great chapter, update soon! :)

Author's Response: Madame Pomprey! Duh, why didn't I know that? LOL, for some reason I thought her name was "Madame Fay". Oops... It's okay, I think you're right about Madame Pomfrey being with the Marauders in their years at Hogwarts. It's okay, it's tinsy, so I don't think I'll change it. Thanks though for telling me! And I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter^^

Reviewer: grape_2010
Date: 12/10/05 23:27
Chapter: Bittersweet Christmas

Excellent! I like that Lily's at least on good speaking terms with the Marauders... Well, maybe not James, but the other three. Anyway, *wipes worried sweat from forehead* James is in the Hospital Wing. He's going to live. I mean, he had to, oh, you know what I mean. All in all, great story and update soon!

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks. I'll try to update as soon as I can. But with school exams and the Christmas holidays, I might be a little slower at updating chapter 3.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/10/05 16:24
Chapter: Bittersweet Christmas

I like that chapter. I hope James is okay. Is Lily finally starting to notice her feelings? I think so! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks again! Lily's unsure of her feelings right now, but there is more romance to come between them.

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 12/07/05 5:51
Chapter: Turn Around

Wow, very very good chapter. It was perfect, and I adored it. The only thing is, maybe you should you know, have a warning about there being Snape/Narcissa in there, because that ship isn't for the fainthearted. Please update soon, even though I can guess what will happen in the second chapter. James can't die yet!

Author's Response: Thanks Lilypudding! I'll update ASAP. And James won't die; he's my teddy bear! ^.^

Reviewer: grape_2010
Date: 12/06/05 21:42
Chapter: Turn Around

I am astounded. The pranks were original but not overdone - excellent. Very nice job at detailing what drowning was like, not that I'm implying anything. I've always liked stories that start off with a 'BANG!' But two questions that I hope will be cleared up in the next chapter: Where is the Invisibility Cloak and what was pulling James down into the icy murk of the bottom of the lake? (He fell throught the lake, right? Maybe I missed that...) Anyway, update as soon as possible! It's off to a bloody brilliant start!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! It's flattering to hear that, especially about the drowning scene. I had to do some research on that, so I'm glad you noticed!

Author's Response: Oh, sorry! I almost forgot. Yes, James did fall into the lake.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/06/05 19:35
Chapter: Turn Around

It is sooo good!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to find out what is pulling James. THe pranks were histarical. Does Sanpe have the invisibility cloke? I got lst on that part. Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! (cute screenname too. ^.^) Everything will tie in somehow, promise!

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 12/03/05 4:48
Chapter: Turn Around

Wow oh my god this story is fantastic!!! I am not sure I entirely get what Is with that thing grabbing onto james but that's ione of the things I like about it!!! This is so good, straight onto my favs list!!! Update soon, how could you leave it like that???

Author's Response: Thank you for the review Harry Potter Star! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Oh! And you'll find out soon about that underwater thing in the next chapter. ^.^

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 12/02/05 20:11
Chapter: Turn Around

I really like your story! You've got a really great start and I can't wait to read more! I'm already attached to it! James and Siruis' pranks against Snape and Narcissa was perfect! Great! I love your descriptions! So clear and concise! I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks again, RoxyMarie!

Reviewer: RoxyMarie
Date: 12/02/05 20:09
Chapter: Turn Around

Great start! Great descriptions. I really like your story. It reads really well! I hope you're able to update often!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try to update as soon as I can!

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