Reviewer: Wise Owl
Date: 12/02/05 20:07
Chapter: Winter Snows Challenge # 4

Excellent entry! I loved how you tied in Barty Sr.'s verses about a mothers love! 10/10!!! Here's a small correction: He watched her smile, her face although tired and worned was peaceful. Instead of worned you mean to say worn (I believe). That's all! Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks. Corrected that. Appreciate the review and glad you enjoyed it and not find this Christmas entry a bit too depressing ^_^

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 12/02/05 15:32
Chapter: Winter Snows Challenge # 4

Hey, clever, and a nice tie-in with "canon." It was a little distracting because your sixth one changed every few verses--was that intentional, and if so, why? Anyway, I liked it. Have a nice day! *D*

Author's Response: Thanks CA ^_^

*wince* actually it wasn't ... my mind must have been elsewhere, while I was writing *lol* Before submitting I changed the verses that doesn't seem to work well or was repeatative ... guess I wasn't paying enough attention to what I wa doing ^_^. Some beta I am *L*

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