Reviewer: asdfg
Date: 09/27/07 18:34
Chapter: The Next Great Adventure

awesome and i saw the ff 7 hint rufus briggs lol

Reviewer: sakn
Date: 09/02/07 14:16
Chapter: Advances

you are a genious an absulote genius
and please please update really soon...i can hardly wait...but how come no one is worried about Mr.weasley?

Reviewer: sakn
Date: 09/02/07 14:14
Chapter: Red Dawn

BLOODY HELL!! thats all i can say.u are amazing

Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 08/25/07 11:49
Chapter: Red Dawn

Interesting story...

Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 08/09/07 15:26
Chapter: Advances

I cannot wait to read the next chapter as I had thought this story had been abandoned, I am so happy it has not because this is an amazing fanfic. You have spun an amazing tale with the blending of Arthurian Legends in the H.P. universe. as I am sure many fans supplicated this of DH and were let down towards the middle of DH as it seemed JKR had run out of steam. I do like this better than DH, not just because of the charters who survive,your version seems less rushed than DH. As JKR seemed to make many promises but only carried out with very little as she seemed overwhelmed and unable to deal with it all. I want read more of your ideas for the H.P. universe as the story is well thought out and extremely entertaining.

Reviewer: HPfan_VK
Date: 08/08/07 22:24
Chapter: Advances

Absolutely amazing story! I love the storyline. If you have not written anything that has been published, you should seriously think about doing it. You have amazing talent and a wonderful gift for storytelling.

Author's Response: Thank you. I do plan to eventually, have the story planned in my head and everything. Need some more practice writing though, which is what FanFic is great for!

Reviewer: Omagus
Date: 08/08/07 1:03
Chapter: Advances

Simply. Farking. Amazing.
This is absolutely awesome, I really like the incoproration of the Arthurian Legends in particular. Reading it actually feels like reading a book, and so much fits well with the standard Potter canon- aside from book 7 of course. I like parts of this better than DH, but that's mainly just because more than a few of my favorite characters live in this and die in Hallows :P (I believe all told 6 of my top 10 croak in the novels, but that's beside the point). I like the career stuff and Harry's classes, just the sort of thing you'd expect him to do and I was kinda surprised that he wasn't going into teaching DADA in the books, but then Aurors were introduced and it made a bit more sense. (Noticed yet how I tend to ramble when I like a story? :P)
I'm surpirsed how big a role Grindlewald has played in book 7 as well as several fanfics, seeing as I think he was only mentioned once in book 1. I really like your take on what he was/is, along with the Light and Dark struggle, some more of Merlin's background (like how is he so knowledgeable and powerful, Aryeh's son perhaps?) would be pretty cool too. I also really like the ancient advanced magic, it's not altogether surprising that there would be more powerful spells than the Unforgivables so it's really cool seeing (well reading about) these superspells in action. The emmese amount of Arthurian & magical history and background canon melded in White Dragon shows a lot of effort going into it, excellent work, Sarakiel.
I like how the story always keeps you guessing (hmm I wonder what the oh-so-subtle Mirror of Reaf shows? *wink*), one of my favorite parts of a good book (or online story as the case may be) is trying to figure out what will happen next. I can only hope that, like in the novels, the questions will be anwered and the mysteries revealed through the course of the book. I am most looking forward to seeing what will happen to poor Mr. Weasely (hehe he's named Arthur too how funny...) since he was unable to come with to Avalon... and Hermione didn't either, hmm. Hope Grindy doesn't find out about her and Ron or she's in deep sheet.
For a bit of constructive criticism, I was thining that if Errune was consuming magical souls, wouldn't wizards and witches be dropping dead left and right? And isn't there anyone who Dumbledore may have had assitance from that would have recognized the signs? Speaking of Dumbledore, I was rather surpirsed Harry didn't talk to his portrait after his lessons with Merlin, he could have answered quite a few questions I think. Ooh, random thought- does the fact that Harry and Dumbledore both were able to go to Merlin make them related? And did Dumbledore use the Founder's diary or find out some other way? Hmm, I appear to have gotten carried away- these are just the sort of questions I was talking about earlier that I suspect (and hope) are explained later. Maybe Dumbledore has a portrait in the Avalon Castle (Camelot?)! He did dissapear from the one in Harry's office, maybe he went there... (and the rambling goes on ;))
Boy, I'm doing a bad devil's advocate job, keep getting distracted by the good stuff and exceited by questions so congrats! Most of the questions I have are background/history based, so as long as they are answered later in the story this will turn out great! More please ASAP!!!!!!!!! And once again:
Simply. Farking. Amazing.

Author's Response: lol..alright, you've officially made my day. Thanks M8. Its amazing to see someone take such an interest in my lil story here, that you're thinking of plot points and looking for more history. Thank you. And yeah, the Mirror of Reaf was definately very subtle ;)

Reviewer: AccioRon
Date: 08/07/07 20:55
Chapter: Advances

I love this story and was so glad to see another chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: LRS078
Date: 07/10/07 20:53
Chapter: Awake

A very very welcome back!!! Thank you for not abandoning this storyline. Its stayed on my favorites list for all the time. I understand about projects interfering just glad to have you back. Keep the updates more frequent than the last though please...

Reviewer: asdfg
Date: 06/29/07 20:24
Chapter: Awake

please hurry with the updates ill do anything ANYTHIHIHING *SOBS* jk but plz do hurry

Reviewer: asdfg
Date: 06/27/07 14:50
Chapter: Awake

awesome chappie

Reviewer: illiantarus
Date: 06/23/07 20:06
Chapter: Introductions

Great story! This Daktyloi is one badass evil dude. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: asdfg
Date: 06/23/07 17:44
Chapter: Awake

that one was awesome i never gave up on you i read this story a long time ago and i still love it plz hurry and update soon

Reviewer: beanibuddy
Date: 06/23/07 0:37
Chapter: Awake

Alright! Excellent writing! I had given up on you, keep them coming!

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 06/22/07 1:52
Chapter: Awake

I just read the first 19 chapters...the story is amazing

Reviewer: Astrea
Date: 06/21/07 23:32
Chapter: Awake

I am SO proud of you! Now if I can just cure you of your odd capitalization disease! :)

Reviewer: GinnyGryff
Date: 06/21/07 21:06
Chapter: Beginnings

This is an excellent story. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: ImrnShkh
Date: 06/21/07 20:19
Chapter: Beginnings

Can't wait for the next chapter...One of the best fanfic I have read...Keep up the good job ;)

Reviewer: history
Date: 06/21/07 19:57
Chapter: Beginnings

I am ecstatic thet you're finishing this story!! *dances 'round room*

Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 06/21/07 1:13
Chapter: Red Dawn


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