Reviewer: FutureOscarWinner
Date: 05/11/06 23:37
Chapter: Lessons

I have been following this story for some time now, and i must say it gets better with each chapter! I even added it to my favorites! and the suspence with this last chapter was good! why was the sky red??? I guess i'll wait for the next chapter! which i hope is very soon, keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: FutureOscarWinner
Date: 05/11/06 23:36
Chapter: Lessons

I have been following this story for some time now, and i must say it gets better with each chapter! I even added it to my favorites! and the suspence with this last chapter was good! why was the sky red??? I guess i'll wait for the next chapter! which i hope is very soon, keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: LRS078
Date: 04/30/06 0:50
Chapter: The Night Falls

Excellent fic....great way to fill in backstory/gap of Grindelwald! Fic needs an update though....

Author's Response: Thanks! The story isn't dead, I've got a few more chapters in the can, will post them very very soon. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Saphira
Date: 04/24/06 15:59
Chapter: The Night Falls

Wow, what a fantastically well researched and thought out story!! The storyline with Harry and Merlin is really intriguing and the idea that "yin and yang" need to be maintained in the world is really well done. The plot with Grindlewald is brilliant as I like the biblical references with the four horseman...but the fact that he can see what is happening everywhere eg Emma Jones - that was so sad and creepy!! And if Datyloi (its spelt wrong I know!!) is the weakest - I dont want to see the others!!!

Set and Aryeh is a good idea and I was so glad that the Weasleys are descendents of Merlin - I mean all their names are a dead giveaway!! And Harry is the descendant of Merlin and Rose!! I love the development that Harry is CHOOSING to fight dear old Grindy. The insight about Anguis Muggle - I loved that!! I presume that Nimue is the woman that imprisoned Merlin....

Well done and I look foward to Cahappie 14!!

Reviewer: deramo29
Date: 04/20/06 17:42
Chapter: The Night Falls

fantastic.......can't wait to read more. Very well done. It was a pleasure to read.

Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 04/20/06 0:30
Chapter: The Night Falls

I can see it all building up. Harry is always causing a scene...hehehe You did a good job with this chapter.

Reviewer: hmp
Date: 04/19/06 15:25
Chapter: The Night Falls

I really like your story, very interesting and well written. Please update soon :)

Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 04/16/06 4:38
Chapter: A History of Magic

Great story.
I cannot wait to read chapter 13 .Harry fainting nice touch humor and Merlin wonderful well keep up the writting because you've got a decated fan.

Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 04/16/06 3:16
Chapter: A History of Magic

Great story.
I cannot wait to read chapter 13 .Harry fainting nice touch humor and Merlin wonderful well keep up the writting because you've got a decated fan.

Reviewer: Amianha
Date: 04/07/06 8:50
Chapter: A History of Magic

Interesting reading so far. I'm enjoying this story immensely. Can't wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: stark40763
Date: 03/31/06 20:33
Chapter: A History of Magic

Nice chapter, With Harry being the descendant of Merlin, and Ginny the descendant of Arthur...but who was the woman that betrayed Arthur

Reviewer: Amianha
Date: 03/26/06 1:40
Chapter: The Founders Journal

I am entranced by this story after finishing the 11 chapters so far. I hope that you continue to update and don not let this story die out. 10/10 -> Well deserved.

Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 03/19/06 18:13
Chapter: King's Cross

A locket! Oh well, I guess that's all I am going to get. Another good chapter.

Reviewer: tpt42
Date: 03/18/06 21:32
Chapter: Beginnings

Just realised that I've never written a review for this story. I've been following it for about a month now, so sorry about that. Anyhow, I'm really enjoying this one, a couple of things I like a lot about your story is that the characters remain true to the books (people always get ooc in some of the characters in my opinion), the idea that you have is really interesting and unique, and you've written it well, can't even say I saw any spelling errors.

Reviewer: Wendol
Date: 03/18/06 15:30
Chapter: The Founders Journal

I have completed your chapters and they were staggeringly engrossing. I cant wait to read further. Your dialogue keeps the tempo and the occassional humor is above merit. I dont know about your fic being similar to some other, but that does not matter. Since we are bound by the sae set of facts and information, it is very difficult to obtain any kind of leeway. This is one of the best fanfictions I have read. I hope you keep updating frequently.

Reviewer: Wendol
Date: 03/18/06 14:24
Chapter: Beginnings

I just read the first chapter and am waiting to finish this review so I can move on to the next one. I wanted to comment before reading because of one truly funny joke, 'not being able to catch the damned flu'. That was a hilarious one. I cant stop laughing right now. I will read the further chapters and review them. Anyways, great style of writing.Keep it up.

Reviewer: Colin Creevey
Date: 03/18/06 6:18
Chapter: The Founders Journal

Am I right in guessing that the Light One is Merlin? Am I also right in guessing that Merlin is the White Dragon? Your story reminds me... of another... 10/10

Author's Response: Hey ;)...right on one....sort of on the other...Thanks for all your reviews, you've been a consistant reviewer and I just wanted to tell you I appreciate it. BTW, which story does it remind you of? I'd like to read it to make sure i'm not too close with my own. :) --Sarakiel

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 03/17/06 17:06
Chapter: King's Cross

I've really enjoyed the story so far, i expeacially like the unique twist you put on world war two. I'm glad that Collin and Luan got together it's a bettercombination than Neville and Luna in my opinion. I hope you hurry and submit the next chapter - I'm exited to read it!!!!!

Reviewer: Colin Creevey
Date: 03/14/06 11:45
Chapter: King's Cross

Nice. I liked the Colin/Luna relationship. It's a rare one, but they make a couple. Too bad I'm not doing it, I had other plans.

I don't think things will turn as easy as Harry expects. Eventually, he'll hate his year, especially if he catches Ginny walking after dark. A lesson: Never return to a school to teach if you know some younger students. At least not until the students graduate.

I can see it all now. 10/10 for an excellent story. By the way, I like the way you used Colin... very nice... favorite character of mine.

Reviewer: stark40763
Date: 03/14/06 8:07
Chapter: King's Cross

Great chapter, especially the part about the wizard involvement in WW2...

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