Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 11/06/08 22:31
Chapter: King's Gambit

I can't wait till the next chapter. It's been ages, but so far the waits (however long they have been) have been worth it! I cannot wait till the next chapter posts. Rock ON!!!

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 11/06/08 22:31
Chapter: King's Gambit

I can't wait till the next chapter. It's been ages, but so far the waits (however long they have been) have been worth it! I cannot wait till the next chapter posts. Rock ON!!!

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 10/08/08 20:55
Chapter: King's Gambit

I have just read it all...all i can say is Bloody Hell... I loved it

Reviewer: Firoy
Date: 08/31/08 6:47
Chapter: King's Gambit

OMG please please update soon! I am so completely wrapped up in this story I love it!

Author's Response: Really am trying. The new chapter got denied like 4 times already even after being through 2 betas!!...so not sure where to go from here...sigh... but i'm still trying...

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 17:22
Chapter: King's Gambit

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 17:14
Chapter: Won't Back Down

Nice idea with Diagon Ally and why are they trying to destroy the joke shop ????

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 17:03
Chapter: The Next Great Adventure

Interesting..........
Very Interesting..............

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 16:58
Chapter: Awake

Cool .................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 16:50
Chapter: Calm

I like how strong you made Harry and Ron and who is the Beetle ???? Malfoy possibly...............

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 16:36
Chapter: Defense and Offence

Nice Battle !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thumbs up to you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 16:29
Chapter: The White Dragons

Nice idea with the monsters. Its like the Hydra in Hercules.

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 16:23
Chapter: Red Dawn

Wow ............................... I always thought it would be Ron .......................

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 16:17
Chapter: Lessons

Whats going to happen to Ron and Harry and everyone else ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 16:11
Chapter: The Night Falls

I love the fact that you put the Weasleys and Hermionie in this

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 16:04
Chapter: A History of Magic

OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS SOOOO INCREDIBLY COOL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 15:55
Chapter: The Founders Journal

I Love how you portrayed the Hogwarts founders

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 15:34
Chapter: Introductions

OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cool beyond belif !!!!!!!!!
( I like the fact that Hermionie wants to be a healer. )

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 15:24
Chapter: Champion Chudley's

Wonder what Ron will buy. Will it be for Hermionie ????

Reviewer: whitefiredragoon
Date: 06/21/08 15:08
Chapter: Message in the Night

WOW ...............
This is really interesting .....
I don't know what else to say .......

Reviewer: Snowy Owl 73
Date: 05/18/08 18:39
Chapter: The White Dragons

Will there ever be more for this story? I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Guys, I'm sorry for the looooong delay. I'm currently working on the next chapter. I had done it and my beta gave me one good long lecture on the quality. it was rushed. I had the 'block' Thank you to Astrea for not letting me release a sub-par chap. Give me a week or two guys and this will be back on stream.rnrn

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