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Reviews For Crossing Over

Name: queentazo (Signed) · Date: 01/27/06 21:54 · For: Prologue
'k it get it now! cant wait 4 the next chappie. what i meant in realistic is that in jk rowling's world, like most likely to be in the books. i mean she squashed the draco/hermione ship so thats not realistic but its still my favorite pair. i mean, i like harry/ginny and hermione/ron, but my favorite fanfiction pair, because it cant possibly taint my view of their relationship in the story. if u get my drift. i dont mean realistic as if it could happen today. but yeah. that harry and dumbledore makes a lot more since. u have put a lot of thought into this. thats why i cant b a fanfic writer, i dont think that far in advance about answering questions and stuff. good job. i give u a 10/10 becuz now i get everything.
:D queentazo

Author's Response: so, ignoring the fact that d/hr will never happen, you're saying that it was the most IC chapter? yay!! lol! lol have you even tried writing yet? maybe if you just sit down, it'll come to you. there's never any harm in trying, right? :)

Name: queentazo (Signed) · Date: 01/26/06 16:53 · For: Chapter 7
Yah! another chappie. and im the first to review!! well i understood more where hermione was coming from, and it seemed realistic when you said,"Sure, I wanted Voldemort dead almost as much as Harry did, but I wanted Lucius dead more, and the only way the latter would happen was to do what Voldemort wanted." so that is making more sense. i dont get the ending part. about ron. in this fic, do harry and ginny still like each other? and what about ron and hermione? r they still "together". i mean, like they were at the end of HBP. the harry and hermione conversation about death- didnt like it. I mean harry did cry about dumbledore. i mean i like how harry tried talking to hermione, but i really didnt get the whole dumbledore thing. but overall, it was the most realistic chapter and i really enjoyed it. the part where hermione yelled at Mrs. Black's portrait cracked me up! i give you and 9/10. :D

Author's Response: haha go you with the reviewing!!! the situation between h/g and r/h does unfold slightly in the next chapter - maybe i should explain that, huh? and Harry... well, he's had more time than Hermione, hasn't he? Dumbeldore was just there to remind Harry of what he's got left and what's he's lost; also so that Hermione can know what he's feeling - he's got someone, finally, who knows what he's going through. Realistic... hmmm.... I never really thought about it! But thanks for saying that! hehe! Thanks once again for another of your lovely reviews. swift xx

Name: queentazo (Signed) · Date: 01/14/06 12:20 · For: Chapter 6
YYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they kissed! you have redeemed yourself. her considering it to save malfoys life is much more believable. but i still dont want her to turn bad. maybe she could be a spy for the order. i dunno. just dont make her evil. maybe somewhat of a bad girl, just no tw/ voldie. well great chapter. i loved the kiss!!!!! yah! update soon please. i give you a ten. :D

Author's Response: hahahaha! you'll see! thank you so much! you've made me happpppyyyyyy!!! :D

Name: queentazo (Signed) · Date: 01/14/06 12:12 · For: Chapter 5
it was okay. voldie was kinda OCC. i wasw slightly confused but i get it. why would voldie want hermione. is she going to "cross over." harry and ron need to be in this some. she cant turn evil. she cant. okay chappie - i give you 6

Author's Response: yeah, the response for this chapter wasn't as good as i hoped. i thought next chapter was worse to be honest..... and writing voldemort is sooooo hard!!!

Name: queentazo (Signed) · Date: 01/14/06 12:03 · For: Chapter 4
omg!!! who is it? i bet its voldemort and draco was really pretending to be nice but hten he falls in love with her and yeah. or it could be someone else. the suspense is killing me. i must read the next chapter. two million pionts for the cliff-hanger

Author's Response: haha y'know, i don't actually try with the cliff-hangers. they kinda come naturally. anyway, again, are you sure you didn't read my planning sheet before??! ;p

Name: queentazo (Signed) · Date: 01/13/06 22:58 · For: Chapter 3
cute! i like how they started being nice. but wouldn't harry understand? he's had like everything taken away. sure he was young, but i think you need to put in a conversation between harry and hermione relating to each other. another great chappie.

Author's Response: woah. are you sure you've not read my planning sheet? lol! at this moment, Harry's just going along with things. he'll be all right soon!

Name: queentazo (Signed) · Date: 01/13/06 22:53 · For: Chapter 2
woah. didn't expect that. it was a really good chapter. it's not OCC like a lot of those fics. really really really awesome!!!! i give you a million.

Author's Response: well... i tried. :D

Name: queentazo (Signed) · Date: 01/13/06 22:50 · For: Chapter 1
nice twist! draco telling. i really like this story. i give you a 10 :D

Author's Response: hehe thank you :)

Name: sayiansirius (Signed) · Date: 01/05/06 19:12 · For: Chapter 6
I LIKED IT!!!! It was awesome what do you mean we wouldn't like it? lol it was real good!!! ~*10/10*~ Hey btw...did u read my 13th chapter? if u do, please review. thx

Author's Response: what??! awww thanks kc!!!! hehehe *bounces around in hyperness* i've read the 13th chapter, pretty sure i reviewed too... oh well! i'll just go leave another one!!! :D

Name: BehindThisSmile (Signed) · Date: 01/05/06 17:26 · For: Chapter 6
i LOVE your story! keep up the brilliant work!

Author's Response: :D:D THANK YOU!!!!!! luv u lots and lots like jelly tots!!!!! :D

Name: RAB__sectumsempra (Signed) · Date: 01/05/06 17:03 · For: Chapter 6
i kno u don't think its up to scratch, but i thot it was wayyyy awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! i've nvr read nything so good! of it was a bit confuzin at first with voldy in hermione's aptmnt, but it was romantic on draco's part and hermione's part....u kno wat i mean! 10/10!

Author's Response: aww thank you!!!!! that means a lot! It was The First Kiss!!! yay!! more of them to come!! haha!

Name: RAB__sectumsempra (Signed) · Date: 01/05/06 17:02 · For: Chapter 6
i kno u don't think its up to scratch, but i thot it was wayyyy awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! i've nvr read nything so good! of it was a bit confuzin at first with voldy in hermione's aptmnt, but it was romantic on draco's part and hermione's part....u kno wat i mean! 10/10!

Name: sayiansirius (Signed) · Date: 01/03/06 7:10 · For: Chapter 5
this chapter was ok...wasn't the best but it wasn't bad. The whole voldy thing was unexpected and a bit implausible but its ur story line and as far as you keep writing, i'll keep reading..i wonder whats going to happen next though ~*8/10*~

Author's Response: hmmmm. yeah i got that from some people. well, everyone's who's read it, anyway. lol. it's the NEXT chapter i'm worried about - i've posted it but it's not been validated yet. if you didn't like this one then.... *sigh*

Name: sayiansirius (Signed) · Date: 01/03/06 6:36 · For: Chapter 4
u never told me u updated! *gasp* lol anyway, great chapter i'm going to read the next right now oh and btw...chapter 13 is up on my fic. ~*10/10*~

Author's Response: lol sorry!! yeah i've read the 13, it's good! thanks!!

Name: bread_smoothie (Signed) · Date: 12/29/05 11:35 · For: Chapter 5
lol hi it's Morphin here. And I didn't mean that I didn't like this chapter! It just surprised me a little..and you're right. Weird is ALWAYSALWAYSALWAYS good. Sorry...

Author's Response: hey it's fine, I didn't mean for you to think I thought that anyway!! WEIRDOSITY!!!! :D Happy New Year too!!!! 2006 2006 2006 2006!!!!!

Name: Morphin (Signed) · Date: 12/23/05 14:47 · For: Chapter 5
The story was going fine up until the random appearance of Voldemort. *Frowns*I just didn't get that bit..But oh well who understands the mysterious workings of a dark lord's Evil mind? Not I! And I'd like it if Hermione were Evil. And STAYED Evil..In practically every single fic where someone good has turned Evil, they always turn back...it's annoying. So, yeah, even though it was a bit weird I liked this chapter, and good cliffie at the end, too! Merry XMAS to you!

Author's Response: noooooooooooooo........ the story's still going fine.... *takes a deeeeeeeeeeeeeeep breath*...... *starts hyperventilating*... it's fine, swift, it's fine....... don't mind me, i'm talking to myself!!! ANYWAY, Morphin, thanks for the review..... i've just had to think of another story line now!! lol joking, i can't reveal the future to you JUST yet! and oh, weird is ALWAYS good - this chapter is GOOD because i'm not normal, i'm weird, so it's all right if it's weird!! thanks a lot, and MERRY XMAS TO YOU TOO!!!!! *jumps around in hyperness*..... PRESENTS!!!! :D

Name: WelcomeToParadise (Signed) · Date: 12/21/05 13:49 · For: Chapter 5
Nooooo she can't kill him! That would make her EVIL! Noo please don't let her kill him =( And I hope Draco is okay... it sounds like he is but he could collaspe... and suddenly die... and then i would be sad... so... erm...yes. Please update soon! Well, asap after the evil xmas break thing... Merry Xmas! *~*WelcomeToParadise*~*

Author's Response: lol as if I, the great and mighty Draco-lover, would EVER kill Draco... erm... the evilness may be the point of the story... 'cause it's Crossing Over, if you didn't notice... but ALSO, only I know which side she will cross over to! *laughs evilly, but soon begins to cough up throat because is no good at evil laughs, hence proving what a nice girl running_swift is* And about the 'evil xmas break thing', the Admin need their holiday too!!!!!! Merry Xmas to you too! :P

Name: WelcomeToParadise (Signed) · Date: 12/14/05 14:47 · For: Chapter 4
OMG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!! WHO WAS IT?!?! OhMyGod! Argh please update soon I can't handle waiting too long! Yay! I love this it rocks! *~*WelcomeToParadise*~*

Author's Response: lol so enthusiastic!! Well, it's the holidays in 2 days!! So wait that long!! Thank you by the way!!!

Name: Morphin (Signed) · Date: 12/09/05 10:30 · For: Chapter 3
It was good, and you are very talented and I liked the ending but.. I guess I've read a lot of that type of thing before that it's getting a bit repetitive in my mind..But that's not your fault! This is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I would, of course, prefer it if you didn't make the whole Draco/Herm conversation drag out much longer but I'm not the author and I don't know what is going to happen next. I also appreciate that you kinda had to make it two chapters because it was long. Oops I feel guilty now criticising you. I'm sorry!

Author's Response: lol yeah, fics I've read do it too, but I'm not really trying to copy them. I mean, there needs to be SOME kind of odd moment which doesn't seem right to kick-start the whole thing. Don't be sorry! Seriously, it would have been reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaally long (say, 3000 words-ish) if I didn't! Thanks a lot!

Name: HermioneG149 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/05 0:05 · For: Chapter 1
Good chapter, but I don't think that the real Harry and Ron would be looking at that little red book.

Author's Response: Well obviously not!! I shouldn't hope so... although teenage boys these days... haha but no, JKR wouldn't delve that deep into 'very' normal teenage preferences... (I don't mean to offend any guys btw!! :P)

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