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Reviews For She Wasn't Alone

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 06/22/12 21:27 · For: Three Little Words
Is this going to have a sequel?
I feel like I am definitely a Hermione/Snape shipper now!


Name: tonkzie (Signed) · Date: 04/28/08 10:04 · For: Three Little Words
loved it!


Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 03/12/08 23:36 · For: Three Little Words
"white rot iron chair "
actually, I think it is "wraught-iron"


Name: mrs_weasley (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 9:21 · For: Great Minds
"...That looks on tempests and is never broken
It is the star to every wandering bark
Who's worth's unknown, though his height be taken,
Love's not time's fool,
Though rosey lips and cheeks within his bending sickle's compass come,
Love alters not with brief hours and weeks,
But bear it out, even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved"

Sorry, I love that sonnet so much!

Great fic by the way!

xxx


Name: riza (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 0:43 · For: Three Little Words
could have had a more to the ending
it was quite abrupt


Name: dumbledores daughter (Signed) · Date: 03/18/07 22:59 · For: Three Little Words
So, out of curiousity, just when do Harry and Ron find out about this?


Name: mrsdan (Signed) · Date: 03/01/07 16:16 · For: Spoken Minds, Sunken Hearts
But she loves him and he loves her!!!


Name: mrsdan (Signed) · Date: 03/01/07 16:10 · For: Face-To-Face
OMFG!!~!!! I am so happy!1


Name: mrsdan (Signed) · Date: 03/01/07 16:08 · For: Extremely Proud
They HAVE to get back together!!


Name: feather (Signed) · Date: 10/02/06 2:30 · For: Three Little Words
cute story. ended kinda abruptly, though. would have been nice to see how ron and harry reacted after finding out about the relationship. i like your snape here. not too flowery or mushy. he realized what he needed to do and went straight for it. told her exactly what he needed to say without preamble. good job and thanks for sharing!


Name: smgfan (Signed) · Date: 08/08/06 15:53 · For: Three Little Words
awesome story!
I love it!


Name: sinbad (Signed) · Date: 07/31/06 0:42 · For: Three Little Words
cute but tame


Name: Tarbella (Signed) · Date: 07/06/06 18:21 · For: Three Little Words
Oh, I really really liked this story.. Nice ending! So cute.

-*Martine*-


Name: dracolover08 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/06 18:00 · For: Three Little Words
this was a rly good story


Name: wolfen18 (Signed) · Date: 06/03/06 9:34 · For: Spoken Minds, Sunken Hearts
The story jumps around too much from present to past without giving the reader time to adjust. There are serious grammar errors that disrupt and confuse the flow of the story.
The characters of Hermione and Severus aren't written well, which makes the way they act and feel seem very puerile.


Name: RedheadedWeasley (Signed) · Date: 05/28/06 17:54 · For: Three Little Words
This story was good, until I got to the end. I went to go on to the next chapter and there wasn't one. It ended so abrubtly. It almost seemed as though you didn't really know how to end it so just had them say "I love you.
You did a good job with the characterization, though. It can be hard to not make Severus OOC and I think you did a really good job keeping him in character.


Name: RedheadedWeasley (Signed) · Date: 05/28/06 17:53 · For: Three Little Words
This story was good, until I got to the end. I went to go on to the next chapter and there wasn't one. It ended so abrubtly. It almost seemed as though you didn't really know how to end it so just had them say "I love you.
You did a good job with the characterization, though. It can be hard to not make Severus OOC and I think you did a really good job keeping him in character.


Name: harrylovegurl (Signed) · Date: 10/29/05 20:55 · For: Three Little Words
this was really written well. you made it believable and romantic i loved it mariann


Name: Fabula_propono (Signed) · Date: 06/05/05 7:27 · For: Three Little Words
Nice job! Really good story line, I like it a lot. Tell those moderators to hurry up so you can update soon!


Name: sweetie Q (Signed) · Date: 05/15/05 18:49 · For: Three Little Words
Which 3 words: I forgive you or I love you? just kidding, i know what 3 words you mean. anyway, i give you a 9.999999999999999


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