Is this going to have a sequel?
I feel like I am definitely a Hermione/Snape shipper now!
"white rot iron chair "
actually, I think it is "wraught-iron"
"...That looks on tempests and is never broken
It is the star to every wandering bark
Who's worth's unknown, though his height be taken,
Love's not time's fool,
Though rosey lips and cheeks within his bending sickle's compass come,
Love alters not with brief hours and weeks,
But bear it out, even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved"
Sorry, I love that sonnet so much!
Great fic by the way!
xxx
could have had a more to the ending
it was quite abrupt
So, out of curiousity, just when do Harry and Ron find out about this?
But she loves him and he loves her!!!
cute story. ended kinda abruptly, though. would have been nice to see how ron and harry reacted after finding out about the relationship. i like your snape here. not too flowery or mushy. he realized what he needed to do and went straight for it. told her exactly what he needed to say without preamble. good job and thanks for sharing!
Oh, I really really liked this story.. Nice ending! So cute.
-*Martine*-
The story jumps around too much from present to past without giving the reader time to adjust. There are serious grammar errors that disrupt and confuse the flow of the story.
The characters of Hermione and Severus aren't written well, which makes the way they act and feel seem very puerile.
This story was good, until I got to the end. I went to go on to the next chapter and there wasn't one. It ended so abrubtly. It almost seemed as though you didn't really know how to end it so just had them say "I love you.
You did a good job with the characterization, though. It can be hard to not make Severus OOC and I think you did a really good job keeping him in character.
This story was good, until I got to the end. I went to go on to the next chapter and there wasn't one. It ended so abrubtly. It almost seemed as though you didn't really know how to end it so just had them say "I love you.
You did a good job with the characterization, though. It can be hard to not make Severus OOC and I think you did a really good job keeping him in character.
this was really written well. you made it believable and romantic i loved it mariann
Nice job! Really good story line, I like it a lot. Tell those moderators to hurry up so you can update soon!
Which 3 words: I forgive you or I love you? just kidding, i know what 3 words you mean. anyway, i give you a 9.999999999999999
