This story brought chills down my spine. Great story; depressing, but great none the less. I liked how Hermione realised that someone really does care for her. That brought a warm feeling to my heart. Excellent story! :)
Ooh this is veryvery good! I hate the idea of Hermione hurting that badly, but I do like that you acknowledge that she wants to be known as more than the smart girl. And niice closing sentence about the red. = ) Great grammar! 10!