At first i thought this was perhaps a little OOC for Hermione, but then I realised, she's always seen from Harry's point of view in the books, always dependable, all knowing Hermione. I made the mistake of not delving deeper, and it's the same for everyone, we none of us know a single person completely, even perhpas ourselves. I think the best line of the whole fic is the last one, she had been looking for comfort in the wrong red, full of meaning. Very well written.
I liked it but didn't like it. I like that Ron cared enough about Hermione to see if she was okay and helped her out. What I didn't like was that she was cutting herself. That is messed up.
The last line was perfect. "she had been looking for comfort in the wrong red" That is an amazing line. You're a good writer! Keep it up!
I love the ending. "She had been looking for comfort in the wrong red." It really stuck. There was something about it. Anyways, the story is amazing. I love your writing!!!
once again reading this.. once again loving it. I truly love this story. I'm not sure why. I think in someways I want to relate to it, and in other ways I actually do. Yeah.. I went through that problem, but what I think keeps drawing me back to read this is that in the end, you put it just right. You showed that someone did care for Hermoine and that she wasn't alone, and that she had an alley. I'm not sure but I truly love this story.
I love this story. So sad, but so good! I especially like you last line "She had been looking for comfort in the wrong red." Awesome job!
i love this story. one of my favorites. so emotional... so deep. i gotta admit, not a lot of people would have been able to pull off this kind of writing. but you definitely did an amazing job. simply stunning.
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you have a gift, my dear. and you sure know how to use it.
omg. that was so sad, how she was feeling; and then you hit it with the best ending possible. I liked.
well i dont know really where to begin. i was kind of skeptical about the whole thing at first. i was like "why is this a ron/hermione fic?" but then when i read about how ron had followed her to the astronomy tower i was just kinda like "duh, sam!" lol! anyway, great fic! -Samee
oh wow. Well that was unblieveable. it is one of those stories you dont forget. it sticks with you when you are not even thinking about it. This deserves a 10/10 for the sole purpose that it is painfull. Only you will truly understand its significance. We readers can only read in awe and ponder what it really means to you. One of the best stories i've read! Amazing.
*shudders* No offense or anything but this had alot of graphic descriptio in it ind *shivers* im sortof squeemish. But if I wasn't so squeemish I daresay it was fabulous. Kindof a SongFic To "Fix You" By (the love of my life)Coldplay<33333 :) Liz
Wow, very good! I loved how we saw a new side of Hermione, not exactly in her character, but it's Fan fiction, right? :] Depressing, but emotionally powerful. Your story is one of those that make us realise what life is all about. I liked seeing this new depressing side of Hermy, and i liked how you added in she didn't want to be always thought of as the 'smart girl'. I'm really glad you didn't make them kiss at the end, it would have tipped the story a dfferent way then it was supposed to go. I love this fic becuase it's not filled with just sex like a lot of the other ones. No contact like that, just pure emotion and realization. Me+This story=Lovee.
Totally awesome!!!! It is a very unique story with powerful emotion and a new reality to what might happen in real life under so much pressure since JK can't put that type of stuff in there so she can keep it children acceptable. Is this story a one-shot? If it is, I hope you turn it into a bigger story! I would love to read it!
That was great, especially to someone who has ever cut herself like Hermione. The line at the end was a nice touch. So dark, but really good.
Wow, that was incredible... I am speechless... You did great with this story.
Powerful!!!!!!!!I felt as if I saw a whole new side of Hermione that no one knew existed.This is by far the best story on the site.I loved the last line.This was the best story I have ever read in my life!
This was amazing! I read through most of it, and definitely felt the intensity, but your last line made me love the story! I also thought the "love" between Hermione and Ron was much deeper than many of the other fics I've read! Great job!
One word: Powerful!!! I'm not really found of the poem or song at the beginning but the story itself portrays something incredibly powerful. If you ever felt that way, you know what I mean...
This story brought chills down my spine. Great story; depressing, but great none the less. I liked how Hermione realised that someone really does care for her. That brought a warm feeling to my heart. Excellent story! :)
