Reviewer: _Dumbledores Girl_
Date: 10/16/06 15:14
Chapter: Love all around

kind of a slow start, but I can feel that this story is gonna get really good!

Reviewer: cherrygirl
Date: 09/30/06 17:54
Chapter: The New Year

Loved it so much. This story is the best.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 09/09/06 12:11
Chapter: The New Year

very cute. I enjoyed reading this very much.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 09/09/06 10:54
Chapter: The Ball

very pretty

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 09/09/06 10:42
Chapter: Before the ball

i love the levicorpus part!

Author's Response: Haha thanks!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 09/09/06 1:45
Chapter: Love all around

hmm good start.

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 08/27/06 10:41
Chapter: The New Year

OMG!!! i luvd it!!! (i cant even compete with ur story!!)
the only thing that i dont understand iz that... well... in harry's 6th yr ov Hogwartz, he's 16. he waz born in 1980. in 2005, he would be 25.
srry... but im just tryin' to help.
1ov2- Lily :-P

Reviewer: Jane Bilus
Date: 06/25/06 10:36
Chapter: The New Year

That fic was soo sweet! It was realy cute it was grwat how you got the coupe toghether. the ball sounded great too. Well done, great story, 10/10

Reviewer: Nimbus02
Date: 04/23/06 19:16
Chapter: Getting a date

Wait, Didn't Ron ask Hermione in the last chapter to go with him to th eball so what the heck is this chapter for?

Author's Response: Sorry about that; somehow those two chapters got switched around. They're back to normal now; so if you read them again it'll make sense.

Reviewer: Butterbeer123
Date: 04/17/06 1:30
Chapter: The New Year

Great Story! I loved it! You stayed true to each character! Great writing! Thanks for the great read!

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 03/01/06 13:55
Chapter: The New Year

NO!!! Don't END it!!! PLEASE keep going!!!

Reviewer: only4him
Date: 02/28/06 22:23
Chapter: The New Year

short...totallly unexpected...but i bet this was one of the harder chapters to write keep writing ur doing an awesome job!!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 02/26/06 11:02
Chapter: The New Year

That was very good! I loved it, although it was short, but that has to be a hard chapter to write. I loved how they were looking back on the year, and then George and Fred looked on the brighter side of things. Update soon!

Reviewer: lily_writes
Date: 02/22/06 16:19
Chapter: The New Year

Before I praise you, I have some constructive criticism. Firstly, the Harry Potter series took place in 1990's, meaning you should've wrote that New Year's Eve signified the end of 1995. Also there were some minor spelling errors here and there, but I'm just being nitpicky......(is that even a word?). Now for the praise. One word can describe this fic: fluff. This was well orchestrated all in all. To remedy your spelling errors, I recommend you find a Beta. If you don't know where to find one I'll be your Beta. 10000/10. ;D

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 02/21/06 17:41
Chapter: The New Year

ITS OVER!! yay for new year! congrats on this story it was a great idea and great writing! i hope to see mor fic from you in the (hopefully)not so distant future! 10! Lisa xxx

Reviewer: Narnia
Date: 02/09/06 17:16
Chapter: Christmastime

Wow that was a very happy family and funny chapter! That was really good! Especially the cooking and the twins and the part where the girls went to help and the boys went to clean...happy family =p Update soon please!

Reviewer: chochang1994
Date: 02/09/06 16:03
Chapter: Getting a date

cute! now if i could do that to theguy i like - hello, sweet victory!

Reviewer: chochang1994
Date: 02/09/06 16:00
Chapter: Preparations, preparations

"slow dancing until the sunrise blazed across the horizon" can you say MAJORLY OBSESSED? keep writing! 10/10

Reviewer: only4him
Date: 02/03/06 16:57
Chapter: Christmastime

that was cute!

Reviewer: Molly_Wobbles
Date: 01/29/06 0:19
Chapter: Christmastime

It was a sweet story, cant wait for the next chapter!!! :)

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