Awwww! I liked how bossy Ron was when he asked Hermione out. Very sexy. But Hermione having dirty dreams about Harry grossed me out b/c they are like siblings.
awwwww really cute
erhm, yeah. no. wait- hermione's dreaming about harry and tells ginny but is not interested in harry and says yes to ron.
ron's not that cofident and wouldn't do it like that he would be more shy or something
Good job. That was very funny! I love Ron's 'both hands' rule!
thats it ! I mean,well what happend after that.
Cute! Great Fic! Update!
hmm.. it's cannon, it's in character, mostly, but there is something missing. I dont think Ron would admit his feelings for 'Mione so readily. Though i love the idea of the whole triangle thing, the ending just seems rushed and well, unlikely. Im really sorry that i have written such a negative review, because i really actually do like this, but like i said, there is just something missing from the end
Short, sweet, cute, and funny. =)
awwwwwww..... so cute and you were right it is fluffy but i kinda want to know whats happens next but since it a one shot ill have to spend the rest of my life wondering*sniff sniff*=D its funny though
Very cute!! =D Hihi
very cute story! Although I found it a little hardto believe that Ron asked Hermione out that easily, and in front of Ginny and Harry too. But overall it was a good plot, and very well written!
I really like it. It was briliant!
totally cute! it was sweet, but personally I don't see why it was rated PG-13, but thats just me, ya know. he he..good job and keep writing! 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I understand what you mean, but i think it is not really G but it is not excactly PG-13, so if they had PG then that is what it would be rated. Thank you soo much for your review!
Really good, 10/10!
There were a lot of spelling mistakes, and way too short. But a good plot lol.