Reviewer: SpyMaster
Date: 04/01/07 6:20
Chapter: Harlequin's Moon

You alternate between uncomfortable tension and humour really well. It's so easy to believe that the underground exists and as for the reactions to Tonks little "daddy" scene. Well that was priceless. I also love that you don't sugarcoat Evan. A lot of people pretend that ex-boyfriends never knew them, but obviously that's not true and you work that in well. Another great chapter and poor Tonks.

Author's Response: Maybe it's easier on the ego to think the ex didn't know you, that you were never happy with them, in or out of bed. Thanks for liking the mix of humour and tension!

Reviewer: SpyMaster
Date: 03/31/07 17:59
Chapter: Hunter's Moon

If I think about this seriously this kind of scenario with Remus being a wolf, with no pain in transforming, no worries about hurting Tonks is probably slightly unrealistic given what little we know of wearwolves BUT I really like it. I'm a romantic and I really like how easy their relationship is with each other, how the wearwolf thing isn't the biggest issue in their relationship. It works because I want to believe it. I also like making Tonks a Ravenclaw, it's something a little different that I've not seen before. Another great installment.

Author's Response: I think it works because of what Remus told Harry in POA. His transformations were 'terrible' without Wolfsbane Potion. With the potion, he curled up in his office a 'harmless wolf.' I think the potion makes transformation like that of an Animagus. Maybe not totally pain-free, but not terrible, either. In PoA, he 'forgot' to take the potion, that's why he became a werewolf instead of a harmless wolf, and why the film showed him wracked in pain. (either that, or they were milking drama, heh)

Reviewer: SpyMaster
Date: 03/31/07 17:48
Chapter: Full Moon Rising

I like Tonks reaction. I feel bad for her being the only one not to know but I like it that she trusts Remus enough to understand why he didn't tell her. I like it being Evan to tell her. Her friends didn't wanting it to be Remus but it works better this way. Tonks is just a nice person and Evan is a real creep. A good way of getting this issue out in the open.

Author's Response: Evan's also a dog in the manger, not wanting to give up his Slytherin style for Tonks, but not liking the fact that she's moved on and trying to ruin her new romance!

Reviewer: SpyMaster
Date: 03/31/07 17:14
Chapter: By the Light of the Moon

I like how your bring fairytale lines into it. I'd not noticed that so much the last time I read this. "Somebody's been sleeping in my lounger and they're still there" reminded me of Goldilocks and the three bears. One thing I'm confused about though is whether Farrell knows Tonks is a witch and why he would know if he did. They weren't very serious and wouldn't that break the secrecy act. Another good chapter.

Author's Response: Tonks was spending the summer with her Gran so she could learn what being a Muggle teen was like, so no, Rory has no idea she's a the magical sense of the word, heh.

Reviewer: SpyMaster
Date: 03/31/07 17:06
Chapter: Reaching for the Moon

Tonks and Hestia squaring off is funny. I'd never thought to think of any order members being 3D except for Remus, Tonks and of course the other more regular characters but you're bringing Hestia into a new light. I've also not seen the movie Chocolat but with your recommendation you've inspired me to rent it. Another very enjoyable chapter.

Author's Response: Huzzah for you not only liking the squabble over Remus, but going to rent Chocolat! I think you'll love it. Johnny Depp as a gorgeous gypsy...what's not to like? :D

Reviewer: SpyMaster
Date: 03/31/07 16:54
Chapter: Kiss the Moon

Have I mentioned I love how you play the instant attraction. It makes a change from fics that have them dancing around each other for ages and it works just as well, if not better. You capture personality in dialogue really well. I love the line
“Perhaps you’d better, Terrance, if you’re going to fondle your wife in public. Purebloods should have a bit more control, old man.”
it captures the sort of smirk that we've seen Malfoy with and the sense of superiority that those kind of people feel. I love how Tonks throws a tantrum as well. Another great chapter and the tension drawn out between Remus and Tonks is thrilling to read even multiple times.

Author's Response: Have I mentioned how much I love the way you express yourself in reviews? :D I can usually natter on, verbally or in written form for ages, but all I can think of is You Rock!

Reviewer: SpyMaster
Date: 03/31/07 16:30
Chapter: New Moon, New Beginning

This is my second time of reading this. I've read all your R/T fics and enjoyed them so much I thought it was time I started to review so I signed up. Specifically in this chapter I liked how you've made Remus and Tonks meet before Ootp. I also liked Tonks instant attraction to Remus. I've always thought that he's likely to be good looking and it's nice to have that explored here. I particularly love how you weave in original characters, places, things like the squire cab, little details like the electric company, it makes their lives so believable. I found myself the other day including your history for them as canon and then having to remind myself it wasn't. Thanks for sharing such an amazing story.

Author's Response: It's getting chilly outside where I live, but I've got the warm fuzzies from your review. You really made my night! Thank you for reading, and then going back to review. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: aguamenti403
Date: 03/30/07 22:08
Chapter: Heart of the Moon

ah i loved it! i can't wait to keep reading this whole series, and of course the sirius and cami stories. as usual, excellent writing and a romantic ending. what more can you ask for?

Author's Response: A smart, witty reader who likes your writing and wants to read more....what more can a writer ask for? Characters to be real? Can't have that, but I'm very happy with your reviews!

Reviewer: aguamenti403
Date: 03/25/07 20:39
Chapter: New Moon, New Beginning

so i finished atotm and decided to give your r/t series a try, and i love it, especially tonks's pov! and what a great start to the relationship, sitting down with the wrong guy then falling for him. tehe i'm excited to keep reading

Author's Response: I'm excited you're reading! In the OotP story, Ginny and Tonks are very simpatico. I can see similarities at times between them, and even between Blaise and Tonks. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. You really made my night sparkly with your review!

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/19/07 8:32
Chapter: Heart of the Moon

I think my fav, line in the entire story is
'The look in his eyes gave me the courage to say, “I love you, with all my heart, and without you my world, like my hair, is colourless…crap.”'
Oh gods now I'm crying again, well no time to waste off to find the sequal. There is a sequal RIGHT?????

Author's Response: This series is now 4 stories, 10 one shots, and 3 poems, lol, so yes, ma'am, there is indeed a lot more to read if you are gracious and kind enough to do so!

Thank you for telling me that. I felt that was the most 'Tonks' and it means a lot that you do too! :)

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/18/07 21:54
Chapter: Shadow Moon

Ahhhh I'm Actually crying, my poor keyboard is getting all wet... (sniff)

Author's Response: You're a sensitive soul. Thank you for being touched!

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/18/07 10:40
Chapter: Moonstruck

Tichy little bliter ain't he? Very demanding, Now I want the next chapter. Well 'Next'

Author's Response: That's the good thing about reading a complete story. You can always read on! And when you're done, there's another story, and another, and another, *cackles* :D

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/18/07 10:27
Chapter: Vanished Moon

Ya, I love Sirius too! And I love this chapter almost as much as I love Sirius, but it's really close.(I can't help it I was in love ever since Hagrid mentioned him in the first book)

Author's Response: Sirius is great! I wish he wasn't doomed, in true gothic hero fashion. I like like my gothic gods sexy and redeemable! Sigh.

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/17/07 22:38
Chapter: Tears of the Moon

Is the power of three from 'Charmed'? Great chapter, 'Next'

Author's Response: The power of three was around way before Charmed, lol, but I did watch a few episodes the first season. I liked the Shannon Doherty character...probably a lot better than I'd like her in real life, heh.

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/17/07 22:10
Chapter: Hunter's Moon

Uh-oh hmmm now we have a werewolf a dog and a metamorphmargi, what things will happen... I'll just click 'Next'

Author's Response: They have a really good chemistry, bantering back and forth. :D

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/16/07 14:33
Chapter: The Serpent and the Moon

Two words 'Oh poo'
(not the chapter though)

Author's Response: Whew, what a relief! (Reminds me of that product of Fred and George's in HBP- are you worried about You-Know-Who, lol)

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/16/07 8:59
Chapter: Blinded by the Moon

Love is blind (or so I've heard) But I bet Remus and Tonks are going to be very happy for a lonnnnnnnnnnnng time : )

Author's Response: They have their arguments and tough times, but that doesn't mean they don't care, or they aren't together. (I think of HBP. The hospital scene didn't read like an out of nowhere happening to me. I think they had disagreed before and Tonks is the physical type....lucky Remus...eventually, heh)

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 03/15/07 20:58
Chapter: The Pull of the Moon

Ohhhhh (Childishly) Now to the next chapter! and it's already written YA!

Author's Response: Oh my heck, not only is it Friday, but you're reading my stories! Huzzah, Huzzah, Huzzah! You deserve three cheers for being fab!

Author's Response: Oh my heck, not only is it Friday, but you're reading my stories! Huzzah, Huzzah, Huzzah! You deserve three cheers for being fab!

Reviewer: marauders maidens
Date: 03/09/07 23:16
Chapter: Heart of the Moon

I lovvvveee this!!!! It was so amazing and awesome ect. I think you captured Remus perfectly!! GREAT!-Padfoot

Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ Did you know I wrote a Sirius Marauder Era romance Semi Charmed Life? Lots of Marauder interaction in that one. Lots of Sirius/Snuffles interaction in the sequel to this story, so whatever you kindly choose to read will make my day!

Reviewer: sss89
Date: 03/03/07 5:31
Chapter: Heart of the Moon

r u gnna do another one bout sirius n cami??

Author's Response: Thank you for asking!

There is a new Cami/Sirius story posted, Off the Leash, in the OP category, that follows the other Sirius and Cami one shots, A Dog's Life, Sirius in the Moonlight, A Moment Like This and Spring Fever. I hope you get a chance to read it..them...whatever you'd like! :D

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