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Name: Ophelia Quinn (Signed) · Date: 04/28/08 12:04 · For: Ron's Best Christmas
Hahaha!! It's so cute and funny at the same time. ^_^

Name: helgaandgodric (Signed) · Date: 03/23/07 15:11 · For: Ron's Best Christmas
Aww, that's very sweet. I like how, towards the end, the "gifts" started to get more hinted towards the fact that she liked him. However, it would have been a little easier to read if the beginning "gifts" weren't so long. I mean, I understand that they are necessary for the full effect, but it's a little difficult to say outloud.

Yes, I did sing it. Yes, I did receive weird looks. And, yes, I really liked this poem :D

Kate -> Knight of the Turnip Table

Name: Her My Own EE (Signed) · Date: 01/08/06 12:08 · For: Ron's Best Christmas
Very nice. I liked that you had Hermione called miss-know-it-all and various other frustrated names through the 12 days.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/05 23:37 · For: Ron's Best Christmas
Very clever! But I might suggest changing "how much days," to "how many days". Perfectly in character for Ron and Hermione though!

Name: UnnamedElement (Signed) · Date: 12/02/05 21:32 · For: Ron's Best Christmas
Very cute! I usually don't critique poetry and whatnot, but the only thing I'd suggest would be rephrasing the 2nd day of Christmas. It reads: "Two enchanted reminders of how much days left there are until the exams." It fits the rhythm if you squash it, but it might sound better if you did something to the effect of "Two enchanted reminders of how many days until (or 'til) exams." Just a suggestion, of course. You can, as always, ignore me. Lovely, though. Very, very cute and funny. Cheers~

Name: Wise Owl (Signed) · Date: 12/02/05 20:02 · For: Ron's Best Christmas
It's very cute. The first day of christmas was right on!

Name: Oppungo (Signed) · Date: 12/02/05 13:46 · For: Ron's Best Christmas
awww!lol,that was cute and funny!!great job!!

Name: tonksrocksmysocks (Signed) · Date: 12/02/05 13:42 · For: Ron's Best Christmas
Bravissimo! i cant think of anything else to say!

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