Reviewer: Ophelia Quinn
Date: 04/28/08 12:04
Chapter: Ron's Best Christmas

Hahaha!! It's so cute and funny at the same time. ^_^

Reviewer: helgaandgodric
Date: 03/23/07 15:11
Chapter: Ron's Best Christmas

Aww, that's very sweet. I like how, towards the end, the "gifts" started to get more hinted towards the fact that she liked him. However, it would have been a little easier to read if the beginning "gifts" weren't so long. I mean, I understand that they are necessary for the full effect, but it's a little difficult to say outloud.

Yes, I did sing it. Yes, I did receive weird looks. And, yes, I really liked this poem :D

Kate -> Knight of the Turnip Table

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 01/08/06 12:08
Chapter: Ron's Best Christmas

Very nice. I liked that you had Hermione called miss-know-it-all and various other frustrated names through the 12 days.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 12/02/05 23:37
Chapter: Ron's Best Christmas

Very clever! But I might suggest changing "how much days," to "how many days". Perfectly in character for Ron and Hermione though!

Reviewer: UnnamedElement
Date: 12/02/05 21:32
Chapter: Ron's Best Christmas

Very cute! I usually don't critique poetry and whatnot, but the only thing I'd suggest would be rephrasing the 2nd day of Christmas. It reads: "Two enchanted reminders of how much days left there are until the exams." It fits the rhythm if you squash it, but it might sound better if you did something to the effect of "Two enchanted reminders of how many days until (or 'til) exams." Just a suggestion, of course. You can, as always, ignore me. Lovely, though. Very, very cute and funny. Cheers~

Reviewer: Wise Owl
Date: 12/02/05 20:02
Chapter: Ron's Best Christmas

It's very cute. The first day of christmas was right on!

Reviewer: Oppungo
Date: 12/02/05 13:46
Chapter: Ron's Best Christmas

awww!lol,that was cute and funny!!great job!!

Reviewer: tonksrocksmysocks
Date: 12/02/05 13:42
Chapter: Ron's Best Christmas

Bravissimo! i cant think of anything else to say!

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