Very nice twist in the end of the chapter, I like.

This was showing such promise, I came over here from FFN hoping more chapters would have been posted here, but it still ends at the same spot...want to know what happens next!

Wow i really like this story, but ive been waiting for an update forever nd im getting tired of rereading this so i wont forget what happens.

Great, but HURRY UP AND FINISH IT PLEASE! WHEN U DO TELL ME

hey. i was just wondering if you are planning on finishig the story or not... :}
If you are, i hope you do soon... its hard to wait... but yeah is it is writers block you are suffering from, try writing soemthuing random like 'oo, that muffin was soooo good. to die for actually.' it doesn't nesesarily have to have anything to do with the story, but helps you start writing. it helps me at least.
well, anyway, -Vi-

so far so good

No offense, but I have noticed SEVERAL spelling errors in this story, such as fingrse.

Also, may I hazard a guess as how it ends? Does Malfoy realise that he truly loves Hermione after all and then they snog or something?

Just a question...XP

Ooohhhh! I love this fic so far! *sigh* Draco and Hermione, a match made in heaven. If only Draco would shapen up.

yea you know what... i'm curious about the etters too... also i wonder what draco would think if someone told him he looks like siruis as he obviuosly don't remember since he has his memory back...

Ah, I'm really enjoying this story. You totally have me on edge with the little snippets of "nice" Draco coming through the bad. I like Hermione's internal struggle (you write it well) and am really miffed about her losing those letters!! One is for her, obviously, and I think the other might be for his "prat" self.
I can totally see you being able to spin a tragic ending to this story: one where Draco remains his vile self, Hermione's still caught up in what might have, but both go their separate ways. Then she finds the letter, reads the one to herself, sends Draco the one he wrote, and then it just ends: bittersweet and evocative and utterly awful because it leaves your readers craving more.
But that's just a theory. I'm positive that whatever you have planned is going to be amazing. :)

Awesome job; try to update soon!