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Reviews For The New Surprise

Name: Idiot_IN_Ravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 12/16/06 18:37 · For: Breaking the news
this Story is MAD AWESOME!!!!!! Yay!!!
oh and it woul be really cool if Lisle met Victor Crum


Name: Idiot_IN_Ravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 12/14/06 20:51 · For: Christmas memories
the chapters are really long it's mad awesome


Name: Idiot_IN_Ravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 12/14/06 20:31 · For: Strange beginnings
the story is really good so far


Name: h3art0f1nk (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 22:22 · For: The Funeral
When are you going to post the next chapter?!


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 12/05/06 15:13 · For: Strange beginnings
hey, how old are you (you really dont have to answer) cause imma assume somewhere between 19-30

and seriously, i dont care if i get:

Author's response: um i dont wanna answer that...

but im just curious.

Author's Response: im 15 going on 16


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 12/02/06 17:14 · For: Strange beginnings
why does it mean re-writing? When mine got deleted i just changed a few lines and sent it back.

Author's Response: because ive got a new idea i should have it posted when the queue re-opens in january 3rd


Name: happilyhufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 12/01/06 18:57 · For: Strange beginnings
wha...what happened to Escape!?! I want to know!!!!!!!!!! this will makes me cry! not really... but I am really upset! I mean how can I not be?...I was the first reviewer on Escape:-(

Author's Response: aww thanks! it must have gotten deleted....grrrrrrrr...............i'll have to re-write it......


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/27/06 16:55 · For: Strange beginnings
ESCAPE IS GONE! *cries*

Author's Response: i know :-( this means re-writing for me..........


Name: h3art0f1nk (Signed) · Date: 11/27/06 0:35 · For: The Funeral
OMG. Where did "Escape" go?!

Author's Response: i have no idea! in the hands of the mods....


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/25/06 14:04 · For: Strange beginnings
Oh and i kinda sorta have to know

line-
queue


Author's Response: yeah


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/25/06 14:03 · For: Strange beginnings
And its quite sad that this is all i know...

apartment-
flat
and
argument-
row



Author's Response: argument/row i use argument as well...


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/25/06 14:01 · For: Strange beginnings
AHHHHHH IM SO CONFUSED!

Author's Response: why? lol ;)


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/25/06 13:59 · For: Strange beginnings
Um, is it sad that im on a website that is telling me how to replace american terms with brittish terms...?

Author's Response: er...no ive heard of sadder websites :)


Name: Bertybottaholic (Signed) · Date: 11/24/06 7:45 · For: The Funeral
I have to write another review!!! I'm sorry, but I feel that you should have had her sing the song, 'My heart will go on' from 'Titanic'. The song you had her sing is good though!I'm just saying, you know....

Author's Response: oh i know, i do love that song (and that movie actually) but y'know....


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/22/06 16:53 · For: Strange beginnings
I AM ABOUT TO DIE! OMG I LOVE MY COUSIN SO MUCH. SHE SENT ME THE LINK TO THE HBO PREVIEW FOR OOTP AND I LOVE HER. I WANT MOVIE NOW!

Author's Response: i saw it too!! july, yay!!!


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/22/06 16:51 · For: Strange beginnings
SHUDDUP. it isnt my fault im a review obsessed maniac. And yeah, i did make it. It took a few minutes but i made it.

Author's Response: i didnt say you were! *peace*?


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/20/06 22:54 · For: Strange beginnings
AHH IM GETTING REALLY ANXIOUS (sp?) RIGHT NOW CAUSE I ONLY HAVE NINE MORE REVIEWS TO MAKE IT TO THE TOP TENS!

Author's Response: Hope you get there! (after all you've left about 100 reviews in this!)


Name: Xxdeath_eaterxX (Anonymous) · Date: 11/18/06 15:33 · For: Strange beginnings
Yes, lucky you. Were on hiatus right now until, until *sob* february!

Author's Response: I know!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's sooo...grrr...dgsgwa....dfgiuytweuytyj\sbnxn\cxz\vd....


Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/06 16:22 · For: The Funeral
As THE biggest Remus Lupin fan, I'm very, very sad to see him go. They way you portrayed him, helping out Ginny all those times, just seems to fit so well. Tonks' words and sentiments seemed to fit perfectly.

I know this story is mostly focused around Ginny, but I felt like Harry should have reacted more. Remus was his mentor, and I feel like he would have reacted more- or completely sink into himself. I guess you're trying to show Harry as a mature adult, but I just felt like he was a bit flat. For example, he cooked a large happy meal the morning after Amy's kidnapping, unless you think he's throwing himself into work to get his mind off things. But he seemed so organized, so matter-of-fact about everything, as if he didn't know Remus and just passing on the information.

The emotions you portrayed in Ginny though were really well done. Her confusion, sorrow, and exaustion. Her indecision on what to tell Lisle was excellent to, it goes to show that even parent's don't have all the answers all the time.

Some of your continuity is slightly off again. You mention that there's toast on the tray like 3 time and a few minor grammar errors. You use the word "had" a lot, when it could be removed to tighten up the setence flow a little more. You ought to have a beta look through with a fine tooth comb to catch the little things. Overall it was a very well chapter but a second pair of eyes are always helpful.

Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive critism. :-) yeah it was a tough decision to make remus go but it seemed to 'fit' so thats why i did it. About Harry and cooking the meal, I think that was supposed to show how he wanted them all to be like a family again, amidst all the pain and sorrow to come. I'll go over some of my grammar mistakes, thanks for pointing them out. Overall thanks for reading and reviewing!!


Name: h3art0f1nk (Signed) · Date: 11/09/06 17:49 · For: The Funeral
Oh, my goodness, when are you going to update!?! YOU MUST UPDATE! This story is way too good to be left... unupdated!

Author's Response: I just did!! *marvels at self* thanks!!


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