Reviews For The New Surprise
Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 09/23/06 20:20
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

It is WICKED AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! We read this before and we couldn't submit... *sigh* but now we can!!!!!! please submit really soon... PLAESE!?
LiveLongPpl! Lily&Susan

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 09/23/06 20:19
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

It is WICKED AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! We read this before and we couldn't submit... *sigh* but now we can!!!!!! please submit really soon... PLAESE!?
LiveLongPpl! Lily&Susan

Author's Response: I'll try! Chapter 15 got deleted in the queue so i have to re-write it :(. but Im working on it right now!! thanks glad u like this :)

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 09/23/06 12:44
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

Wait, did you say your "compy" works? hahahahaha.

Author's Response: did i? ah well, haha

Author's Response: I just saw the promo now. :'( oh well....its only a kiss...i shall tell myself....

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 09/23/06 12:43
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

Oh yeah, I forgot Britian isnt getting the new season the same time as the US. Its the promo for two weeks before the season.

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 09/23/06 12:43
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

Oh yeah, I forgot Britian isnt getting the new season the same time as the US. Its the promo for two weeks before the season.

Author's Response: Yeah I know, there's a new promo in america, its not been aired in britain yet because, well, britain doesnt get it til like march ...grrrr

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 09/23/06 12:42
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

Did ya see the new lost promo yet?!?!?!!?! In the US Sawyer kisses Kate! ha.haha.ha. Okay, Im really like SQUEE!OMGSQUEE!

Author's Response: REALLY??? NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! GRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Beatrix_Potter
Date: 09/21/06 19:29
Chapter: The Death Eaters

Its the one with "lilylucyevans" on it.The one that said"How can you let Malfoy get away!"My mom got her totally!!!!!^_^

Author's Response: heehee! oh well, thats okay, dont worry!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/21/06 16:53
Chapter: "She's beautiful"

I like this story a lot.


Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: madjh
Date: 09/18/06 2:03
Chapter: Breaking the news

Whee! She IS pregnant. I'll have to finish reading later, but you've got me intrigued!

Author's Response: Hi! i just finished reading your fic by the way! :) hope you like the rest!

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 09/17/06 10:37
Chapter: Strange beginnings

Ramen is this pasta stuff you cook in boiled water and then when youre done you add flavor packet things in the water and it is delicious!

Author's Response: Oh! I see, that makes more sense. Lol, I think I've tried something similar, but its noodles and very spicy. I am a huge fan of spicy food :)

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 09/16/06 10:35
Chapter: Strange beginnings

HEY! I LIKE SNAPE! Can you make me eating ramen in the next chapter? Okay not really, I just have my heart set on ramen. Its quite sad, actually. I wonder if this will work this time. Ah well! Third times the charm.... I hope.

*imperios Harry to get me some ramen*

Dang it!

dfl;jglkhsrdgkhdfkgjhtsdiyu!
I couldnt think of a word to describe how I felt when I didnt get the ramen, so I made one!

on a sadder note:
NO NO NO NO NO! THE WORLD IS ENDING! WHY WHY WHY! ONLY TWO CHAPTERS NO NO NO NO NO NO!

*sits beside h3art0f1nk and put tissue box in middle and sobs*

Ph well, like my cousin says! Read some skate fics and calm down!

Sorry about the mention of skate by the way *imperio!* don't kill me!

Author's Response: Er..ramen? what erm, is it? lol. Nooo! skate! that cant be right! loool jk. Yeah I said about two more chapters, possibly more, and not including the epilogue, which i will try to make very long ;) long time no see, my friend! hope you enjoy chapter 15 when it comes out!

Reviewer: babypuss1223
Date: 09/13/06 20:18
Chapter: Strange beginnings

this chapter was really good. nice surprise,too.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 09/10/06 17:52
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

That was probably one of your best chapters! You're really good at writing the battle scenes, and yeah, I think it was Romeo that drank the poison.... Update quickly! I love this story! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! *blushes*...I have finally updated! My compy works!! Yahoooo!!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 09/10/06 11:07
Chapter: Tea

Noooo!!!!! He must be under the imperius, or was he tricking them the whole time??? OMG!!!! I neeedddd to read the next chapter. As a matter of fact I will....

Author's Response: Hahaha...yeah go read! while you don't have to wait for an update....ch. 15 is on the way!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 09/10/06 10:59
Chapter: An unexpected visitor

I knew it was Draco. He needs to hide there doesn't he? Doesn't he!? Ohh, thats good, 10.

Author's Response: tahnks for the 10! Yeah I reckon EVERYONE knew it was drake! hehe!

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 09/10/06 8:08
Chapter: "She's beautiful"

Woohoo! Baby Amy is here! You are a very good writer.... But I was just wondering how old you are. A lot of the authors on here are in college. But you say that you share the computer with the whole family. So, I dunno....

Author's Response: yeah I'm not in college. I'm fourteen. I know alot of you are all like in your twenties or 18+ though! thanks again for the review

Reviewer: Bertybottaholic
Date: 09/10/06 7:44
Chapter: Escapology using Air Vents

Draco to the rescue! Woohoo! That chapter was awesome! I like what you named the baby!

Author's Response: Thanks! I like the name Amy too! ;)

Reviewer: magicalmuggle818
Date: 09/10/06 5:42
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

This is a really cool story please update more soon


Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is in the queue!

Reviewer: h3art0f1nk
Date: 09/07/06 20:10
Chapter: The Moon and the Mark

Argh! I simply CAN NOT WAIT until the next chapter!!! I'm excited!!! Take your time though. I don't want you to rush it and have it turn out all messy or whatever. I'm just so excited!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! You'll be pleased to know that my internet is working again and the next chapter is ready for submission (finally!) :D

Reviewer: Beatrix_Potter
Date: 09/05/06 17:07
Chapter: The Death Eaters

Rache?My sister,lilylucyevans, does that in all her reviews.Ignore her.Your story is great!I'm gonna get Mum to get lilylucyevans for this..........she didn't mean a thing!Forget her stupid sobs.
~Beatrix_Potter

Author's Response: heehee! sibling rivalries! it's alright, but which review are you referring to? I can't seem to find one by her...

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