okay...even though i already reviewed, i have to agree with the last review. even though it isn't a proper noun, it is still in a title. everything in a title is capitilized except the prepositions, i think...so, yes, the f in funeral should be capitilized. hope this helps, and sorry if i sound too arrogant, or something!
Author's Response: oops! Uh..okay..I rest my case! Lol, thanks very much, glad someone explained it to me. It's not sounding arrogant, don't worry :-) i'll go and change it
Oohh! Evil cliffife again! Bad author, spectacular story.
Author's Response: Ooh thanks! I know, I'm just full of cliffhangers ¬¬....
YESS!! New chapter!! Crap! Who's going to die!?!?!?! AHH!! Well... can't wait until it's validated!!!
By the way... you should go back and edit the chapter title so that the f in funeral is capitalized. :D Again, can't WAIT for the validation!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Well, actually, since a funeral is not a proper noun or at the beginning of a sentence then it doesn't need a capital "f". I know it sometimes looks wrong when its the title of a chapter, and if I am wrong, i rest my case :-)
WHAT??? you better NOT be haveing a funeral for Snape*the slimeball* who will die in this chapter???
Author's Response: Sorry, can't tell you! *slaps self for being annoying to innocent reviewers* thanks though!
You got yourself a fish bicsuit?
Author's Response: Yep, you? ^^
wasn't this chapter called something else before i could have sworn it was?
Author's Response: Yes, you're right it was, if you go to my profile you'll know it's cuz the first ch 15 was deleted so I had to rewrite it.
I was looking at my old review for that chapter and I realized that i used the words fav and chappie. Ew. I think ive been around my cousin too long. I am starting to hate grammar mistakes. (squee, omg,omfg, lol, and all the fangirlish stuff dont count)
Author's Response: its ok i still get what you mean. But i use the word lol faaaarrrr too often, relly I should be banned from it ^_^!
Wait, how'd you see lost? Did you like see it on youtube or something?
Author's Response: Hahaha I have my methods :).
Author's Response: yeah something to that effect though!
yeah i read your profile.
I dont like Lion King at all. What makes you think I love it? STOP IT WITH THE INTERROGATION! *shifty eyes*
And for Elizabethtown, Ive seen part of it and its okay, and *my* orliness is in it so that helped...
Author's Response: No, I don't really like the lion king much. I was just running out of movies to put, and thought, hey, everyone likes simba right? Clearly not though. I HATED elizabethtown the first time I saw it, but my friend loves it and its ok i guess
Author's Response: Orli makes up 4 it though :-)
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OKAY, CAPS ARE LOCKED
I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU! YOU CANT NAME A CHAPTER THE FUNERAL AND THEN LET ME FORGET WHO DIED! NO, ESPECIALLY NOT WHEN YOU CANT READ IT YET! YOU JUST CANT DO THAT! NO! I AM GONNA HACK INTO THE INTERNET AND READ THIS NOW!
Now I just need to learn how to hack....
In the meantime!
I hate you you....APPLEPIE YOU!
Okay i hate you, exept for the part where I totally dont. I still hate you though
Author's Response: AaaaHHHHHH!!! *ducks apple pies* Its fortunate i like apples! Awww thank you for not hating me! , I hope you wont hate me more after you read :S. Noone has died yet, so this will be a long chapter. In the meantime, id love to tell you but i cant. Sorry! Thanks!
upgrade! Can you say upgrade? (haha like the tampon comercial) I mean UPDATE!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Upgrade! New and improved chapter! (Its true this is draft two which i was very annoyed at at first). thanks again!
Author's Response: By the way, I hate hilary duff too!
grrr! I want an update!!!!!! *throws tantrum* hfshjfsdkjfdsjdfs
Author's Response: hello i dont think I've heard from you before! Welcome to my story if not and thanks for reading! *changes voice from scary-high pitched welcome person to regular voice* the updates on its way ;)
Hmm...I'm trying to remember who died, actually, if anyone has. My memory is horrible, so I'll probably have to reread this story when this chapter is updated...well, thanks for such a good time reading this!
Author's Response: Thank you!! No one has died yet, don't worry, but hence the yet. In the meantime you'll have to wait I'm afraid!
OMG I WATCHED LOST LAST NIGHT ITS THE OTHERS AND SAWYERS IN A CAGE AND DUMB JACK FLASHBACKS AND SAWYER IN A CAGE AND JACK BEING DUMB AND SAWYER IN A CAGE! IT IS THE GREATEST THING EVER YOU ARE GONNA LOVE IT! EXCEPT FOR THE SKATE KISS WHICH I WILL REALLY ENJOY! AND DID I MENTION SAWYERS IN A CAGE??!?!!?!?!!?!?!!?!?!!
!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW!!!!!!! I WATCHED IT TOO!!!!!! AHHH!! FISH BISCUITS!!!!!lol i love fish biscuits now. Is it wednesday yet???
i love it sososososososso much!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah i agree with bertiebottaholic/ my friend, but this story is so good and it's my favoritest story on my favorites list! and you are my favorite author so far!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! :D
whoops i meant to say 15 either way I am one of bertiebottaholic's friends and this is what we talk about all day and we are kind of missing some important stuff in social studies class
Author's Response: Wow! That is so cool, and such a compliment!! Don't miss out too much cuz of this! :) thanks, i'll try to type quicker!!!
i was just sitting here and decided to read this chapter again. it is absolutly adoreable! i love it! now about chapter 16. i know your still probably working on it but what is your best guess?
Author's Response: Uh...well ch 15 got deleted which i was sad about :( because I have to re-write it, and that is one of my personal pet peeves!! But its geting there and I should have it ready soon I hope!
Um, I"m really sorry to bug you and everything, but my friends and I are really having a hard time waiting for the next chapter. So, if you could just, like, I dunno, type faster or something, we would be really happy. Please update, soon! I can assure you we're all in love with this story, so please, please update!!!!
Bertybottaholic
Author's Response: Okay, thank you!!! It's okay, Im glad you're enjoying the story! :) Chapter 15 will be ready hopefully very soon.
AH! When is chapter fifteen coming?!
Author's Response: Theres been a problem, chapter 15 got deleted by the mods, so i have to start all over. im re-writing ch 15 now, sorry for the inconveniance, but i should be able to submit it soon!
