Reviews For The New Surprise
Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 10/22/06 12:37
Chapter: The Funeral

WOOHOO THAT WAS GREAT! When tonks started singing i was like, "uh what the heck is going on..." because i think i skipped the line where it said she began to sing. I was like "oooooh, heheheh" when i re read it.

Anyways awesome chapter and im gonna go watch the newest lost promo. For the 50th time today.

Author's Response: Thanks! Woo, lost promo! Is it on youtube? Next episodes are sawyers flashbacks!! woot! but locke and eko are soo boring (no offense to locke fans) its like OMG just shut up...(to eko and locke, not anyone else)

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 10/22/06 10:47
Chapter: Strange beginnings

Well, I sent some apple pies to throw at you, and some apple pies for you to eat.


Author's Response: Thank you =). PS. I like cookies

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 10/21/06 17:41
Chapter: The Funeral

OMG im only half way through and i dont have time to read the rest, but well, it wins. Except for the part where remus died. *sends more apple pies*

Author's Response: Sorry =(...its tragic i know, but dont hate me....have an apple pie?

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 10/21/06 17:36
Chapter: Strange beginnings

WOOHOO! guess whos story got accepted!?!?!?! I dunno, ME!

Author's Response: Well done you! I'll go right over and check it out...

Reviewer: happilyhufflepuff
Date: 10/21/06 8:07
Chapter: The Funeral

okay, i would have shouted 'how could you ever kill-off remus?' but that last part was so sad and meaningful, i almost cried when Tonks sang her song.i love this story, you are the best writer on mugglenet. *sorry to everyone else*

Author's Response: wow thanks!! I'm so glad you thought so! This is such an amazing compliment to again!

Reviewer: hpfan012
Date: 10/20/06 16:52
Chapter: The Funeral

omg this is one of the most... lets see how can i put this?... heart filled chapters, that you have written. it was so good...i cried!!!! oh and the song, once again you have picked one of my favorite songs, elizabethtown is like my favorite movie!! update soon please!!!! 10/10

Author's Response: You cried! Aww, I'm sorry! But thank you! =) Elizabethtown is cute, but they didnt have that song in it =( it was only in the trailer! thanks for the lovely review!

Reviewer: peskypetunia
Date: 10/19/06 16:46
Chapter: The Funeral

Very nicely done. Very respectful of our favorite wolf. Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response: Cheers!! =)

Reviewer: lexi_b
Date: 10/19/06 13:29
Chapter: The Funeral

oh ps november 14th is the day after my birthday so thats kinda sad i guess...

Author's Response: Oh! Well...don't take this chapter the wrong way then....Happy birthday to you soon then!

Reviewer: lexi_b
Date: 10/19/06 12:27
Chapter: The Funeral

wow you wrote the funeral really well...i have to say this is one of your better chpaters, but all of them are really good! i could just see the image of the funeral in my head...really great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it was a good funeral, despite being sad.

Reviewer: ambush
Date: 10/19/06 10:34
Chapter: The Funeral

I loved it. The funeral was absolutely perfect, and have listened to 'Long Ride Home' and I loved it so much! It fits so well I think. Anyway excellent job.

Author's Response: I love that song =). As soon as I heard it, I listened to it over and over again until i was like "right, this fits with the next chapter!" Thanks again!

Reviewer: chan
Date: 10/19/06 7:36
Chapter: An unexpected visitor

i never saw that one coming up.any way its a good work.keep it up.

Author's Response: Cheers!

Reviewer: chan
Date: 10/19/06 7:36
Chapter: The Funeral

its a sad thing that remus died.

Author's Response: it is =( but y'know, one of them was going to die either way...

Reviewer: chan
Date: 10/19/06 7:36
Chapter: The Funeral

its a sad thing that remus died.

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 10/19/06 6:44
Chapter: The Funeral

That was so sad, I was nearly in tears. poor tonks, but well done, you sure got me...

Author's Response: nearly in tears?? aw, thank you! =)

Reviewer: chan
Date: 10/19/06 6:44
Chapter: An unexpected visitor

i never saw that one coming up.any way its a good work.keep it up.

Reviewer: h3art0f1nk
Date: 10/19/06 0:06
Chapter: The Funeral

Aw, that was sad. I'm just so glad that this finally got validated though!

Author's Response: Me too, I hate waiting for it to come! I love it when it does because i get reviews! =) thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: ThePatilTwins
Date: 10/18/06 20:05
Chapter: The Funeral

i love this story keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: prongs12433
Date: 10/18/06 17:52
Chapter: The Funeral

oh i loved it! not the whole remus dying part, but oh, it was a really beautiful chapter. 10/10!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the ten ^_^ and im glad u liked the chapter

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 10/18/06 17:33
Chapter: The Funeral

I can't believe you killed Remus. I love him. He is my favorite of all favorite characters. I shall not hold it against you though. As you said in your a/n, it's not a Harry Potter story without a death. Good chapter. Lisle is so cute and energetic. You gave Remus a very nice funeral.

Author's Response: Thanks, I know, I love him too, but yeah, one of them had to go....=(...

Reviewer: potterwidow
Date: 10/18/06 17:13
Chapter: The Funeral

That was tastefully done. I liked the song and her saddness for Draco. Loved the way Draco killed Snape. Quite good.

Author's Response: Thank you, I thought it would be appropriate for snape to die since he is evil in this. :)

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