poor lily, her parents always have to get killed... but at least it means that she can get closer to james! still sad, though = (
james is the one for lily not michael! she shouldnt 'check up on him'!!! gross! lily and james sittin' in a tree...that's how it should be, not lily and michael! lily is so confused that she doesn't even know she's confused! ugh! grr!!!
'That night she slept restlessly, her dreams invaded with scenarios of almost kissing James Potter.' ...of ALMOST kissing James Potter! Hahaa... I bet she'd like to!
*crying uncontrollably* p-p-poor l-lily! she--oh! *breaks into sobs*
ow that mustve hurt!
This chapter is much too like Emmyjean's "Crossroads"... almost exactly the same.
wasnt tat in their firth year?? o.O
very good not reling james as lillys husband just yet
Correction: James was the seeker, not Lily.
you are a horrible.. sick.. sick person.. but one hell of a writter!
nice story.....................but i would have preferred a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but a nice story nevertheless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
True to that
There is no happy ending biut there will be in jo's last book
Something goods gotta happen!!!!!
And she didn't even say anything
Cute story....I'm loving it!!!!!
OMG! You're ending has me in tears! This is such and amazing story! I had a vivid mental image of everything you read and the story seemed to flow perfectly. I'm going to be wondering about Charlie now.
Your story was great! It is sad to read the long J/L stories because you know how its going to end. I normally notice when they are about to die because the author says its late October or Halloween. But I think if you hadn't put that they died before you wrote the scene, I would have forget because I was so caught up with the story. The end seemed a little rushed but I guess you can't really lenghten the part where James and Lily die. Once again I loved the story.
i just want to tell u how exciting it was to read a lily/james story that MADE SENSE!!! no stupid cliches, (though i do like SOME) they don't fall in love in an hour(ok, a night--but still, it actually makes sense and it isn't like the ones that JAmes asks her out and she's suddenly like, omgosh, i love him, let's get married!) and Sirius acts like Sirius. BTW, i really liked how u represented Sirius. it was good, it was normal, and it made sense. Thanks for some relief!
OH MAN!!! AND I WANTED A HAPPILY EVER AFTER SSTORY!!! BUT I LOVE IT STILL (sorry for the caps but i am just trying to get over this..)
WHOAAAAA!!!! They died and marrried on halloween. scarryyyy. o man i'm so mad @ peter
YOUUUUUUUU SCARED ME SO BAD!!!! WHEN YOU SAID SHE DIED I WAS LIKE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
I wonder if Peter is a Death Eater right now...wow Snape is good