Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/06/07 4:35
Chapter: A Very Merry Christmas

poor lily, her parents always have to get killed... but at least it means that she can get closer to james! still sad, though = (

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/06/07 4:23
Chapter: Charlie's Demeanor

james is the one for lily not michael! she shouldnt 'check up on him'!!! gross! lily and james sittin' in a tree...that's how it should be, not lily and michael! lily is so confused that she doesn't even know she's confused! ugh! grr!!!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/06/07 4:12
Chapter: Marauders Tell All

'That night she slept restlessly, her dreams invaded with scenarios of almost kissing James Potter.' ...of ALMOST kissing James Potter! Hahaa... I bet she'd like to!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/06/07 4:02
Chapter: Going To Visit His Mum

*crying uncontrollably* p-p-poor l-lily! she--oh! *breaks into sobs*

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/05/07 18:02
Chapter: Prelude: Nasty Beginnings

ow that mustve hurt!

Reviewer: Misurare i Cuori
Date: 04/25/07 15:25
Chapter: Prelude: Nasty Beginnings

This chapter is much too like Emmyjean's "Crossroads"... almost exactly the same.

Reviewer: JessC
Date: 04/12/07 15:10
Chapter: Within Lily

wasnt tat in their firth year?? o.O

Reviewer: coolies321
Date: 04/10/07 20:14
Chapter: Strange Occurrences

very good not reling james as lillys husband just yet

Reviewer: Rumo Zamonien
Date: 04/05/07 18:56
Chapter: Within Lily

Correction: James was the seeker, not Lily.

Reviewer: xXx_Taurus_xXx
Date: 04/03/07 2:38
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

you are a horrible.. sick.. sick person.. but one hell of a writter!

Reviewer: tiffanykapoor
Date: 03/23/07 12:48
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

nice story.....................but i would have preferred a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but a nice story nevertheless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/19/07 15:52
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

True to that
There is no happy ending biut there will be in jo's last book
Something goods gotta happen!!!!!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/18/07 7:29
Chapter: Prelude: Nasty Beginnings

Awww
And she didn't even say anything

Anyways
Cute story....I'm loving it!!!!!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/10/07 0:46
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

OMG! You're ending has me in tears! This is such and amazing story! I had a vivid mental image of everything you read and the story seemed to flow perfectly. I'm going to be wondering about Charlie now.

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 01/25/07 22:39
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

Your story was great! It is sad to read the long J/L stories because you know how its going to end. I normally notice when they are about to die because the author says its late October or Halloween. But I think if you hadn't put that they died before you wrote the scene, I would have forget because I was so caught up with the story. The end seemed a little rushed but I guess you can't really lenghten the part where James and Lily die. Once again I loved the story.
HPAndHG4ever

Reviewer: wishmyhairwasred
Date: 01/22/07 10:08
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

i just want to tell u how exciting it was to read a lily/james story that MADE SENSE!!! no stupid cliches, (though i do like SOME) they don't fall in love in an hour(ok, a night--but still, it actually makes sense and it isn't like the ones that JAmes asks her out and she's suddenly like, omgosh, i love him, let's get married!) and Sirius acts like Sirius. BTW, i really liked how u represented Sirius. it was good, it was normal, and it made sense. Thanks for some relief!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/14/07 10:33
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

OH MAN!!! AND I WANTED A HAPPILY EVER AFTER SSTORY!!! BUT I LOVE IT STILL (sorry for the caps but i am just trying to get over this..)

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/14/07 10:27
Chapter: One Step Closer

WHOAAAAA!!!! They died and marrried on halloween. scarryyyy. o man i'm so mad @ peter

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/14/07 10:21
Chapter: Age Catching Up

YOUUUUUUUU SCARED ME SO BAD!!!! WHEN YOU SAID SHE DIED I WAS LIKE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/14/07 10:17
Chapter: Perpetuus Procella

I wonder if Peter is a Death Eater right now...wow Snape is good

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