Reviewer: ilyjean
Date: 07/23/12 12:12
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

That was an amazing story. I liked how it could be funny at times, but also have some sad parts too. I think, unlike some other fan fiction, you made them stay true to their character and everything.
Some people don't like it, but the ending was pretty good. Because that is what happened in the books and all. However, the Charlie thing was the only bit I would change. Maybe make it so she died fighting Voldemort or something more Gryffindor.
Overall, it was an amazing story, and I really liked it.

Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/14/12 0:55
Chapter: Their Aura

i wish lily would tell charlie more about her dream and that she would think more about it.

Reviewer: HermioneJeanPotter
Date: 09/17/11 7:21
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

I loved the story! The ending was sort of sad, but it was still really good :)

Reviewer: HermioneJeanPotter
Date: 09/16/11 17:44
Chapter: Life Goes On

Aww, I usually don't ship Severus/Lily, but that was sweet :)

Reviewer: HermioneJeanPotter
Date: 09/15/11 21:30
Chapter: Closed Door, Open Window

Aww, I love this chapter and the one before it. So sweet :)

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 25
Date: 09/02/11 3:41
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

no offence but you ruined it with the last chapter. i loved it but now i have read that last chapter i hate it. and how could you do that to your character charlie anyway? if you had to write that end chapter dont write her off as a slytheryn, she was a damned gryffindor. she should have worked furiously for her fianace and died at voldemorts himself hand. but you ruined it instead, well done.

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 25
Date: 12/03/10 2:25
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

What a horrid way to leave a story. You could of made up an alternate universe something different, I was really enjoying that story until you ruined it by killing them both. And Charlie you should of given her a proper ending not some silly hung about her running off. Toucans the impression that she was a true groffindor brave and courageous not some silly slythern whos weak. Dissaponted Majorly.

Reviewer: hplvr1
Date: 11/30/10 18:58
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

Personally, I loved the story overall. However, I didn't like how James and Lily were fighting in the beginning, I thought that was a little out of character. But that quickly passed and it was incredible from there. My second and last complaint is the last sentence. Really?! You're going to do that to us?! But truly, I loved it, it was great!

Reviewer: twilightfan101
Date: 08/07/09 16:44
Chapter: Multo Subvenio, Lily's Saving Grace

that is going to mess up the fact that lily has harry

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/26/09 17:06
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

This is probably my faveroite story. I haven't read one that ended like this. It was great. I liked how there were funny parts in this along with sad ones. You did an amazing job on when she was captured. Most people only say that she was skinny and you didn't. You did an amazing job on all of this and I absolutly love it.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/26/09 10:11
Chapter: Within Lily

Thats a good prank. Sirius was my faveroite.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/26/09 9:52
Chapter: Prelude: Nasty Beginnings

This is a good chapter. I like it.

Reviewer: in love with harry
Date: 05/05/09 14:52
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

thats a wonderful story bu tterribel

Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 02/07/09 18:50
Chapter: Taken Hostage

Every time I've read a scene in a book where one of the characters is being held captive, with nothing but food coming in once or twice every day, the author gives you a picture in your head of them as bone-thin, but never do they let you think for an instant that there's anything else wrong with them. As though their teeth are still pearly white, their legs still smooth. It's so unrealistic. So every time I read this chapter, I like it, because you make it more real.

:] (Yes, in case you haven't noticed, I have read and reviewed this fic before. It's one of my very favorites. XD)

Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 02/07/09 17:37
Chapter: Life Goes On

*shudders* Disgusting. =P But kind of sweet. Maybe... Nope, disgusting still. But I love that you put it in, anyway.

Reviewer: Angela_Prongs
Date: 02/07/09 16:32
Chapter: Interlude: As the Storm Raged

*sniffles* You got Voldy's thoughts perfect here, but I wish he weren't so evil. Ah, well. Guess that's reality. Er...sort of. XD

Reviewer: PeaceLovePotter
Date: 09/14/08 15:20
Chapter: A Very Merry Christmas

This story is sooo good!

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 07/07/08 9:47
Chapter: No Happy Endings Here

Fuck fuck shit. *cries*

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 07/07/08 9:27
Chapter: One Step Closer

Haha okay I LOVED his proposal it was bloody fucking amazing! Hahahahaha.

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 07/07/08 9:14
Chapter: Age Catching Up

Oh god do you realize what you bloody did?! YOU EFFIN KILLED ME! 'Lily died.' Oh hell, ohh my fucking god, even allowing for knowing she doesn't die till Harry, you fucking...oh shit. Fuck!

Oh shit shit shit I love this story! Argh.

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