Whoa. That's all I can say. This was extremely well written! What did that potion do exactly? Did it like temporarily turn Snape into a muggle? And oh the possibilities of Wormtail and a Snape Polyjuice! This was a wonderful fic! Keep up the great work!!! :)
Author's Response: The potion gave him obsessive compulsive disorder. Glad you liked the story.
Great beginning! I thought your story was really well-written! Keep writing, please!
Author's Response: Thanks, it should be done soon.
Seems like a good story so far! Very well written, I like how you see Peter's manipulativeness and how he uses power in a mean way even at a young age, and the idea of Muggle spells that work but the blocks aren't known is certainly very intriguing. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. I plan to finish it next week.