Reviews For Civility
Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 03/28/11 13:02
Chapter: Civility

This is just begging for a sequel, please make another one.

Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 01/18/11 7:39
Chapter: Civility

WHAT YOUR STOPPING IT THERE!!!!!!!You were right, the end of the chapter just SCEARMS squeal!!!!

Reviewer: LuckyRatTail
Date: 07/27/09 18:38
Chapter: Prologue: In Medias Res

What a beautifully written piece of prose! I love Draco/Hermione and was recommended this fic on the forums. You've well and truly got me intrigued, I'll read on eagerly... ;o)

Reviewer: Twilight0Potter
Date: 03/28/09 23:39
Chapter: Prologue: In Medias Res

:O

woah. epic battle seen

harry's dead? what about hermione?

ah! i must read more. that's some pretty crazy stuffs

Reviewer: ZomgShaylex
Date: 02/14/09 21:46
Chapter: Civility

I had forgotten about this story.

Reading it again, wow.
So much emotion, so much pain, so much happiness.
I'm jittery just thinking about all the things they had to go through to get to this one point.
This is one point where everything is on the line.
I don't think I've reacted this stongly to a fanfiction in a long while.
I screamed, I cried, I laughed, and I screamed some more.
Needless to say, this fanfiction is definitely one of the best out there.
You should be very proud of your writing!

Reviewer: ruber08
Date: 12/12/08 2:35
Chapter: Civility

That was fantastic! The story made me feel, made my heart pound, brought me closer to tears than I have been since Sirius died in book 5. Chapter 11 was the absolute best, it made me feel alive. The writing style and diction captured me, it was perfect (well almost, there were a few typos). The slight cliffy at the end was close to evil, but I guess its understandable. I just wish we knew what happened, though the battle would have added a lot more to the story than you may have wanted. I supose if you added it, the fic would no longer be pure romance and that is what I loved.

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/26/08 1:03
Chapter: Civility

I agree with the ones who call for a sequal!!! How could you leave us with such an ending that leaves us at the edge of our seats?! I'm joking, I love those types of endings because then you can imagine exactly what you want to happen. I loved this fiction, I truly, truly hope that you keep writing.

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/24/08 1:00
Chapter: These Frail Words

Finally! This chapter made me angry, sad, frustrated, and exstatic all at once! I love this fiction!

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/24/08 1:00
Chapter: These Frail Words

Finally! This chapter made me angry, sad, frustrated, and exstatic all at once! I love this fiction!

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/22/08 23:37
Chapter: Han

Oh. My. God! Brilliant!

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/22/08 1:01
Chapter: Iris

Intense can't even begin to describe this chapter.

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/22/08 0:45
Chapter: The Order of the Phoenix

I really like this fiction! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Maximum Potter
Date: 05/18/08 22:50
Chapter: Foreshadow

Loved this chapter!! It's really interesting and creative. I can't wait to read the rest

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 04/20/08 13:36
Chapter: Civility

This story is amazing....
Make asequal or at least another fic...
Not a one shot...
they are to short...
You are on my favs...
ur great

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 04/20/08 13:26
Chapter: Broken

I love thos part...
And here I am, whining over a boy! Draco Malfoy, no less! she tried convincing herself.

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 04/20/08 13:21
Chapter: These Frail Words

So sad...
And yet so sweet...
She called him Malfoy! :O

Oh, sod off Malfoy! Merlin, I’m so disgusted with you! After all this, the only thing you have to say to me is a command? Is to call you by your last name?! What sort of- what kind- who are you?!” she sputtered.

“I really thought I was beginning to know that answer,” she continued in gripping tones. “But all you’ve done today is prove that wrong! Just answer me one question and I’ll leave you alone: was there anything growing between us? Friendship, at the least? Could you feel it, or was it just my mind making it up?”

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 04/20/08 13:11
Chapter: Han

This is so sad...
You never really cared at all…” she said in a daze, now looking past Malfoy. “You- were using me… maybe that’s a bit harsh,” she rationalized with herself. “But… you certainly didn’t want me… like I… like I wanted you," she continued, the incredible hurt vibrating her voice.

"It kills me to say it, Malfoy,” she said softly, in a tone that showed it really was killing her. “…but maybe I was wrong about you. Maybe- perhaps you’re not the person I thought you were… the person I was so sure you could be.”

He had succeeded. He had won the battle against her wits, and moreover against himself. He’d triumphed in making her believe exactly what he’d wanted her to.

But he could never recall a moment before when winning had felt so much more like dying.

And ironically, he found himself painstakingly disappointed, in everything: the world, his life, himself, Love...

Hermione’s eyes flashed across his face. She looked completely, utterly helpless and alone.

“It- none of it… meant anything to you, did it?” she barely whispered.

Malfoy’s breathing began to hurt. It took everything in him to keep inhaling and exhaling, much less keep a straight, dignified face.

“Just… just so you know,” she continued in a quiet voice, “It meant something to me… you meant something to me.”

And she turned slowly, achingly away as one trembling hand reached out for the door.

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 04/20/08 13:04
Chapter: Iris

Oh my god Poor Hermoine...
Oh and I guess poor draco.
It reminds me of last time

Well- well that means- that means- ” Hermione cut herself short. Horror and dread pulsed through her blood, feeding on her newfound panic.

He’s not hiding anymore, she thought frantically. Lucius could be after Draco right now! He could be in danger! If his dad shows up, he’ll surely know he’s been with me! He’ll- he’ll kill him!

And with that frightening thought, Hermione shot up from her chair and raced out of the room, ignoring Harry’s perplexed face and Ron’s summoning her name. Heart beating a tattoo in her chest, she ran as if being chased, too afraid and worried about Malfoy to think that if Lucius was there, she’d die as well.

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 04/20/08 11:37
Chapter: The Order of the Phoenix

This part is so good
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Well- well that means- that means- ” Hermione cut herself short. Horror and dread pulsed through her blood, feeding on her newfound panic.

He’s not hiding anymore, she thought frantically. Lucius could be after Draco right now! He could be in danger! If his dad shows up, he’ll surely know he’s been with me! He’ll- he’ll kill him!

And with that frightening thought, Hermione shot up from her chair and raced out of the room, ignoring Harry’s perplexed face and Ron’s summoning her name. Heart beating a tattoo in her chest, she ran as if being chased, too afraid and worried about Malfoy to think that if Lucius was there, she’d die as well.

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 04/20/08 11:31
Chapter: Internal Struggles, External Forces

The meeting for the Order of the Phoenix is in the Room of Requirement, Hogwarts Castle.

So cool how ya did it.

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