Awwwwwwwwww! So sweet and cute! I loved it! Especially when Hermione was surprised about her pregnancy. :) how naive some women can be... (I can say that, since I am a girl myself!)
Loved it! It's so sweet and well written. Good Job
I really loved the story!!!! That was such a cute ending with mentioning that Santino never lived up to his name! I really like both stories!
Great addition to the first story, love more detal to their lives
awww, this story is so cute!!! I love it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
“Well that’s not going to fit inside of me I can tell you that much.” He made sure she ate her words that night, among other things.
hahahahahahahahaha that cracked me up
i had tears in my eyes by the end of this one!! it was both, funny and heart warming. that last sentence finished it perfectly!! Thank you.
Author's Response: I should thank you, for taking the time to read this and leave me such a lovely review.
I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
awww snape's little baby!!!!! how cute!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. This was one of my first stories.
hi, ancientgirl i really liked this fanfic of yours because it is different and your right although its short it has a very happy ending. i have also read your other fanfics such as the long wait and the lestrange days and i think they are great to say the least. i think you have an exceptional skill with a pen so to speak and i look forward to reading more of your work soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm very happy to hear that you have enjoyed my writing. I don't post here anymore and there are many more stories I have that aren't posted here. If you are interested, go here: http://www.thepetulantpoetess.com/viewuser.php?uid=68. I've got everything up at that site. I am currently working on something right now. Everything I have up though other than my current work is complete. If you go I'd be interested in knowing what you think of the others. Thanks again for taking the time to read my writing.
lovly just so lovely dont they make a great couple!!
Author's Response: I think they do. If Hermione were a bit older and Snape a bit younger, I think JKR could make it work.
All I can say is I love it. You did a really good job of showing how their relationship grew into love within a one shot.
Author's Response: Thank you again. I wanted to keep this a one-shot, but I also wanted to show the slow progression of their growing love. I appreciate you taking the time to read both of the stories.
I love your 'There they were' series! I've read it countless times, and still isn't old! I'll probably read it few hundred more times!
Author's Response: Thank you, Leah. How wonderful that you enjoy them so much. Those were the two first stories I ever wrote for the fandom. I wanted them to be different than the other stories out there that had them falling in love on their wedding night.
10/10 as usual. Really lovely story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
oh that was so sweet. I was surprised you had Snape in the waiting room instead of beside his wife. Maybe somethings in the magic world have not advanced as much as they have in the muggle world? In any case it was a lovely ending. thak you
AWWWWW!!! That was so sweet. I love how at the end you put that the baby never really did live up to his name, it was cute! Awesome job....10!
i feel the same way as redvelvetcanopy in that i found the start really funny and the end really romantic and mushy! i still dont really know what the Marriage law challenge is but im hoping you will fill me in!
Author's Response: The marraige law is a chellenge made by a yahoo community called "When I Kiss the Teacher" (WIKTT). Mininstry of Magic passes a law in which all pureblood wizards or witches have to marry muggle born or half muggle students. There are quite a few longer versions of this challenge, but I figured I'd do my part by just making a one-shot.
Okay, first I was gasping with laugher at her response to seeing him naked and then feeling all mushy at the end. Well-written--it just flowed so well!!
Author's Response: Ah, so you found the sequel. LOL, I'm glad you liked this one too. I had originally meant for it to be just the first story, but after I put in the "not yet" I felt compelled to do a second shot. I'm glad you enjoyed this as well. Btw, I love your username.
you are a fantastic writer! a great story as usual i would like t osay i hope you write many hg/ss love stories! i give u a 10
Author's Response: LOL, I just finished responding you your comment for the first story. I'm glad you found this one. I had originally meant to make just the first one, but I felt I wanted to write something about them growing to love each other. Thank you for your wonderful comments about my writing. I really appreciate it.
AS in your other stories, LOVE this one too. I don't hold too high of hopes for JKR to have a happy ending ever for our dear Severus... She's admitted too many times he's not a good person, etc. But he's such a complex character she could easily "run with him." But I think my dear, you've done this quite well *smile* and I so enjoy your version(s) of him :-) This one is lovely...
Author's Response: I tend to also believe our Severus may not end well. I hope he does, but alas, I must prepare myself for the worst. Which of course is why I like to give him happy endings in my stories. I'm glad you liked this. I didn't want them to be instantly in love, but to give the reader the idea that they both were willing to give it a go. I appreciate your comments, as always, you made me feel good.