Nice book choice for Lily btw...haha
I think this is my favorite chapter. OF ALL LILY/JAMES FICS!! The Sirius part was freaking hilarious!! The end was cute, but the part with Sirius was so funny. I had fun reading this chapter. I can't wait to find out what will happen to Sirius (Mwahaha)
that was funny I think Lily is going to get mad about that being the first kiss and be like "you don't remember our real first?" or something like that
Hahaha! This chapter was HILARIOUS! " AND some things are smaller than they were before. SMALLER!" Loved this part! I wonder WHAT part that was... HMMMMM. Awesome chapter, this was. Keep it up, I'm waiting anxiously for more!!
I loved it! Personally, I don't feel bad for Sirius. He deserved it. But, then again, if he hadn't done it, this would have never happened. But, would we have wanted it to happen? Idk, I m confusing myself. But, he is definitely in big trouble. Update soon!
ha ha ha, that was great, and i love lily and james...they are so precious, and poor sirius, ugly and miserable.....bummer for him. man o goly, that was such a great chapter....and things are starting to come together, but the question is, how will lily react to the "first kiss" uh-oh. anyway, update soon!
Awwwww! Finally! J/L together, and with the real James! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! 10/10
oww that was cute there first actual kiss with real james!
*evil look* cliff hanger..... I hate them. But this fic is really good. I feel so bad for Sirius, though. Everything bad is happening to him. Update soon!
cmon, u have to update this isnt fair Great Story i love the suspense
OMG I think that was my favorite chapter yet! Great job! Very funny...and good cliff-hanger!
I don't think I've ever seen James that scared before. Histarical! What happened to Sirius? I need to know! What have you doen to him to make hime not attractive? What have you done?! Hopefully it will be fixed. Please update soon so we can find out!!!!
I really likr this fic... very creative...plz update soon!
Please update soon! I'm so dying to know what's next. Hurry! Your story is AWESOME so far.
I'm really enjoying this story, it is very funny.
Wow, such confusion. Poor Sirius, he only wanted to help out and all but it went the other way. Poor James who had to jump over a table and over some girls to escape Lily, I found that really really funny. Lily, who is clueless. Very funny, and creative. Love it. 10000!
i liked that...very funny, awww poor sirius, he has messed things up so badly! poor lily who has no idea as to what is going on...anyway, very good, update ASAP!
I can't wait to see what happens next!! Update soon! 10
So waiting for the update, this story is very funny
pretty cool. i'm interested to see what happens next.