Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 02/15/06 13:19
Chapter: Water Fights and Kisses

Nice book choice for Lily btw...haha

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 02/15/06 13:18
Chapter: Water Fights and Kisses

I think this is my favorite chapter. OF ALL LILY/JAMES FICS!! The Sirius part was freaking hilarious!! The end was cute, but the part with Sirius was so funny. I had fun reading this chapter. I can't wait to find out what will happen to Sirius (Mwahaha)

Reviewer: potterchick2010
Date: 02/12/06 15:12
Chapter: Water Fights and Kisses

that was funny I think Lily is going to get mad about that being the first kiss and be like "you don't remember our real first?" or something like that

Reviewer: fishsticks
Date: 02/07/06 10:21
Chapter: Water Fights and Kisses

Hahaha! This chapter was HILARIOUS! " AND some things are smaller than they were before. SMALLER!" Loved this part! I wonder WHAT part that was... HMMMMM. Awesome chapter, this was. Keep it up, I'm waiting anxiously for more!!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 02/03/06 23:23
Chapter: Water Fights and Kisses

I loved it! Personally, I don't feel bad for Sirius. He deserved it. But, then again, if he hadn't done it, this would have never happened. But, would we have wanted it to happen? Idk, I m confusing myself. But, he is definitely in big trouble. Update soon!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 02/03/06 18:14
Chapter: Water Fights and Kisses

ha ha ha, that was great, and i love lily and james...they are so precious, and poor sirius, ugly and miserable.....bummer for him. man o goly, that was such a great chapter....and things are starting to come together, but the question is, how will lily react to the "first kiss" uh-oh. anyway, update soon!

Reviewer: cry_of_the_augurey
Date: 02/03/06 8:52
Chapter: Water Fights and Kisses

Awwwww! Finally! J/L together, and with the real James! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! 10/10

Reviewer: Katie_1313
Date: 02/03/06 6:29
Chapter: Water Fights and Kisses

oww that was cute there first actual kiss with real james!

Reviewer: cry_of_the_augurey
Date: 01/31/06 16:58
Chapter: Confusion

*evil look* cliff hanger..... I hate them. But this fic is really good. I feel so bad for Sirius, though. Everything bad is happening to him. Update soon!

Reviewer: paddfootyprongs
Date: 01/30/06 18:59
Chapter: Confusion

cmon, u have to update this isnt fair Great Story i love the suspense

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 01/30/06 10:22
Chapter: Confusion

OMG I think that was my favorite chapter yet! Great job! Very funny...and good cliff-hanger!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/29/06 20:24
Chapter: Confusion

I don't think I've ever seen James that scared before. Histarical! What happened to Sirius? I need to know! What have you doen to him to make hime not attractive? What have you done?! Hopefully it will be fixed. Please update soon so we can find out!!!!

Reviewer: MagikalMe
Date: 01/29/06 16:17
Chapter: Confusion

I really likr this fic... very creative...plz update soon!

Reviewer: fishsticks
Date: 01/29/06 9:35
Chapter: Confusion

Please update soon! I'm so dying to know what's next. Hurry! Your story is AWESOME so far.

Reviewer: nenya
Date: 01/16/06 6:21
Chapter: Confusion

I'm really enjoying this story, it is very funny.

Reviewer: Sirius Krummy Fan
Date: 01/15/06 17:16
Chapter: Confusion

Wow, such confusion. Poor Sirius, he only wanted to help out and all but it went the other way. Poor James who had to jump over a table and over some girls to escape Lily, I found that really really funny. Lily, who is clueless. Very funny, and creative. Love it. 10000!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 01/13/06 19:58
Chapter: Confusion

i liked that...very funny, awww poor sirius, he has messed things up so badly! poor lily who has no idea as to what is going on...anyway, very good, update ASAP!

Reviewer: GinnyRox
Date: 01/06/06 22:46
Chapter: Consequences

I can't wait to see what happens next!! Update soon! 10

Reviewer: nenya
Date: 01/05/06 11:32
Chapter: Consequences

So waiting for the update, this story is very funny

Reviewer: emily the strange
Date: 12/29/05 21:17
Chapter: Consequences

pretty cool. i'm interested to see what happens next.

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