Reviews For Fatally Yours
Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 08/04/11 8:39
Chapter: Waiting For The Moment To Strike

I think you forgot to mention this was total OOC. Also, I didn't enjoy reading this at all.

Reviewer: lilypotter76
Date: 02/10/08 15:12
Chapter: Stealing Glances

Oohhh, I like the tension!

Reviewer: ellienellie111
Date: 01/25/08 18:52
Chapter: Cold Eyes

have you never read the books? your version of hermione's personality is opposite that of jk rowlings. if your going to use the character, you have to use the whole character, not just the name.

Reviewer: vampyre_girl
Date: 01/17/08 20:18
Chapter: Waiting For The Moment To Strike

it says "his steely gray eyes peering into her chocolate brown ones", but are't her eyes supposed to be red?

Reviewer: I_heart_Luna
Date: 10/02/07 19:14
Chapter: Fatally Yours

It's a really good story. Very sad.

Reviewer: Diadem27
Date: 09/15/07 11:11
Chapter: Stealing Glances

Very good:D Well done!

Reviewer: blondeastudent
Date: 08/17/07 18:19
Chapter: Waiting For The Moment To Strike

Draco truly is evil. But Hemione is also.

Reviewer: dontmesswidme
Date: 03/30/07 3:21
Chapter: Waiting For The Moment To Strike

omg...this is the worst story ever..next time u consider writing...for the love of god remeber they r wizards not muggles and also try to actually make them sound like themselves..they sound like weirdos frm a weird chick flick

Reviewer: Manifesty
Date: 03/24/07 21:47
Chapter: Fiery Emotions

I LOVE the rooms they are so beautiful. I also really like the dialog. Nice 'n' evil. LOL

Reviewer: Manifesty
Date: 03/24/07 21:38
Chapter: Cold Eyes

This is nice and certainly funny but a little, itsy bit to quick. Looks aren't everything.

Reviewer: Manifesty
Date: 03/24/07 21:37
Chapter: Cold Eyes

This is nice and certainly funny but a little, itsy bit to quick. Looks aren't everything.

Reviewer: kirwil
Date: 02/13/07 10:46
Chapter: Fatally Yours

wicked story it was so kool but why did he have to die they should have got together again!!!!!

Reviewer: kirwil
Date: 02/13/07 10:46
Chapter: Fatally Yours

wicked story it was so kool but why did he have to die they should have got together again!!!!!

Reviewer: kirwil
Date: 02/13/07 10:46
Chapter: Fatally Yours

wicked story it was so kool but why did he have to die they should have got together again!!!!!

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/29/07 21:20
Chapter: Fatally Yours

wow. that was very unexpected. it was sad ending. overall, i thought the story was kind of rushed, but it was still nice. good job on it.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/29/07 21:19
Chapter: Waiting For The Moment To Strike

is he like going to propose or something?

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/29/07 21:19
Chapter: The Halloween Ball

aww...they are being nice to each other. cute.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/29/07 21:18
Chapter: A Suprising Dream

i think this was my favorite chapter until now. i loved the part where she kissed him.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/29/07 21:15
Chapter: A Kiss Can Hold Mystery

I like the title for this chapter. it was a nice chapter. good job

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 01/29/07 13:21
Chapter: Hating Love

wat does hermione got up her sleeve? nice chapter.good job

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