Reviewer: nayin
Date: 10/16/11 16:20
Chapter: one-shot

I love this

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 01/04/10 20:21
Chapter: one-shot

Awww, that was a really nice pick -me -up! Thanks!

Reviewer: Specialis Revelio
Date: 09/07/08 14:43
Chapter: one-shot

Wow, that was pretty awesome. I don't normally like first-person stories but that was really well written.

Reviewer: libby143
Date: 06/05/08 20:38
Chapter: one-shot

I loved this story! I think that you captured Ginny perfectly. I especially loved the part when she was describing exactly how she told off McLaggen! You write really, really well, and I'd love to read more of your stuff... if there is any. Great job!

Reviewer: the_boy_who_lives
Date: 11/13/07 14:16
Chapter: one-shot

wow just like princess's diary

Reviewer: Harry4Ginny
Date: 11/02/07 18:42
Chapter: one-shot

That was fantastic. I think you really captured Ginny well in this fic, nice job! :)

Reviewer: hpfan45
Date: 08/06/07 11:11
Chapter: one-shot

awww i ttly love this and how she tries to convince herself that she still likes dean

Reviewer: xGrimmauldGirlx
Date: 07/28/07 2:20
Chapter: one-shot

so adorable.

Reviewer: Dory Notell
Date: 07/04/07 20:30
Chapter: one-shot

interesting

Reviewer: SCPGOHDad24
Date: 04/03/07 11:10
Chapter: one-shot

ahhhh!
i love ginny!!!
you did a great job with this. i especially loved: What did I care if my touch gave him goose bumps, or made him take a sharp breath or get all fidgety? Im ashamed to say it mustve just been some sort of sick fascination I had.
great job!

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 01/21/07 22:35
Chapter: one-shot

Oh, FANTASTIC! A wonderful job, spot on characterization, and hilariously funny to boot. I especially loved the last part about exactly what kind of kiss it was. And you write very well, gramatically and stuff, by the way.

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 01/21/07 22:34
Chapter: one-shot

Oh, FANTASTIC! A wonderful job, spot on characterization, and hilariously funny to boot. I especially loved the last part about exactly what kind of kiss it was. And you write very well, gramatically and stuff, by the way.

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 11/30/06 18:49
Chapter: one-shot

OMG!
This story is amazing!
I loved it!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 08/23/06 7:41
Chapter: one-shot

good story, good way Ginny wrote about her feelings and stuff

Reviewer: shellabella818
Date: 05/19/06 19:00
Chapter: one-shot

aww

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 01/09/06 14:25
Chapter: one-shot

This was awesome, I think that you portrayed Ginny perfectly. It was very cute and I absolutely loved it.

Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 01/08/06 16:50
Chapter: one-shot

This was awesome, I think that you portrayed Ginny perfectly. It was very cute and I absolutely loved it.

Reviewer: Ashwinder
Date: 11/24/05 8:17
Chapter: one-shot

Wonderful job! There have been so many post-HBP "missing moment" fics that show Harry and Ginny's walk around the lake or the happy hour Harry dreams about instead of doing his Herbology, but I haven't seen one like this. Thanks for such a refreshing, original idea.

You had me from the opening line. It was a really good hook. I also like how you tie the scenes together by repeating and expaning on the idea that Ginny thinks she might be going mad. It helps show how she's slowly coming to the realisation that her feelings for Harry aren't gone after all. That really came through well in this story.

I also liked your characterisation of Ginny. I've seen a lot of detractors claim that she comes across as a Mary Sue in HBP, but you've shown a real flaw in her character (one Harry overlooks, because he's infatuated with her). She's not always sure how to deal with her emotions so she takes them out on other people, even if they don't deserve it. I especially liked your insight on why she was so mean to Ron when he and Harry came across her and Dean in the corridor. Personally that scene never bothered me in canon, because I know siblings can be really cruel to each other (and still love each other -- which is something else you showed in the hospital wing scene), but I've seen others say that Ginny was too mean there. You've given her a motivation that I feel explains her reaction very well. Just in general you've got a good handle on how she was feeling throughout most of the book. I also have to mention I laughed at the idea she pulled the maggot out of Harry's hair partly to gross out Fleur.

I only found a couple of nitpicks that you might want to correct. The first one was a typo in this phrase: Ive got not business comparing them. I think you mean no business there. Also Quidditch terms, such as Snitch and Bludger, need a capital. Those are really minor, though, and they didn't take away from my enjoyment of your story. Great job!



Author's Response: Wow. That was one heck of a review! Thank you for going into such detail about why you liked my story. I'm flattered that you noticed so much of what I tried to get across! But most of all, thank you for telling me what I needed to fix! I think I found everything (the story was betaed, believe it or not) and fixed it. I love nitpicks! I think you must be as much of a perfectionist as I am. THANK YOU, Ashwinder!

Reviewer: Lauren Button
Date: 11/15/05 2:48
Chapter: one-shot

Aww, I really really like this story! Even though I knew how it would end and all that it was really refreshing to read. You write really well and it was so easy to read every word. You know how you read some stories and you find it hard to beleive what the characters are saying and how it all happened? Well yours is nothing like that. I'm completely convinced that that's exactly what happened between Ginny and Dean. I don't know how you do it, but you certainly did it for me. *10*

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