Reviewer: Puertorriquena
Date: 11/26/05 23:08
Chapter: Hope

My gosh... all the fics i am reading today are so sad and beautiful and ahh! It is all to much. Gosh this is so why I love reading fanfiction. I am going to write one soon, thanks to you. You story was lovely, I loved the way you ended it. Knowing that she lives and just saying Ron. My mind soared after that. Bloody Brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to know I inspired someone to write - thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anithomas
Date: 11/23/05 16:14
Chapter: Hope

That was so beautiful! I loved how Hermione's body went all numb and everything...I was so scared she was really going to die. You made it seem so real! Incredible!

Author's Response: Thank you! I would say that it's written so well on Hermione's behalf because I've been there and have experience with it, but that is a lie. I guess I just got lucky and guessed what it's like right. :D

Reviewer: acire
Date: 11/20/05 3:08
Chapter: Hope

I really liked that, it was very good. It had a nice pace to it and I liked the way we saw what Hermione was thinking, as well as Ron. I would have to agree with ravenclawslion17(sp.?) that it ended suddenly but it matched the pace nicely. It worked fine as a one shot but I'm sure if you wanted to you could turn it into a decent chapter fic. Anyway, I think I'll go have a look at your other fic now. x acire x

Author's Response: I'm not sure what I was thinking with ending this one so quickly. I guess I wanted to give a view of what they were both thinking under the circumstances, and then just giving the whole thing a turn-around with Hermione's awakening. Well, actually, I'm not sure why. At the time, it just seemed the right place to leave off. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: heidi_weasley
Date: 11/18/05 23:34
Chapter: Hope

what can i say - i cried - awesome

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: ravenclawslion17
Date: 11/15/05 15:51
Chapter: Hope

Very good! I really liked it. It was a great one-shot, and it ended so suddenly, but in a good way! Keep up the good work with any else that you write! Also, I had found a typo (I think) when I was reading but my computer broke down and now that I'm back I can't find it. I'm sorry! And when Ron says 'I've lost Harry already...please, don't let me lose you, too.' am I right in assuming that Harry defeated Voldemort but died in the process? Earlier it was stated that Harry defeated Voldemort. Anyway - great job! I'm looking forward to more from you!

Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! I'm sure there are spelling mistakes in their, as long with many, many other mistakes as well - I honestly never looked over it before submitted it, I'm lucky it was accepted. When the weekend comes, I'll go back and look over some things (as I don't want to bother my beta with something other than the other fanfic she agreed to beta) and fix it up this weekend. I've another story up, only one chapter so far, if you can check it out.

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 11/14/05 15:37
Chapter: Hope

Wow. thats all I can say. There isn't anything else to describe it. Hope your other fic gets up soon, I will most definately look for it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Actually, the first chapter to the other fic is up, and I've only one review. :(

Reviewer: Miss_Hermione_Weasley
Date: 11/11/05 9:42
Chapter: Hope

I think it's adorable and I absolutely love it. I was nearly crying myself; it was touching and heartwarming, and I can't wait for an update. Please continue with it, it's absolutely amazing. I feel as if I'm part of the characters, too.

Author's Response: Unfortunately, this is only a one-shot I wrote while waiting for my wonderful beta, Ron Weasley, to get done with the first chapter of another fic I'm writing. It isn't up yet, but it'll be up soon! Check it out if you get the chance when it gets up. ;)

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