im sitting here smiling and crying at the same time.. this is so good! i thought she was gone.. and harry dies?! :'( but still. this is great.
happy new year
y r people so mean, stop it.. why r u all hurting or killing mione.. i mean ive read loads of storries where harry or ron dies but they dont effect me so much... maybe its cause she reminds me of well... me great story thankyou oh thankyou for not killing her
-sniff- It's so cute!
the story was truly great but i thin that you should have shown what happend after made in another chapter ir another story
This is really good. I really like it coz I'm 100% a ron+hermione shipper
great but it dousn't seem like it should be over!
this story is amazing! not fluffy, but still romantic and extremely touching! i love it! great job. kudos, for sure
Wow. A real tear jerker! You have talent for conveying emotions, I really was sitting here with tears in my eyes. Keep writing!
YES! I KNEW SHE WOULD WAKE UP! *does happy dance* epilouge?
OMG!!!!!!!!! Please, I am BEGGING you, I AM ON MY KNEES FOR AN EPILOGUE AT LEAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please! I want more! You left us on a cliffie, and I di eon cliffies!!!!!!!!!
Wow, very stylistically written…nice work! Your transitions between POVs was decent, and not choppy. The ending was extremely effective. I actually thought that Hermione was going to die, but it was an unexpected kind of ending. You really managed to bring out some more of the emotional side of Ron without overdoing it and making him really angsty. I like that balance you created. All I can say is that it was beautifully written! Excellent!! 10/10
Oh my God! That was such a good fic! It was written so nicely, I almost cried! I honestly prefer fics that are tragic but have a more or less positive end! Really brilliant writing! (I'm not so dead prewitts sister by the way...) Please write more stories!
Oh, so sweet yet tragic. It was beautiful.
*Gasp and whimpers* she's alive! Oh, poor Ron, ; what a great friend. That was a great fic; you did an awesome job decribing Ron's pleas. Very nice.
I absolutely loved it! I almost cried when she started to wake up. Very, very good. Wonderful job.
Author's Response: I like a good fanfic that makes me cry, don't you? ^^,
oh my god. this is one of the best fics i've ever read, i'm serious. i love how you end it with "R-ron?" you're talented, i'm not kidding. have you written any other fics? 10/10!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, but this is the first time I've been on in ages because I was unable to get on due to - er, family problems, so none are updated. :( Thank you!!