Reviews For Dear Dumby
Reviewer: kat_rhr_gdgrl
Date: 09/08/06 18:27
Chapter: In The Face Of Adversity…


Author's Response: Feel thwarted by the power of the (fictional - in both sense of canon, the fact that this is all fictional, and it is also fictional in this story...) pimp cane...

Reviewer: Zacko Borni
Date: 09/08/06 18:25
Chapter: The Notice

Dear Dummy,
What the heck kind of a story is this?

Dear Zacko,
I great story, that's what kind!

Dear Dummy,
I couldn't agree more! But it still doesn't have any lemons or fishing or starwars or stories about Melony Mcscrew!

Dear Zacko,
Who the heck is Melony Mcscrew? Well, let me just say this; Mcscrew you! This story is the best thing that ever happened to MNFF! It doesn't need any of that stuff!

Deat Dummy,
I suppose your right!

Okay, why am a taliking to a Dummy when I could be talking to Oppungo?

Dear Oppungo,
Great story, can't wait to read mor of your storys!

Love, Zacko
Great story!

Author's Response: Dear Zacko,
Dumby and I appreciate your comments, and are very pleased that you have enjoyed it! I am also thrilled that you want to read more of my stories and encourage you to do so ;-p ! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 09/08/06 18:04
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

yay for the final chapter!!!! really good one by the way

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: Nerevar_Reborn
Date: 09/08/06 17:29
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

HAHAH!!! I love it!! Great story, and great ending!! def 5/5!! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Thespidermanblanket
Date: 09/08/06 16:49
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

I nearly laughed my self into a coma! I brilliant ending to a brilliant story!

Author's Response: Oh dear, please don't go into a coma! I'm really glad you thought the ending worthy of the story - I did enjoy writing it all, so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it all!

Reviewer: eviltwin2000
Date: 09/08/06 14:09
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

LOL!!!!!!!! That was soo funny! I loved it! You're a great writer. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! All of my stories (perhaps barring one) have humour in them, so I hope you'll enjoy them as much as you did this.

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 09/08/06 13:27
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

Hehhe, very funny. I'm sorry to see the ned but...:)

Author's Response: Thanks! I know, I'm quite sad to see it finish too, but there will be more humour, I promise you! And it's good to end on a high! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: prongs_potter_rulez
Date: 09/08/06 11:08
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

ha ha ha brilliant!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: hermionesgift
Date: 09/08/06 9:58
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

I love this story! It's really great!
(Do i get some of the blame too now? I am one of the readers and reviewers! Pwetty pwease?)

Author's Response: Thank you! *Giggles* Of course you may share the blame - there's plenty to go around! I'm glad you've enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 09/08/06 7:49
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

Oh, wow! Very funny! Ah, the wizarding world has been turned upside down due to Dear Dumby's "advice" ... *roars with laughter* Oh, and the dialogues never failed to crack me up. I can imagine the hard time the Furniture Warehouse is having trying to stop Voldy's crying and kick him out from their premises *chuckles*.

Thanks for all the amusement and enjoyment you gave us with this short story! It was an entertaining read.

I wish there was a little less OOCness, though. At least this isn't one of the cliche-bashing stories - I've read too many of those.

[/attempt at a meaningful review which should be more than a one-liner]

Author's Response: Thank you! *Giggles* I know, I did feel a bit sorry for Bob! I can't say I'd want to be delegated his job of shifting an emotionally wrecked Voldemort from the premices - but then I'd want him to stay even less! I know that some of the characters were a bit OoC at times, but I did try to keep them as close as possible to canon whilst keeping the story on the same track. owever, in my next humour story, (which will be coming!) I will definitely take that on board! I'm so thrilled that you've found yourself amused and that you've enjoyed that story - thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: ja1young
Date: 09/08/06 6:01
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

that was great. i liked the story the whole way through but the ending really rounded off nicely. great job! keep writing fanfics

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to be fairly conclusive - which is hard for me! So I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thought it ended well. I will definitely keep writing - I wouldn't be able to stop!

Reviewer: Silver_Quill
Date: 09/07/06 19:24
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

Hey Kiara! Just an update, and mainly because I'm bored out of my mind (you're always the first person I email when bored, and y'know, you just can't break a tradition like that) I saw like, a billiondy nominations for Dear Dumby. So rock on!

I just need to convince my friends to create accounts on the forums and nominate me xD

Well, thanks for losing the reast of your IQ by reading this.

I'm gonna go eat a taco now...

Author's Response: *Giggles* No, tradition must be upheld! Thank you - I'm so proud and thrilled that people are nominating Dear Dumby! Don't worry, I'm sure you'll get nominations based on the merit of your fics.

Reviewer: LunaTuna
Date: 09/07/06 19:16
Chapter: Dear Dumby - Issue 5

OMG this made me laugh so much! I love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Amanda_Potter
Date: 09/05/06 3:44
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

dear dummy,
I have this great storie I'm reading but I'm afraid it is coming to and end. Since this storie is so good I am going to check the athour's other storie. Also my life hero Steve Erwin died Sunday and I'm still not over it what should I do?


Author's Response: Dear Erwin_Fan,
The author is thrilled that you will read her other stories, and would love to know what you think of them. She hopes you will enjoy them as much as you do this. I am very sorry that your hero died, but maybe you could pay tribute to him somehow? Then you'll have had a chance to say goodbye, and can try to move on. Good luck!

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 09/04/06 17:29
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

its hereaaaaaaaaa its finally her
the last of them all.aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa the notice-part 2 wat kind of name is that?

Author's Response: Yup - the end! *sniff sniff* The Notice - Part 2 - that's what kind of a name! Don't you remember The Notice? (Chapter 1) You know - start as you mean to go on! Don't worry - it will all make (some kind of) sense soon!

Reviewer: Silver_Quill
Date: 09/02/06 20:35
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

Kiara! It's the last chapter. The end. The big end to the shebang. Er... not sure about the last one.


Let us all celebrate the happiness this story has given us, from a small smile to wetting ourselves in delight.

This story pwns, and it should win the humor quicksilver award!

Author's Response: *Giggles* Yup! I don't know, I kinda like that last one! Aw, thank you so much hun, you're so sweet! I would love it if this even got nominated in the Quicksilver awards, but there are loads of great humour stories out here, so I guess we'll just have to wait and see. But I'm ecstatic that you think it worthy! *Celebrates story happiness* *pwns!!* *Giggles*

Reviewer: LunaRoxDaRadishes
Date: 09/02/06 17:50
Chapter: The Notice - Part 2

Yay! First reviewer! I'm so happy! I'm going to my friends house today so I hope when I come back there will be a nice, new chappie waiting for me. Lol!

I'll be waiting!

Author's Response: Yay for first reviewer!! Especially of the *cue spooky music here* last ever chapter! I'm not sure when it will be up, but we'll probably have to give it a few more days, as I only submitted it yesterday! I look forward to hear your opinion when you read it!

Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 08/17/06 16:25
Chapter: Dear Dumby - Issue 5

Oh, sweetie, I'm cracking up!

I know you have about a bazillion reviews already, but I just had to pop in and tell you how much I liked this chapter - Poor Dumby...advice can backfire! I couldn't stop laughing.

Great Work!


Author's Response: Thanks Kasey! Reviews are always lovely, no matter how many I have! I know - I did feel bad for Dumby in this chapter! Things just didn't seem to be going his - or anyone elses, come to that! - way right now, does it?! And laughter is always excellent! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Silver_Quill
Date: 08/16/06 17:42
Chapter: Dear Dumby - Issue 5

Dude, you're almost at 600 reviews and, um... other cool stuff. Oh well, here's a piece of chocolate for being cool and being brave enoguh to stand up to the OHPFIA.

Author's Response: *Munches on chocolate* Thanks! *splits in half to share with Alexa andother nice reviewers* In other cool stuff, I'm going on holiday today! Speak to you soon!!

Reviewer: Scarlette
Date: 08/15/06 11:18
Chapter: Dear Dumby - Issue 5

I think this must be the craziest story I have ever read (Except the one about God, The Simpsons and Led Zeppelin).

Can't wait till next chapter is on (=

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it, even if it can get a bit crazy at times! I'll be on holiday for a bit, but hopefully I'll update soon after that!

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