Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/26/08 13:26
Chapter: The Show Ends

thats funny that ron had to take over for fred and george since they were begging for mercy. haha good story!!

Author's Response: That's the risk of pulling a sneaky prank instead of the usual in-your-face prank. Can you imagine what Bill & Phlegm would do to the twins?

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/26/08 13:17
Chapter: The Show Continues

i hope we see more of ginny!

Author's Response: Actually, I've been tempted to revise and expand this little piece. I've since fallen in love with some other characters; I just have to figure out how to speak in their voices. If I do, Ginny will have more to say and do.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/26/08 13:13
Chapter: The Show Begins

lol this is unlike anything i have ever read, but its quite funny!

Author's Response: The idea came, of course, from the old radio/tv show as I relate in the summary. I chose, since it is something being played over a wireless, to put it in a script format, to give the reader a feeling for how it would sound to a listener. The humor comes from the fact that Harry and his friends are people who like each other and know how to gently tease each other. Moldyshorts and his DEs are clueless, and therefore hysterical in their own right.

Reviewer: GinnyforHarry
Date: 12/02/07 18:13
Chapter: The Show Ends

I really liked this it was very funny!
Great ending very clever
you are brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks. It's hard to believe such a sweet comment came from someone who isn't one of my daughters!

Reviewer: GinnyforHarry
Date: 12/02/07 18:12
Chapter: The Show Ends

I really liked this it was very funny!
Great ending very clever
you are brilliant!

Reviewer: marauder_leo
Date: 01/16/07 8:55
Chapter: The Show Continues

U R A BLOODY GENIOUS!!!! harry's scar a horcrux!! i believe u have earned my respect as a reader, u r a great author and i hope u keep writing, im just like WOW, im speechless, THAT WAS a greatt storyy!!! good on you!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping to do a rewrite, adding Luna and a few others. I'm currently wrestling with some plot bunnies that want their own, long, action- and song-filled story.

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 09/03/06 19:17
Chapter: The Show Ends

He he! But where was Luna? And...I dunno, others. Like Trelawney.
Of course, you couldn't fit in everyone. Very good story.

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/20/06 14:31
Chapter: The Show Ends

Yay! Quidditch!

TOMROHT

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/20/06 14:24
Chapter: The Show Continues

Hmm...Extendable Ears in the honeymoon cottage...that's definitely something old Gred and Forge would find amusing...

TOMROHT

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/20/06 14:18
Chapter: The Show Begins

Interesting...I've never heard of "This is Your Life."

Ha ha...Myrtle!

TOMROHT

Reviewer: maysiriusrestinpeace
Date: 05/27/06 21:27
Chapter: The Show Ends

uhhh.....

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 05/25/06 7:35
Chapter: The Show Ends

Hmm. not too sure i liked the last part though. too serious. what did ginny whisper tyo harry? why would fred and george 5WANT to put extendable ears in the honeymoon cottage anyway5?!!!!

Author's Response: Well, Voldy's dead and Harry's finally free to make some dreams come true. Ginny was reminding him of their shared dream and, I believe, an award appropriate to the hero. As for Gred and Forge putting Extendable Ears in the honeymoon cottage -- What teenage boy wouldn't want to listen in on an older brother sweet-talking with his bride? The twins may be mature in many ways, but I can easily imagine them doing such a thoughtless thing and invading the honeymooners' privacy.

Reviewer: HarryForGinny
Date: 05/15/06 20:35
Chapter: The Show Ends

This is a great story. I really thought at first it would just be a comedy, but wraps the whole HP story up so well. Hope it isn't a spoiler! And i loved the ending with Ginny.

Reviewer: Book Worm
Date: 05/14/06 19:57
Chapter: The Show Ends

I haven't heard of this radio show, but after reading this I wish that I had. I love the little twist at the end, and I especially love Fred and George begging their mother, Bill and Fleur for mercy! Great work!

Reviewer: Rosey_Black
Date: 04/23/06 11:49
Chapter: The Show Ends

That. Was. So. Funny!!

Reviewer: weasley_wanna_be
Date: 03/14/06 16:51
Chapter: The Show Ends

It was good. It ended... interestingly. I loved the humor in your other chapters, but the way the ending is written doesn't work for me. Since, there is no way to stop a killing curse, to stop Harry's scar from hurting, or to find all the Horcruxes. I did like the ending line "Who's up for Quidditch?". That was nice. The ending just isn't working for me. Sorry. 6/10 weasley_wanna_be

Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like the final chapter as much as the first two... but I'm not JKR! On the other hand, just because JKR hasn't given her perspective on group spells, especially those done by a group united by love, that doesn't mean there can't be such a thing (which is part of the fun of fanfic!), or that such a spell can't stop a killing curse. Nor is there any reason (in fanfic) to believe a new potion can't stop Harry's scar from hurting, or that a new charm can't find all the Horcruxes.

Reviewer: weasley_wanna_be
Date: 03/14/06 16:41
Chapter: The Show Continues

It's me again! I forgot to mention in my last review that I love you made Fred and George the hosts. So funny. I thought the whole Extendable Ears thing was so funny. If I was them I would be furious! Classic Fred and George. Off to read your last chapter. 10/10 weasley_wanna_be

Reviewer: weasley_wanna_be
Date: 03/14/06 16:33
Chapter: The Show Begins

That was so funny! I loved when Hermione came in ("there was some appreciative male whistling"). It was very funny. I can't say there was anything bad about it. I loved Myrtle's bit. That would be so embaressing! Anway, off to read the other chapters of this amazingly funny fic! 10/10 weasley_wanna_be

Reviewer: Tinka Blinka
Date: 03/10/06 21:29
Chapter: The Show Ends

good, i liked the details...but it all ended, differently then i would have hoped. Really good though, simply fanatical (what does that mean anyways?) 10/10

Author's Response: Fanatical means "marked by excessive enthusiasm for and intense devotion to a cause or idea" and shares that meaning with fanatic and, in its short form, fan. We are ALL fantical about Hary or we wouldn't be here, right? As for hopes... I hope JKR won't kill off half of Harry's extended family before MoldyShorts and his DEs are wiped out. And that shows in this story -- Harry coming to his senses, calling on the teachers at Hogwarts to help him find the Horcruxes, find spells and potions to protect him and those he loves, and to lay a trap that protects Harry's family while using their united power to win. I wonder how far anyone has read the story before discovering it was all a trap?

Reviewer: songbook99
Date: 03/08/06 18:42
Chapter: The Show Ends

Marvelous! Simply marvelous! I could never envision a better way for the last battle to go. The Defendo Familia spell is brilliant. I love your explanation about how Harry went to the professors and, between them all, they figured out a way to protect everyone all at once. Also, the way you have Madam Pomfrey and Professors Lupin and Slughorn creating a potion to minimize the effects of the pain in Harry's scar is genius. Of course, the reason I really love this story is the way you weave the comic and the serious together, especially here at the end. I was a little shocked when the Death Eaters and Voldemort showed up, but I loved the fact that it was a trap set up by Harry and all of his loved ones. My only qualms with this chapter were some canon errors, such as the missing capitalization of 'p' in Patronus and the misspelling of Ollivander, which has two 'L's. Howeve, aside from that, this has been the best last battle fic I have read. Everything about this story was enjoyable because of the way you set everything up. This was definitely a job very well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words and the corrections. I'll be updating those spellings and capitalizations. I'm at a slight disadvantage since I only have the tapes with me on the road, where I do most of my writing, but I certainly will be using the lexicon to check on how to spell character names (and other things) from now on.

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