Reviewer: spilledpotion
Date: 12/20/07 12:22
Chapter: An Unseeing Eye

I love this story... =) It's fabulous; I wish there was more of it. The two chapters when Sirius becomes a dog and wakes up in Remus's bed are the best ever. S'marvelous!

Reviewer: RainbowSprite
Date: 08/06/07 3:34
Chapter: An Unseeing Eye

Thank you for such a wonderful look at my two favorite characters - I love that it started from the very beginning, where they met, and I love that it is not just about them making out, there are a variety of experiences between them. I will definitely start watching on LJ for more.

Couldn't be better - thank you for doing them justice.


Reviewer: RainbowSprite
Date: 08/06/07 3:16
Chapter: Can't Stop the Moonlight

I'd read this one before, separately (sorry for not reviewing then, wasn't registered yet) and I loved it - I love it again, it fits perfectly here

Reviewer: RainbowSprite
Date: 08/06/07 2:53
Chapter: Knowing that Most Important In Love

absolutely wonderful, sorry I didn't review sooner, but I didn't want to take the two minutes & stop reading.
I will be back once I've finished reading.

Reviewer: THE_wOrms
Date: 08/29/06 19:07
Chapter: Knowing that Most Important In Love

so cute and bubbly, makes me wanna burst! I love your story so far, this is sooooooo going on my favorites.

Please keep up the puppy squeeness!

Author's Response: Lol. I'm glad you're enjoying. The story continues on Slian Martreb's author page under the title 'The Wolfstar Epic' if you'd like to read more...

Reviewer: THE_wOrms
Date: 08/29/06 18:02
Chapter: Knowing that Most Important In Love

so cute and bubbly, makes me wanna burst! I love your story so far, this is sooooooo going on my favorites.

Please keep up the puppy squeeness!

Reviewer: Sirius_Lupin
Date: 07/13/06 15:59
Chapter: Is Not Only Doing But Knowing That It Is

I must say once again, wow. I am lost for words. I love the dual perspective in these last two chapters. They are both so cute and insecure and adorable. Also, I know this doesn't have anything to do with this chapter, but it reminded me of the part where Sirius said he wanted to inhale Remus. Chills and goosebumps, I must say, same goes for the last two chapters. You guys rock!

Author's Response:
Well then, I suppose you did enjoy it. :P

The line about Sirius wanting to inhale Remus could be one of my most favorite lines to have ever written actually. And it was these two chapters that actually started the entire thing, so many months ago. Remus's chapter came first, to be honest, and then I was curious to find out about it from Sirius's POV. And once I knew what happened after I just had to find out what had brough them there...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sirius_Lupin
Date: 07/13/06 14:25
Chapter: Knowing that Most Important In Love

OMG, I am finding it hard to breathe right now. This is sooo good. I have gone from trying everything possible to keep from laughing my head off to trying everything possible to keep my temperature down, lol. My coworkers probably think I'm insane right now. This is SUCH a great way to bring these two together. So suddenly and so heat of the moment, I think it may be THE best explanation of how they finally got together that I've ever read (and I've read quite a bit of them). This story is so great, please keep the chapters coming. I'm going to read the next chapter and I'M hoping it's as incredible as this one (although I'm sure it will be). I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!

Author's Response:
Apologies for the late response, I'd stopped checking for reviews here...

I'm so glad that you're enjoying this and that I've managed to hit every note I've tried with the humor and the romance and the angst and whatnot. It is a neve ending trial with those two...

I hope that you thought it was. For further chapters (in case you haven't found it) please check out Slian Martreb's author page, which is where the story continues under 'The Wolfstar Epic'

Thank you so much

Reviewer: Morgan Weasley
Date: 06/05/06 14:05
Chapter: An Unseeing Eye

this is a great story but it could do with some more romance in it! lol

Author's Response: If it was effeminate slash, possibly. And if they were older, definitely. But they're a bit young and not so effeminate to justify it. Some of Slian's own stuff is a bit more fluffy though, if that's what you're looking for. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: alphonse_elric
Date: 05/12/06 16:59
Chapter: An Unseeing Eye

a good story, but it needs finishing!!

Author's Response: It does, doesn't it?

Reviewer: kvall
Date: 05/07/06 7:11
Chapter: An Unseeing Eye

oh, this is SO beautiful. The four true friends. I would so much want to read more of this. Please...

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear you think so. I'm so sorry you've been waiting...

Reviewer: kvall
Date: 05/07/06 6:30
Chapter: I Sit at Your Side, Your Hand in Mine

Now thi is getting more interesting. I will read this all and I'm almost sure I'm going to enjoy it immensely.

Author's Response: Hee. You just want smut, don't you? *grin*

Reviewer: Jazz
Date: 04/30/06 10:38
Chapter: An Unseeing Eye

aww, what a nice chapter! kind of. more like the beginning and end. i like the way you're showing their "relationship"s diversity - fighting, etc, and the entire friendship with them all. that doesn't make sense. IT'S AWESOME!

Author's Response: Hee. Glad you're enjoying. So sorry for the late response. It's been a bit crazy. Info regarding updates coming soon....

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 04/29/06 23:00
Chapter: Is Not Only Doing But Knowing That It Is

Ive read much better stories, but this is rather interesting. The first chapter was the best in my opinion.
Please do a better one next time. Sorry for this bad review.

Author's Response:
Erm. The first chapter of the fic, or the first chapter of the quartet?
Do you have any suggestions for improving the fic?
And if you've read better, and you're personally labling this a 'bad review' why in the world did you read ten chapters of it, precisely?

Reviewer: Riddle
Date: 04/29/06 18:19
Chapter: An Unseeing Eye

I did'nt like this chapter. Not because is was badly written or anything(Because the writing is amazing) but because I don't like reading about James and Sirius bullying Snape.. I like Snape.. The argumet Remus and Sirius had reminded me of one i've had about bullying.. I liked the ending of the chapter though.. ^^

Author's Response: Honestly, I dont' like writing about it either (and it drives my beta insane) but it was a fact of their lives--canon scene no less-and it had to be addressed. And I like Snape too. (He's my third, and slightly shadowed, puppy. If you haven't read In The Eyes of Others by Vindictus Viridian you have been really missing out on an amazing fic.) You do realizes, though, that The Prank is coming up? And that more bullying of Snape is going to be coming up? Sorry.

Reviewer: Riddle
Date: 04/24/06 12:11
Chapter: Can't Stop the Moonlight

Wow.. Amazing chapter! I loved the poem (I usually don't like poems)..

Author's Response: I am flattered.

Reviewer: Jazz
Date: 04/22/06 17:58
Chapter: Can't Stop the Moonlight

holy bloody WOW!

i love it. all of it. especially the poem. abso-bloody-lutely brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Purplemage
Date: 04/20/06 6:17
Chapter: Can't Stop the Moonlight

The whole poem situation was really cute. We have to get in contact and see if I'll write a chapter or not, I would've done it sooner, but I've been really busy. Anyways, great story. You guys are doing a great job!

Author's Response: Hee. Glad you liked the poem. I was wondering what had happened to you actually; you can feel free to get in contact with me through the feedback form (if that still exists) or through PM's on the beta forums. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ladybats
Date: 04/17/06 13:47
Chapter: The Meeting

Wonderful story, so glad I found this.... looking forward to the updates.... keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Glad to have steered you over here. Updates come as fast as Alexis puts them through. (*hintgobugherhint*)

Reviewer: Xx__statictdreams
Date: 04/14/06 4:44
Chapter: Knowing that Most Important In Love

Yay! very nice!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!

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